for Being No Potter5/5 c20 KatzeIason69
this was really great. the story line was wonderful. hope you'll put more to it at some point in time.:)
this was really great. the story line was wonderful. hope you'll put more to it at some point in time.:)
4/13 c1 sandra
Harry - NOT Harrison!
Harry - NOT Harrison!
4/5 c20 
1He-who-runs-into-walls
Maniac! LIly is like a trainwreck of awesome if something so horrific can be so awesome that is (i cant stop reading it)
1He-who-runs-into-wallsManiac! LIly is like a trainwreck of awesome if something so horrific can be so awesome that is (i cant stop reading it)
3/29 c20 blue-not loggein
reely gate story hope to read more! update ples
reely gate story hope to read more! update ples
3/4 c1 Ro-Kai
This chapter was funny its like:
Ok lets start reading so he tells the people about the prophecy next paragraph potters are attacked 2 sentences later he is dead then by the end of the chap bwl is already named...
Chapter was a tad rushed but that made it funny
This chapter was funny its like:
Ok lets start reading so he tells the people about the prophecy next paragraph potters are attacked 2 sentences later he is dead then by the end of the chap bwl is already named...
Chapter was a tad rushed but that made it funny
12/10/2012 c2 2elmoryakhan
I hate stories like this which portray Lily and James as monsters. This is an insult to their characters as Lily and James in canon are said to be some the kindest and noble people.
Besides such characterizations are not only unrealistic but stupid as well, because no normal or sane parent could ever do something like this to their own child.
2elmoryakhanI hate stories like this which portray Lily and James as monsters. This is an insult to their characters as Lily and James in canon are said to be some the kindest and noble people.
Besides such characterizations are not only unrealistic but stupid as well, because no normal or sane parent could ever do something like this to their own child.
11/7/2012 c9 Jamr
"Having any problems finding down here?" Penelope asked the five first-years.
finding what?
Notable is, that at the time we last heard of the twin of the BOY WHO LIVED several former friends of the family stopped to have contact with the Potters like the Longbottoms, Moody's and Marchbanks.
How about "Stopped Having."
Get a beta...
"Having any problems finding down here?" Penelope asked the five first-years.
finding what?
Notable is, that at the time we last heard of the twin of the BOY WHO LIVED several former friends of the family stopped to have contact with the Potters like the Longbottoms, Moody's and Marchbanks.
How about "Stopped Having."
Get a beta...
11/4/2012 c20 1Keitsu Han'ei
erm, it is a little bit of the dry side... but there is potential. am waiting to see this develop.
1Keitsu Han'eierm, it is a little bit of the dry side... but there is potential. am waiting to see this develop.