for Shade Run12/27/2007 c23 Zephera Sentari
It's been to long...can't wait until there is more to read from The Great Jaynesdingleberries!
*Bows to greatness*
It's been to long...can't wait until there is more to read from The Great Jaynesdingleberries!
*Bows to greatness*
12/24/2007 c23 Pheonix Eternia
You always give such a neat portrayal of their minds, without actually labeling everything. It's refreshing. On a side note, shouldn't the air system of the ship be moving carbon dioxide, not monoxide?
You always give such a neat portrayal of their minds, without actually labeling everything. It's refreshing. On a side note, shouldn't the air system of the ship be moving carbon dioxide, not monoxide?
12/22/2007 c23 debbieja
It's good that Shade decided to listen to River and not try to escape. I wonder what River is going to be able to work out.
It's good that Shade decided to listen to River and not try to escape. I wonder what River is going to be able to work out.
10/25/2007 c22 Riddick Fan
Very well written. Didn't expect the plot to be this interesting. Hope that Shade will be okey. as well as Zoe and her baby. just a guess, Shade will eventually be a member of the crew?
Please update soon.
Very well written. Didn't expect the plot to be this interesting. Hope that Shade will be okey. as well as Zoe and her baby. just a guess, Shade will eventually be a member of the crew?
Please update soon.
8/20/2007 c2 
25Hazgarn
Wow. I don't usually comment on a story until I get to the last updated chapter, but I -really- have to say this one impressed me.
25HazgarnWow. I don't usually comment on a story until I get to the last updated chapter, but I -really- have to say this one impressed me.
7/9/2007 c3 15PencilGuardian
Oh no...Jayne, the valiant protector of moonbrain purity? I'm a mite concerned...for Jayne.
15PencilGuardianOh no...Jayne, the valiant protector of moonbrain purity? I'm a mite concerned...for Jayne.