for Impeccable Love4/26/2007 c2 Shinigami3414
Good story, but i must say this plot is overused, but you are able to add a nice twist to it! And for that Im happy to have found this story, hope you update soon!
Good story, but i must say this plot is overused, but you are able to add a nice twist to it! And for that Im happy to have found this story, hope you update soon!
2/25/2007 c2 
5Third Time's The Charm
I agree with Alex about slowing down. Adding more details (characters' emotions/view point maybe?... O.o)will make the story better. Well, can't wait to read the rest of your story. Update soon and have fun writing it. ^^
5Third Time's The CharmI agree with Alex about slowing down. Adding more details (characters' emotions/view point maybe?... O.o)will make the story better. Well, can't wait to read the rest of your story. Update soon and have fun writing it. ^^
2/7/2007 c2 1Zerole The Untamed
I still like all the possible Kira pairings but you really need to work on your grammar and the 'substance' of the story in a sense. As it is, basically one thing happens, then another, and it keeps continuing that way; slowing the pace of the story down and adding some detail would really help. Good luck on the next chapter.
1Zerole The UntamedI still like all the possible Kira pairings but you really need to work on your grammar and the 'substance' of the story in a sense. As it is, basically one thing happens, then another, and it keeps continuing that way; slowing the pace of the story down and adding some detail would really help. Good luck on the next chapter.
2/6/2007 c2 32cyberdemon
Gundam Seed Ave? Not up to think of names? Don't blame you though. LOL! Update soon.
32cyberdemonGundam Seed Ave? Not up to think of names? Don't blame you though. LOL! Update soon.
2/6/2007 c1 1Zerole The Untamed
Your grammar could use some work but I'm really looking forward to seeing this story progress. This could be my overwhelming hope delluding me but I'm seeing hints of a Kira harem? That would be great! I love the KC, KL, KStellar, and KF pairings (KC especially) although I have nothing against KM. In any case, I'll be satisfied with any of the above pairings as long Athrun, Yzak, or Shinn aren't paired with anyone (DM is bearable). ^^' Good luck on the next chapter; I hope it'll be a little longer.
1Zerole The UntamedYour grammar could use some work but I'm really looking forward to seeing this story progress. This could be my overwhelming hope delluding me but I'm seeing hints of a Kira harem? That would be great! I love the KC, KL, KStellar, and KF pairings (KC especially) although I have nothing against KM. In any case, I'll be satisfied with any of the above pairings as long Athrun, Yzak, or Shinn aren't paired with anyone (DM is bearable). ^^' Good luck on the next chapter; I hope it'll be a little longer.
2/5/2007 c1 32cyberdemon
looks pretty good. Poor Lacus having to go through all of this. I know that Kira will be able to help her though. Update soon.
32cyberdemonlooks pretty good. Poor Lacus having to go through all of this. I know that Kira will be able to help her though. Update soon.