for Evolution6/12 c22 The arithmancer
I love how this is written from the adults perspective, hope that you return from real life one day to complete this.
I love how this is written from the adults perspective, hope that you return from real life one day to complete this.
6/9 c11 ThisIsTheOnlyNameICouldPick
'No, it wasn't. If term were in session, I'd dock points, little lion.'
:3 Is this a little cute nickname I see? It seems Severus is turning into a soft hopeless git! :D
'No, it wasn't. If term were in session, I'd dock points, little lion.'
:3 Is this a little cute nickname I see? It seems Severus is turning into a soft hopeless git! :D
6/6 c22 ecg
Is this abandon? A pity readers are left hanging.
Is this abandon? A pity readers are left hanging.
5/21 c7 ThisIsTheOnlyNameICouldPick
He gave her a sardonic smile. "From my mother," he said. When his colleagues grinned, Severus changed the subject brusquely. "Now, I think we'd best discuss how we're going to handle the Headmaster." Do you think you could expand/explain this please? Severus' childhood is normally abusive when it comes to fics, are you hinting at this or something else? Bit confused. :s
He gave her a sardonic smile. "From my mother," he said. When his colleagues grinned, Severus changed the subject brusquely. "Now, I think we'd best discuss how we're going to handle the Headmaster." Do you think you could expand/explain this please? Severus' childhood is normally abusive when it comes to fics, are you hinting at this or something else? Bit confused. :s
5/18 c6 mysinger
Fantastic chapter! Poor Harry. I hope that Flitwick and Severus get to carry out their return visit to the Dursleys. I wonder if Dumbledore will still try to send Harry back? I really don't like him. The most charitable view of his actions is that he is going senile. Harry is clearly just a weapon in Dumbledore's eyes. You really know how to amp up the suspense and draw your readers into the story. Well done!
Fantastic chapter! Poor Harry. I hope that Flitwick and Severus get to carry out their return visit to the Dursleys. I wonder if Dumbledore will still try to send Harry back? I really don't like him. The most charitable view of his actions is that he is going senile. Harry is clearly just a weapon in Dumbledore's eyes. You really know how to amp up the suspense and draw your readers into the story. Well done!
5/18 c22 joejonaswife101
were you going to finish this story? or did you let some one else take over it? its really good. thaanks for writing. :)
were you going to finish this story? or did you let some one else take over it? its really good. thaanks for writing. :)
5/12 c22 Chantilly's Mom
I don't know if you look at this site any more but I hope you do. You have written a wonderfully in depth characterization of the Snape/Harry relationship and when you left off you were just getting to the meat of the story. I hope RL allows you to complete this wonderful series one day. Thank you very much.
I don't know if you look at this site any more but I hope you do. You have written a wonderfully in depth characterization of the Snape/Harry relationship and when you left off you were just getting to the meat of the story. I hope RL allows you to complete this wonderful series one day. Thank you very much.
4/15 c22 
24Rosajean
Pretty please continue! This is such a great story and I'm enjoying it immensely!
24RosajeanPretty please continue! This is such a great story and I'm enjoying it immensely!
4/14 c22 1d1x1lady
I love your writing. You craft such fascinating stories. I can't wait to read more of your work!
1d1x1ladyI love your writing. You craft such fascinating stories. I can't wait to read more of your work!
3/19 c22 Dumbledorehater
Love this :) I think Harry might have adapted too well to not getting beaten up anymore tho ,... Wouldn't it leave a lasting effect ? Snape is sooo amazing in this ! Can't wait to see how things r in school
Love this :) I think Harry might have adapted too well to not getting beaten up anymore tho ,... Wouldn't it leave a lasting effect ? Snape is sooo amazing in this ! Can't wait to see how things r in school
3/11 c22 6tatis
Hello.
I wanted to know if you will continue the Fic.
It's great.
It makes me sad to think that you will keep it.
6tatisHello.
I wanted to know if you will continue the Fic.
It's great.
It makes me sad to think that you will keep it.
3/7 c21 sarahsezlove
I just had to come back to reread both your fics.
I really hope you decide to continue this some time in the future- it would be a shame to leave such a wonderful story unfinished.
I just had to come back to reread both your fics.
I really hope you decide to continue this some time in the future- it would be a shame to leave such a wonderful story unfinished.
2/23 c22 6fanficfantasies
I'm so sad you stopped here! I would really like to see you write more. I'm loving the Cary and Chales personas, and I'm glad that they're taking the curse off the Dursley's. But hearing Proffessor McGonagal's reaction to the idea of the curse was hystarical. Just one request... could you please, please but in Dobby somewhere? Maybe Harry running into him again sometime... maybe something about CofS? I love forshadowing! And since Snape's gone it's the perfect time. I would also like to see Harry read Lily's letters... and maybe Draco could somehow come in? That seems like a longshot, but this is litterally the only story where I've actually wanted Draco involved. Write, write, write!
6fanficfantasiesI'm so sad you stopped here! I would really like to see you write more. I'm loving the Cary and Chales personas, and I'm glad that they're taking the curse off the Dursley's. But hearing Proffessor McGonagal's reaction to the idea of the curse was hystarical. Just one request... could you please, please but in Dobby somewhere? Maybe Harry running into him again sometime... maybe something about CofS? I love forshadowing! And since Snape's gone it's the perfect time. I would also like to see Harry read Lily's letters... and maybe Draco could somehow come in? That seems like a longshot, but this is litterally the only story where I've actually wanted Draco involved. Write, write, write!