for Angels Of Heaven And Earth9/12/2007 c4 aeletha
I think that I have reviewed this on sd-1 but since I read this chapter here I will review here.
I do like this story and I am impressed by the way that Sark is portrayed here. In this chapter he seems to be getting "back to normal," at least trying to move on. But he is so deeply damaged it is going to be a long process to return to some kind of reality. Even though he has had all of that training he cannot compartmentalize everything.
Syd's reaction to this is interesting. I think she is more affected than she wants to admit. The way that she is asking about Lauren is very telling in that she is curious about his feelings for her and yet finds it hard to believe that he did not have any feelings for her.
Thank you for continuing, I look forward to the next update.
I think that I have reviewed this on sd-1 but since I read this chapter here I will review here.
I do like this story and I am impressed by the way that Sark is portrayed here. In this chapter he seems to be getting "back to normal," at least trying to move on. But he is so deeply damaged it is going to be a long process to return to some kind of reality. Even though he has had all of that training he cannot compartmentalize everything.
Syd's reaction to this is interesting. I think she is more affected than she wants to admit. The way that she is asking about Lauren is very telling in that she is curious about his feelings for her and yet finds it hard to believe that he did not have any feelings for her.
Thank you for continuing, I look forward to the next update.
3/12/2007 c3 wildroeschen
I'm astonished to be the only one to review on this board until (be patient more reviews will come). Of course this is different from other fics but that makes sense. The essentials are in it...
I'll continue to review though I read this on sd-1 too. Will you continue to post there too? I'm not very happy that it's no more possible to see how many people are reading old stories but I regularly look there and there are some new names so the section is not dead, the updating not hopeless.
Rereading this I'm once more impressed and found more details I perhaps missed the first time. It really goes very deep into Sark's psyche and Sydney thought about him.
Hopefully until soon.
I'm astonished to be the only one to review on this board until (be patient more reviews will come). Of course this is different from other fics but that makes sense. The essentials are in it...
I'll continue to review though I read this on sd-1 too. Will you continue to post there too? I'm not very happy that it's no more possible to see how many people are reading old stories but I regularly look there and there are some new names so the section is not dead, the updating not hopeless.
Rereading this I'm once more impressed and found more details I perhaps missed the first time. It really goes very deep into Sark's psyche and Sydney thought about him.
Hopefully until soon.
2/12/2007 c1 wildroeschen
Short but the lyrics tell a lot.
After reading your short one-parters I feel like you're writing dark fics. But I ponder this one is dark at first and there will come some light at the end Sark's darkness (I read your second part where he is crying very hard of course and I think that's something he needs and comforted by Sydney of all people both never expected this I'm sure).
Short but the lyrics tell a lot.
After reading your short one-parters I feel like you're writing dark fics. But I ponder this one is dark at first and there will come some light at the end Sark's darkness (I read your second part where he is crying very hard of course and I think that's something he needs and comforted by Sydney of all people both never expected this I'm sure).