for First Impressions12/23/2007 c1 Greenflower
Hilarious and intriguing. I loved the characterizations and all the possibilities this fic raised. It deserves more love!
Hilarious and intriguing. I loved the characterizations and all the possibilities this fic raised. It deserves more love!
3/13/2007 c1 
3Oriana8
Now see, this seems like a really good start to the whole rest of the story. :) For instance, who were the other two/three on the list and why was this list given to him by his mother, of all people? What was Jack really looking for? A place on a boat, his true father, perhaps? It's all very intriguing. I never really thought the two men were so different in age, but you paint them as decades apart. I like that. If you don't continue with the other J/B/W/E/W/N/DJ story then maybe you might consider picking this up? Just a suggestion. :) Smile!
3Oriana8Now see, this seems like a really good start to the whole rest of the story. :) For instance, who were the other two/three on the list and why was this list given to him by his mother, of all people? What was Jack really looking for? A place on a boat, his true father, perhaps? It's all very intriguing. I never really thought the two men were so different in age, but you paint them as decades apart. I like that. If you don't continue with the other J/B/W/E/W/N/DJ story then maybe you might consider picking this up? Just a suggestion. :) Smile!
3/7/2007 c1 2soupkitchen
Intriguing. A different and very original sort of storyline. Not quite the relationship one expects to find between the two, but very well done.
I quite liked it.
Keep writing. soupie ~.^
2soupkitchenIntriguing. A different and very original sort of storyline. Not quite the relationship one expects to find between the two, but very well done.
I quite liked it.
Keep writing. soupie ~.^
3/6/2007 c1 3a-k-a-amber
interesting theory...
I like barbossa so I atuomatically like this story I think it could turn into something interesting if you should want to continue...
anyway i liked the monkey that was cute :D
-Amber
3a-k-a-amberinteresting theory...
I like barbossa so I atuomatically like this story I think it could turn into something interesting if you should want to continue...
anyway i liked the monkey that was cute :D
-Amber
3/6/2007 c1 Griff57
Emma3, is that you? This is cute - Barbossa and his pets! Unusual Jack/Barbossa interaction in the distant past...
Emma3, is that you? This is cute - Barbossa and his pets! Unusual Jack/Barbossa interaction in the distant past...