8/1/2011 c1 Raven-2010
Wow this is beautiful, with an outstanding plot (^_^)

Raven

2/22/2011 c2 4Rea27
very good, but I personally think it should have been a bit longer. very good!

:)

8/14/2007 c1 12Keitii Manga
umm...it was a good story, but i think it could have been writen alot better...you need to work on your grammar and it would have helped the story out a whole lot more if you used the "s and the ' exc...just being helpful.

5/3/2007 c1 3Forgotten Dark Soul
VERY GOOD! :D I LIKE IT! but you should continue it :)