for Sleeping Beauty Sakura9/30/2012 c9 moonprincess
you should continue the story. i love it. its a beautifull peice of work.
you should continue the story. i love it. its a beautifull peice of work.
8/10/2011 c9 
1arabella15
well this is pretty good but I really wish you would have described the appearance of the characters in a bit more detail also the plot was very rushed from one event to another. But please I hope you take this critisim in the best of ways and use it to improve your stories. Nice story and please continue to write.
1arabella15well this is pretty good but I really wish you would have described the appearance of the characters in a bit more detail also the plot was very rushed from one event to another. But please I hope you take this critisim in the best of ways and use it to improve your stories. Nice story and please continue to write.
7/22/2011 c9 James Birdsong
Splendid and perfect.
Splendid and perfect.
7/21/2011 c9 12pockybear2323
ok... first thing's first, WHAT ARE YOU DOING? i was at chapter nine reading and then you just leave me on a cliffhanger with the princeasking what to do, and i was so looking forward to the part where syaorangoes and kicks the monsters butt! don't leave me hanging here! i totally love your story!
p.s: sorry for all the grammar mistakes, im typing on a kindle.
12pockybear2323ok... first thing's first, WHAT ARE YOU DOING? i was at chapter nine reading and then you just leave me on a cliffhanger with the princeasking what to do, and i was so looking forward to the part where syaorangoes and kicks the monsters butt! don't leave me hanging here! i totally love your story!
p.s: sorry for all the grammar mistakes, im typing on a kindle.
5/27/2010 c9 1DN Angel and Cardcaptor Sakura
I hope Shaoran save Sakura in time, please put the next chapter up
1DN Angel and Cardcaptor SakuraI hope Shaoran save Sakura in time, please put the next chapter up
6/6/2008 c2 14japaneserockergirl
Well...that was a bit...awkward flowing, if you get what I mean. Jumping from calm to chaotic can really throw one off (well, it throws me off, don't know about other people) and you kinda need a pinch more of description. Other than that, it was pretty good.
^.^
14japaneserockergirlWell...that was a bit...awkward flowing, if you get what I mean. Jumping from calm to chaotic can really throw one off (well, it throws me off, don't know about other people) and you kinda need a pinch more of description. Other than that, it was pretty good.
^.^
9/20/2007 c9 3goddess-chan123
ive read every last bit of this story and yet i think im missing something... ouch my head hurts... thinkings 2 hard!
3goddess-chan123ive read every last bit of this story and yet i think im missing something... ouch my head hurts... thinkings 2 hard!
9/13/2007 c9 8TamoumatheStarWarrior
Silly me I almost forgot to review! I'm sorry! *bows low* Please forgive me!
Anyways, I just wanted to say that I liked the short chappie and I am looking d=forward to the next one. Now I have to go back and reread some 'cause I'm dense sometimes and forget. Again, Gomen.
I will talk to you soon. Until then, ja!
Tam~chan
8TamoumatheStarWarriorSilly me I almost forgot to review! I'm sorry! *bows low* Please forgive me!
Anyways, I just wanted to say that I liked the short chappie and I am looking d=forward to the next one. Now I have to go back and reread some 'cause I'm dense sometimes and forget. Again, Gomen.
I will talk to you soon. Until then, ja!
Tam~chan
9/13/2007 c9 2AngelEmCuti
yay u updated again im so happy! awsome chapter, i love it great job, please update^^
2AngelEmCutiyay u updated again im so happy! awsome chapter, i love it great job, please update^^
8/1/2007 c8 8TamoumatheStarWarrior
*starts to bow franticly* Gomen! I didn't get the update until today! Gomen! I had to play catch up, but I am now caught up and I love the latest chapter. I think you should have more reviews, but hey, that's my opinion. ^_^. I will watch out for the next chapter! Until then, ja!
Tam~chan
8TamoumatheStarWarrior*starts to bow franticly* Gomen! I didn't get the update until today! Gomen! I had to play catch up, but I am now caught up and I love the latest chapter. I think you should have more reviews, but hey, that's my opinion. ^_^. I will watch out for the next chapter! Until then, ja!
Tam~chan