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6/3 c34 3Asian Tinkerbell
Nioooo! Its so good! Its been a little more than a year since your last update, please update!
4/14 c34 jdsguitarguy
I really hope you continue this because this story is so amazing and I really want to read the rest of it!
4/14 c1 jdsguitarguy
Are you ever going to update this story? I have read it in its entirety 4 times now and really want this to continue. Your writing is amazing and I cant wait to see where this story goes!
3/12 c10 Saphyra Tyra Tygeru
i love this story.
11/11/2012 c34 18CharminglyShar
this chapter was amazing just like this story. i coudlnt tare my eyes from ot. i honestly wished it never ended. i hope you put up a new chapter very soon. i am dying to see more. I cant wait to find out what is wrong with Sharpay and i do hope Ryan comes around and is there for Sharpay like a brother should. i get hes protecting her but he needs to be on her side. cant wait for more
11/9/2012 c31 CharminglyShar
this was fantastic. i enjoyed it and cant wait to read on as soon as i get the time to do so. awsome job.
7/21/2012 c34 3xxEnjoninexx
I just saw this and I'm very happy that you continued this story! This is one of my favorite story and I'm glad that there are new chapters. I've been waiting for this. Thank you, thank you so much. I hope you'll update again soon. Can't wait to read more!
7/11/2012 c28 1BOTDFLUVD
Alright, so I've became COMPLETELY obessed with this. I read them all in one night, which flew by WAY too fast. I love the way you have the characters developed, but I honestly HATE Dan. Not going to lie,but you reallllllllllyy need to update this. PLEASE(:
Your fan,
-BOTDFLUVD
-hannah.
P.s. Please don't put this at a end of a chapter, lol.(:
6/23/2012 c3 35Lilly Tagloft
I'm honestly not sure how I feel about this chapter... I was anxious for the detention part, but I didn't think it would quite go like that. I figured something would happen, but nothing that explosive. In this story Troy is a thousand times more aggressive than I'm used to. The fact that he was able to kiss her even though she was clawing at him just showed how much strength he had compared to her. In a situation like that where there's no teacher or adult nearby horrible things could have happened. She told him stop and he didn't. She clawed at his face and slapped at him and he didn't even hesitate. I don't know exactly what was driving him, but there's a point where guys just have to stop.

Sorry I kind of went on a rant there, but I just get worried by somethings and I've watched too much Law & Order: SVU lately. Another thing I was slightly miffed about was her sudden bleeding and faintness. If she has some kind of chronic disease I don't think getting wasted every other weekend would be the best choice :P But I'll see how it all pans outs.

xx Lilly
6/23/2012 c2 Lilly Tagloft
I wonder what Troy was writing about while staring at Sharpay, hee hee.

There's not a whole lot to write about this chapter. It was a nice bridger and I'm just waiting for the detention to roll around, haha. It was cool how you threw in the whole Gabriella part and it should be interesting to see how she would react to hearing about Troy and Sharpay's scandalous night. It sounds like she's slowing losing everything social because of her boasting and 'perfect' personality. I wonder who she would be left with when Troy eventually leaves her (saying that he does). Just some stuff I was pondering...

xx Lilly.
6/23/2012 c1 Lilly Tagloft
I have the song "Collide" on my iPod. I listen to it when I'm all mellow-y and can just sink into the music. It's such a beautiful song and it was a nice opening to such a disastrous morning, lol. Poor Sharpay, maybe one of these days she'll be able to wake up on her own :P

I'm highly interested to see where this whole Troy/Sharpay debacles goes. I thought it was cool that they were able to banter and flirt so early on and still retain that frenemies vibe. Then Troy got super cocky and mentioned last night I got this like "Oh shit-" type of reaction and then when Sharpay was like "What? D:" my stomach just plummeted. Especially when he was looking at the ground - that just broke my heart a little bit. At least he'll be able to tell her at least some things later on in detention. Yay.

xx Lilly
6/7/2012 c34 8AnimeRoxx
Great story so far! Troypay is such an adorable couple. Keep up the great work :D
5/29/2012 c34 Delena1101
OMG,you can't imagine how happy I feel when I saw the update..I just check the Troypay fic,and wow,the update appears...BTW,I just adore Quinn in Glee,and I think she deserve more songs and definately Sam...
5/27/2012 c34 2TheDude47
Loved it. Its been a while since I got on FF life and all that lol, but lo and behold as soon as I come on there's your story. Its been a while since you updated , but this story is still strong and booming. Hopefully you keep up this great work and continue cause this story is amazing.
5/21/2012 c34 12xGuiltyxPleasure
Yay! I'm so glad you're back! Fanfiction desperately still needs a few great Troypay fics and I'm glad you're still contributing.

This chapter is super long (yay) and in order to make sure I don't forget all of my favorite parts I'm starting my review at the beginning of the chapter. So here goes:

Girls being bitchy to Sharpay? That made ME mad and I wanted the ability to turn around and snap at them. I feel super defensive on her part when I read this story and I think I've decided that it's because she's still in high school. It's been forever since I've written a fic about a teenage Troy and Sharpay and a large majority of the Troypays currently being published also feature them as adults so when I do go back to thinking of her as a teenage girl it makes me that much sadder for her. She's lonely, misunderstood, and has a good heart underneath it all.

But she has Troy now, so I'll hop off that tangent, hahah. I loved the line, "Without Troy by her side, she felt utterly naked and exposed."

The love making in the school's supply closet. I always love 'can't keep my hands off of you for one more second so I'm going to have to take you now' scenarios. Just the concept sets me off. Loved it.

Stupid Gabriella with the fucking box of memories. She's a pathetic obsessive stalker. I mean if Troy wasn't already completely turned off to her, all of this would surely do it for good.

"And she couldn't help the creeping feeling that this happiness with the one boy she truly loved would no doubt be snatched away before she knew it." You're freaking me out here. I don't want that to be foreshadowing for the future. I desperately hope Troy doesn't screw up.

And then the attack... timeline? When do we finally find out what exactly Sharpay has? I'm guessing it's not cancer since she's in charge of administering her own medication rather than going to chemo treatments?

Hopefully Sharpay's happy about the relationship status on facebook, although that's really trivial I suppose. Hahah.

Oh Dan Patch... he doesn't intend to screw things up and they have an adorable friendship... I just hope that good intentions don't pave the road to hell in this case.

Oh, and, yes, Troy Bolton should definitely be a mail order boyfriend or something. Hahahah.

Great job. Hopefully the next update doesn't take months? ;)

xoxo.
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