12/1/2008 c3 Yuti-Chan
Great chapter!

12/1/2008 c1 Yuti-Chan
Great first chappy ^^

7/24/2008 c4 19Saturn's Spawn
Geeze, even when Sesshoumaru's being nice, he's still a jerk. I wonder how Inutaisho's going to react to his daughter-in-law.

Hotaru: Aren't you rushing things? He still calls me Onna. And this is only the fourth chapter!

Saturn's Spawn: Don't worry. Fluffy will come around. He just needs to get over his astronomically monsterous ego first. Then, he'll admit he's fallen madly in love with you, you two will get married, and everyone will live happily ever after.

Shadow: She's on something.

Saturn's Spawn (pouts): Anyways, awesome chapter. love the end. And, I did post a Hotaru/L one shot. I know, it took me forever... -_-'

12/21/2007 c1 1Demon Larkham
Well this is interesting, it would appear that you've deleted my review. Well then, now that I have an actual account, please, by all means, do so once again. Now, allow me to once again give my point of view and share with you some constructive criticism. No, this is not flaming. There is a key difference between posting a flame and posting criticism.

Now, first and foremost, lack of detail. How does Meghan cover her face, why was there a fight between her and that other person, sure you did many of the descriptions well, but still, that doesn't mean that you should quite half-way. Writing stories is about "unleashing your imagination", is it not? When you "unleash your imagination", it's all about two words.

Consistent Inconsistencies.

I'll allow you to go over that on your own. Next, is those failed attempts at cuteness, the spelling errors and the grammar errors. Please, at the very least make it appear that you have looked over the story several times over, proof reading is your friend, it is your ally so that things like that won't happen. I highly suggest taking your time to read over your work, but congratulations on keeping them to a "minimum".

Afterwards, the author's notes are highly irritating. It usually disrupts the entire mood of the story by gibberish from the author in what appears to be something copied and pasted directly from an Instant Message. I have come here to read a story, not about what the author is thinking at that point of time. If one wishes to leave a commentary, I suggest doing so in a more literate format and at the very end of your story, perhaps even label it "Author's Notes", to look a bit more professional.

I would also like to suggest more of a paragraph format. It started rather nice at the beginning, but then it seemed to have slowly eroded into what appeared to be a instant message chat. Painful.

Well, I hope this has been helpful. More power to you, fellow author.

~Demon

11/26/2007 c3 45Angel-eyes56
Sesshomaru you don't win a girl's heart by kidnapping her. And you don't earn her family support either. Oh boy I wonder how Rei going to react to this? I really dislike Sumomo how can anyone be mean to Hotaru? I liked this chapter and look foward to seeing what happens next.

11/4/2007 c2 Saturn's Spawn
YAy! An update! (I really should work on those) I love Meghan. One of my favorite OC's. Hm, I wonder is she's going to kick that princess a- or if Kikyou's just going to purify that demon in disguise. Well, whatever you decide, I'll be ok with that. I wonder how long it's going to take for Sesshoumaru to get over his "Yes, it's me so bow down to my awesomeness" attitude.

10/6/2007 c2 35Sailor Ra
(Sweat drop)

Vegeat: SESSHOMARU!

Me: Leave him alone Vegeta.

VEgeta: Like hell! You keep pairing my daughter up with wackos.

Me: I liked the chapter and good luck catching Soubi. Your going to need it.