for Existential Crises9/9/2012 c24 
9Hebi R
THis is the kind of thing which, when left hanging, also leaves hanging many readers. This cliff-face is quite uncomfortable, I'll have you know, and there is an utter absence of nice cups of tea. Please post again if at all possible.
9Hebi RTHis is the kind of thing which, when left hanging, also leaves hanging many readers. This cliff-face is quite uncomfortable, I'll have you know, and there is an utter absence of nice cups of tea. Please post again if at all possible.
9/9/2012 c7 Hebi R
I am somewhat disturbed by my fondness for Pestilence. Maybe it's that he does not take his job too seriously, and that like Pollution it appears to be more about the art for him than about the numbers. Sable gloats a bit too much for me.
I am somewhat disturbed by my fondness for Pestilence. Maybe it's that he does not take his job too seriously, and that like Pollution it appears to be more about the art for him than about the numbers. Sable gloats a bit too much for me.
10/6/2010 c1 anom4ly
A fantastic fic as always. Could I get the link for your live journal? I can't find it in your profile.
A fantastic fic as always. Could I get the link for your live journal? I can't find it in your profile.
9/28/2010 c1 treewalker
Okay. This thing is officially addictive and amazing. You really know how to write something that hooks people :)
My only complaint is that nowhere on your profile can I find the link to your LiveJournal page, and it's driving me bonkers! Help?
Okay. This thing is officially addictive and amazing. You really know how to write something that hooks people :)
My only complaint is that nowhere on your profile can I find the link to your LiveJournal page, and it's driving me bonkers! Help?
4/25/2010 c23 Madam Marmalade
I LOVE this fanfic! I've seen it around here a million times before, but I never actually read it until now. My only regret is that I didn't start sooner.
I am really hopping White ends up with Crowley. *crosses fingers* I'd feel bad for Sable, yes, but I like Pollution/Crowley more (not that I'm opposed to Famy and Polly goodness no). Oh I know they can have a threesome!
Oh dear is White going to paint that orgy scene with the four horsey people? Or maybe he'll draw my threesome idea? I can't wait to see how they react. XD
Gelb. Uh. So cool. I seem to have an unhealthy fixation with him. GET IT? UNHEALTHY! 'CUZ HE'S PESTILENCE! AHAHAHAHAHA *shot* Anywho so yeah him and Ernest are pretty kick-ass. I want a pet duck now. Speaking of the sickly boys, I was wondering if I could use Ernest and the name Gelb? 'Cuz I've been wanting to write some silly GO fics for a while now and I would love to include them!(if I ever get off my lazy butt and actually got to writing them that is.)
Update soon please!
I LOVE this fanfic! I've seen it around here a million times before, but I never actually read it until now. My only regret is that I didn't start sooner.
I am really hopping White ends up with Crowley. *crosses fingers* I'd feel bad for Sable, yes, but I like Pollution/Crowley more (not that I'm opposed to Famy and Polly goodness no). Oh I know they can have a threesome!
Oh dear is White going to paint that orgy scene with the four horsey people? Or maybe he'll draw my threesome idea? I can't wait to see how they react. XD
Gelb. Uh. So cool. I seem to have an unhealthy fixation with him. GET IT? UNHEALTHY! 'CUZ HE'S PESTILENCE! AHAHAHAHAHA *shot* Anywho so yeah him and Ernest are pretty kick-ass. I want a pet duck now. Speaking of the sickly boys, I was wondering if I could use Ernest and the name Gelb? 'Cuz I've been wanting to write some silly GO fics for a while now and I would love to include them!(if I ever get off my lazy butt and actually got to writing them that is.)
Update soon please!
1/2/2010 c22 2Grummel
Now I've read it all. Good story, though its development slightly reminds me of the wheel of time: You keep adding new threads, when will you finish them all?
I am not sure whether this version really qualifies for PG-13 according to American standards, but I am not an expert on US prudery nor do I really care. Probably both versions do according to British standards. (As for Germany: Most people that care don't understand English beyond four letter words ;-)
You sure have a talent for writing. Your own personae all have distinct character, while the original ones are authentic and that is quite an accomplishment with such a long story.
As with many other reviewers Pestilence and his avian companion are my favorites with Jenny close behind. One quote that I will never forget is Pollution's description of Crowley as an "infernal being of questionable diabolicality"
I really hope you will finish this story some day!
2GrummelNow I've read it all. Good story, though its development slightly reminds me of the wheel of time: You keep adding new threads, when will you finish them all?
I am not sure whether this version really qualifies for PG-13 according to American standards, but I am not an expert on US prudery nor do I really care. Probably both versions do according to British standards. (As for Germany: Most people that care don't understand English beyond four letter words ;-)
You sure have a talent for writing. Your own personae all have distinct character, while the original ones are authentic and that is quite an accomplishment with such a long story.
As with many other reviewers Pestilence and his avian companion are my favorites with Jenny close behind. One quote that I will never forget is Pollution's description of Crowley as an "infernal being of questionable diabolicality"
I really hope you will finish this story some day!
12/30/2009 c2 Grummel
Nice story so far!
The modification of the hotel bill was really demonic. I almost expected the man to look for a hidden camera ;-)
Nice story so far!
The modification of the hotel bill was really demonic. I almost expected the man to look for a hidden camera ;-)
8/22/2009 c22 29The Twilight Necromancer
Oh God. Oh God. XD You have my undying love for making Schuldig an imp from Hell. Seriously.
29The Twilight NecromancerOh God. Oh God. XD You have my undying love for making Schuldig an imp from Hell. Seriously.
8/20/2009 c22 Maegvasaiel
very nice chapter! I liked that you added the Schwarz baddies^.^ And I think White will make a very... good painting!
very nice chapter! I liked that you added the Schwarz baddies^.^ And I think White will make a very... good painting!
8/20/2009 c22 13Ima Super Mute Ant
I've been reading this fic since the very first chapter and I know that I don't review nearly enough for how fantastic it is. Loved the mini Weiss crossover! As always this is absolutely hilarious!
13Ima Super Mute AntI've been reading this fic since the very first chapter and I know that I don't review nearly enough for how fantastic it is. Loved the mini Weiss crossover! As always this is absolutely hilarious!
6/9/2009 c21 Xenopheles
I started this last night, and my gods I want it to continue. You've converted me to being a rabid Pollution fan. :D This story is exquisitely crafted, and slick with well-paced plot and no useless scenes. Everything appears when it needs to, and the complexity is stunning.
I read most of this on the library at good omens dot com, so I can only offer my critique there: there are a few typos that range from homonyms to forgetting words to duplicate words that I think a rudimentary beta reading could fix. As well, there is occasional confusion over who is delivering a line of dialogue, so you may want to pay closer attention to that.
I started this last night, and my gods I want it to continue. You've converted me to being a rabid Pollution fan. :D This story is exquisitely crafted, and slick with well-paced plot and no useless scenes. Everything appears when it needs to, and the complexity is stunning.
I read most of this on the library at good omens dot com, so I can only offer my critique there: there are a few typos that range from homonyms to forgetting words to duplicate words that I think a rudimentary beta reading could fix. As well, there is occasional confusion over who is delivering a line of dialogue, so you may want to pay closer attention to that.
5/14/2009 c21 18expiry 4.23
This chapter made me smile. I especially liked Pollution's indecision, and the conversation between Envy and Pestilence. I adore this story; I hope you update soon!
18expiry 4.23This chapter made me smile. I especially liked Pollution's indecision, and the conversation between Envy and Pestilence. I adore this story; I hope you update soon!
5/14/2009 c12 expiry 4.23
To continue with your allusions to the Harry Potter series, I hope the pale blond and the messy-haired boy with a scar, tumbling into the broom cupboard, were Draco Malfoy and Harry Potter. That would make my night.
I laughed out loud at several points in this chapter, but I found it incredibly...well...hot, as well. So, there's that.
To continue with your allusions to the Harry Potter series, I hope the pale blond and the messy-haired boy with a scar, tumbling into the broom cupboard, were Draco Malfoy and Harry Potter. That would make my night.
I laughed out loud at several points in this chapter, but I found it incredibly...well...hot, as well. So, there's that.
5/14/2009 c10 expiry 4.23
Nice little allusion to Harry Potter in there with the Big D and his Little Whinging Home Boys.
I enjoy the balance of romance, confusion, meddling, temptation, anxiety, and plot. You've certainly got a flair for it.
Nice little allusion to Harry Potter in there with the Big D and his Little Whinging Home Boys.
I enjoy the balance of romance, confusion, meddling, temptation, anxiety, and plot. You've certainly got a flair for it.