for Breakable12/25/2011 c1 Suzanne
That was really good angst, really well expressed-
I also liked the expression with the fine crack in the china beginning to show.
That was really good angst, really well expressed-
I also liked the expression with the fine crack in the china beginning to show.
6/19/2011 c1 SailorMeowMeow
Wooow... I never had a problem with Sully at first, but since I've read this, I don't think I'll be able to watch a rerun of that episode with the alligator and Booth's coulrophobia (you know the one) with out thinking about Sully combusting into flames...grrr...
nice read, finally get to hear Booth's say on the relationship, well I could dream, can't I.
Wooow... I never had a problem with Sully at first, but since I've read this, I don't think I'll be able to watch a rerun of that episode with the alligator and Booth's coulrophobia (you know the one) with out thinking about Sully combusting into flames...grrr...
nice read, finally get to hear Booth's say on the relationship, well I could dream, can't I.
3/25/2011 c1 
18Lust.Is.Evanescent
I love the angst in this story real good and the whole character definition, real good, although the 2nd chapter kkinda made Booth look like he was a love sick puppy, wanting and craving attention from Bones, but still nice story.
18Lust.Is.EvanescentI love the angst in this story real good and the whole character definition, real good, although the 2nd chapter kkinda made Booth look like he was a love sick puppy, wanting and craving attention from Bones, but still nice story.
5/2/2010 c1 8anthropologist
I loved this very much. I think it stands out nicely among all the other stories, and you chose a beautiful song to help illustrate the story's message. You wrote Booth's vulnerability and insight extremely well, and I hope to see more Bones stories from you soon.
8anthropologistI loved this very much. I think it stands out nicely among all the other stories, and you chose a beautiful song to help illustrate the story's message. You wrote Booth's vulnerability and insight extremely well, and I hope to see more Bones stories from you soon.
8/12/2009 c1 Kriti
that was really well written...god poor booth!...i personally wud love some more after this..perhaps another chapter or a sequal...maybe for bones to notice that its one of those times that booth needs a sholder n she needs to go to him...but this was a gud read!great job!
that was really well written...god poor booth!...i personally wud love some more after this..perhaps another chapter or a sequal...maybe for bones to notice that its one of those times that booth needs a sholder n she needs to go to him...but this was a gud read!great job!
4/9/2009 c1 7Talise Lovela
Very nice- I loved the fact that Booth missed it when Bones was looking for someone *cough* Booth *cough cough*
Good job!
7Talise LovelaVery nice- I loved the fact that Booth missed it when Bones was looking for someone *cough* Booth *cough cough*
Good job!
1/14/2009 c1 Kriti
beautifully written but i personally would love a sequal or some continuation...i need closure..for myself and for booth...but this was very very well written.its always brennan who's shown in an imotionally fragile state,it was refreshing to have an insight on booth,however angsty it may be.do consider writing more of this pl.!
beautifully written but i personally would love a sequal or some continuation...i need closure..for myself and for booth...but this was very very well written.its always brennan who's shown in an imotionally fragile state,it was refreshing to have an insight on booth,however angsty it may be.do consider writing more of this pl.!
9/13/2008 c1 35Thnx4theGum
I really liked this. The term hauntingly beautiful comes to mind. Always thought her dating Sully affected him more than he let up.
35Thnx4theGumI really liked this. The term hauntingly beautiful comes to mind. Always thought her dating Sully affected him more than he let up.
8/31/2008 c1 9Bone Dry
WOW!
That was incredible...You're writing was so perfect. Perfect imagery, and a perfect amount of dialogue. Excellent, excellent job.
LOVED that.
Fantastic.
Incredible.
Beautiful.
Enough adjectives, maybe? I'll stop gushing.
I am very impressed.
9Bone DryWOW!
That was incredible...You're writing was so perfect. Perfect imagery, and a perfect amount of dialogue. Excellent, excellent job.
LOVED that.
Fantastic.
Incredible.
Beautiful.
Enough adjectives, maybe? I'll stop gushing.
I am very impressed.
6/26/2007 c1 41beaglelvr93
aw. that was sad. YES TO A PART 2 AND CAL MUSIE BACK! i want you to fix it please... loved it, sad and dark but oddly satisfying...
41beaglelvr93aw. that was sad. YES TO A PART 2 AND CAL MUSIE BACK! i want you to fix it please... loved it, sad and dark but oddly satisfying...
3/26/2007 c1 2dudiwuda
I absolutely adore your writing style! The most fantastic thing that you maintain characters so realistic! It's the most important thing in fic for me :)
Yeah, I know, this whole thing is FICTION, but still, I'm more enjoying fics like tags or missing scenes to the eps, or kind of new episode entirely :)
Also,I think you have an excellent feel of Booth and Brennan characters,and it makes reading so natural, like actually watching continuation of the ep :)
So, you should definitely write more!*smiles broadly*
Ohh, and "Pitch Black" was one of a few my favorite movies *grins*
2dudiwudaI absolutely adore your writing style! The most fantastic thing that you maintain characters so realistic! It's the most important thing in fic for me :)
Yeah, I know, this whole thing is FICTION, but still, I'm more enjoying fics like tags or missing scenes to the eps, or kind of new episode entirely :)
Also,I think you have an excellent feel of Booth and Brennan characters,and it makes reading so natural, like actually watching continuation of the ep :)
So, you should definitely write more!*smiles broadly*
Ohh, and "Pitch Black" was one of a few my favorite movies *grins*
3/25/2007 c1 24bredalot
Very, very pretty. I like it just how it is (no sequel), but hey, that's up to you. I am also having images of Booth going at a punching bag drop-dead drunk. It's really quite entertaining. :D
There are little things that really ought to bother me (like the misspelling of Epps's name), but honestly, they don't, and that means a LOT to someone like me. This is rather dark, but it's very powerful and still pretty, somehow. I'm not sure I want a sequel, but if you write it, I will read it. Really, nice job!
24bredalotVery, very pretty. I like it just how it is (no sequel), but hey, that's up to you. I am also having images of Booth going at a punching bag drop-dead drunk. It's really quite entertaining. :D
There are little things that really ought to bother me (like the misspelling of Epps's name), but honestly, they don't, and that means a LOT to someone like me. This is rather dark, but it's very powerful and still pretty, somehow. I'm not sure I want a sequel, but if you write it, I will read it. Really, nice job!
3/25/2007 c1 RHSecretLove
i absolutely loved it, i enjoy dark and twisty from time to time, poor Booth he def. has to know that Brennen really cares for him more esp. since she didn't leave with stupid Sully (thank god hes gone). I really liked this story esp. the end when Breenen was looking for him, very cute! def. update very soon!
i absolutely loved it, i enjoy dark and twisty from time to time, poor Booth he def. has to know that Brennen really cares for him more esp. since she didn't leave with stupid Sully (thank god hes gone). I really liked this story esp. the end when Breenen was looking for him, very cute! def. update very soon!
3/23/2007 c1 squinter
I like dark and twisty! Dark and twisty is interesting. Your story is good and you write Booth perfectly. Please continue!
I like dark and twisty! Dark and twisty is interesting. Your story is good and you write Booth perfectly. Please continue!