for Existential Crises6/8/2007 c6 PaintItBlackAndTakeItBack
Oh, Crowley, feeling sorry for Pollution... Also, Leon's band - I bet a band called Satanic Firetrap is actually in existence somewhere. It just occurred to me that I like how nobody has become soppy in this fic, and nor are they likely to, which is always nice. Just thought I'd mention it. x
Oh, Crowley, feeling sorry for Pollution... Also, Leon's band - I bet a band called Satanic Firetrap is actually in existence somewhere. It just occurred to me that I like how nobody has become soppy in this fic, and nor are they likely to, which is always nice. Just thought I'd mention it. x
6/8/2007 c6 
4CaptainEmo
Brilliant as always! I love the conversation between Crowley and Pollution, esp. the end bit - the "it might as well be meaningless" line. (And, oh, poor Leon. hehehe)
4CaptainEmoBrilliant as always! I love the conversation between Crowley and Pollution, esp. the end bit - the "it might as well be meaningless" line. (And, oh, poor Leon. hehehe)
5/30/2007 c5 36Felicity G. Silvers
Okay, so this isn't my real review. Just dropping in to say that, HEY! I'm reading this, and I'll make sure to drop you a real comment, just been busy. SO, I'm saying that I'm printing it off and reading it, and soon will be able to leave you a nice and wonderful comment, so please don't end the story without, you know, finishing it. I'll try to be more helpful after I've caught up.
36Felicity G. SilversOkay, so this isn't my real review. Just dropping in to say that, HEY! I'm reading this, and I'll make sure to drop you a real comment, just been busy. SO, I'm saying that I'm printing it off and reading it, and soon will be able to leave you a nice and wonderful comment, so please don't end the story without, you know, finishing it. I'll try to be more helpful after I've caught up.
5/30/2007 c5 PaintItBlackAndTakeItBack
Ooh! Demonic drunkenness ahead (I hope?). Also, 'Avian Flu Earnest'? That's just brilliant. A few typos, as you said there would be, but not many, and it was a really great chapter, so I'll cope. x
Ooh! Demonic drunkenness ahead (I hope?). Also, 'Avian Flu Earnest'? That's just brilliant. A few typos, as you said there would be, but not many, and it was a really great chapter, so I'll cope. x
5/26/2007 c4 PaintItBlackAndTakeItBack
I love it! I'd forgotten that Good Omens fanfic could actually be good. You've got the characters pretty much spot on, and I like this little personal journey Polution's going on - the wandering artist lacking a sense of purpose (I could go on, but it's probably best if I don't...).
One teeny thing: spelling and puntuation. Commas and apostrophes in the wrong places, your instead of you're, stuff like that. (I'm a bit neurotic about these things, can you tell?) I'd enjoy the story a lot more (not that I'm not enjoying it already) if you could keep an eye on that (sorry, don't mean to be rude or anything, tell me to go away if you want).
Update soon! x
I love it! I'd forgotten that Good Omens fanfic could actually be good. You've got the characters pretty much spot on, and I like this little personal journey Polution's going on - the wandering artist lacking a sense of purpose (I could go on, but it's probably best if I don't...).
One teeny thing: spelling and puntuation. Commas and apostrophes in the wrong places, your instead of you're, stuff like that. (I'm a bit neurotic about these things, can you tell?) I'd enjoy the story a lot more (not that I'm not enjoying it already) if you could keep an eye on that (sorry, don't mean to be rude or anything, tell me to go away if you want).
Update soon! x
5/25/2007 c1 25Prieda Solo
Oh, i am so glad I found this because i read it on livejournal and didn't know how to review it there. This is a really great story, i particularly love the way you characterise Pollution, and of course much much love for all your secondary characters which still some across and nice and rounded and complex.
(I also adored your Lucius Malfoy/Pollution stories too. So very believable and well written).
Crowley is great in this too. Take a little gold star for perfectly rendered characters :)
25Prieda SoloOh, i am so glad I found this because i read it on livejournal and didn't know how to review it there. This is a really great story, i particularly love the way you characterise Pollution, and of course much much love for all your secondary characters which still some across and nice and rounded and complex.
(I also adored your Lucius Malfoy/Pollution stories too. So very believable and well written).
Crowley is great in this too. Take a little gold star for perfectly rendered characters :)
4/26/2007 c3 Muffin'snothere
Lovely lovely~ I am enjoying myself quite a lot reading your story thus far. Pollution always struck me as the artistic type prone to issue of existential uncerttainty, so does being the new kid on the proverbial block. Very good IC behaviour so far and such, I'll be hanging around.
Lovely lovely~ I am enjoying myself quite a lot reading your story thus far. Pollution always struck me as the artistic type prone to issue of existential uncerttainty, so does being the new kid on the proverbial block. Very good IC behaviour so far and such, I'll be hanging around.
4/15/2007 c2 CaptainEmo
Love the title, love the plotline, love the characterization. (They're all so spot-on!) In other words, keep it up and hurry with the next chapter!
Love the title, love the plotline, love the characterization. (They're all so spot-on!) In other words, keep it up and hurry with the next chapter!
4/14/2007 c2 15Seregwen Morthil
Wow, this is really good so far!
It's nice, because you have no idea which way it will go.
Too many fics are all-too-predictable, but I really like the way you don't give everything away.
Actually, it probably wouldn't hurt to give just a /leetle/ more away...
-seri
15Seregwen MorthilWow, this is really good so far!
It's nice, because you have no idea which way it will go.
Too many fics are all-too-predictable, but I really like the way you don't give everything away.
Actually, it probably wouldn't hurt to give just a /leetle/ more away...
-seri