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4Fire From Above
Whoa, a lot happened there. Excellent pacing keeping so many threads going. I am especially enjoying the tension and the touch of creepiness in the story.
4Fire From AboveWhoa, a lot happened there. Excellent pacing keeping so many threads going. I am especially enjoying the tension and the touch of creepiness in the story.
3/4 c12 damonika2009
Oooh Drake you lucky you alive and Morgana was there. Stupidity was JUST ON HIS **! Lol! And as for Moloculo, I'm greatful he saved Gosalyn from Quackerjack and Megavolt. I almost thought he wouldn't do it. Thank goodness.
Oooh Drake you lucky you alive and Morgana was there. Stupidity was JUST ON HIS **! Lol! And as for Moloculo, I'm greatful he saved Gosalyn from Quackerjack and Megavolt. I almost thought he wouldn't do it. Thank goodness.
3/2 c11 4MizzMegz
Holy crap on a Quackerjack, woman! I'm just loving all the villains running around that shouldn't be. My fingernails are down to nubs. Can't wait to see what dear ol' Duncan will have to say when he gets back. *shudder* Come to think of it, yes I can. Your Negaduck gives me the heeby jeebies.
Poor Drake, even when he catches a break, it's in a left handed sort of way.
I will forever be tuned in to this story, doesn't matter to me how long you need to write it. Huzzah!
4MizzMegzHoly crap on a Quackerjack, woman! I'm just loving all the villains running around that shouldn't be. My fingernails are down to nubs. Can't wait to see what dear ol' Duncan will have to say when he gets back. *shudder* Come to think of it, yes I can. Your Negaduck gives me the heeby jeebies.
Poor Drake, even when he catches a break, it's in a left handed sort of way.
I will forever be tuned in to this story, doesn't matter to me how long you need to write it. Huzzah!
2/27 c11 29Felidae1
I could hug and kiss you. Horror, tragedy, insanity, betrayal, rage, hatred, death, love, despair, hope, madness, revenge, blood and flowers..this story has it all. Along with a great vocabulary and -be still, me beating heart!- impeccable grammar this is a true find among the other DW-stories I have read so far. Do take your time updating, dear; genious demands patience.
29Felidae1I could hug and kiss you. Horror, tragedy, insanity, betrayal, rage, hatred, death, love, despair, hope, madness, revenge, blood and flowers..this story has it all. Along with a great vocabulary and -be still, me beating heart!- impeccable grammar this is a true find among the other DW-stories I have read so far. Do take your time updating, dear; genious demands patience.
2/27 c11 4Fire From Above
Whoa, you actually updated quickly. I am proud of you for that.
There were plenty of interesting parts here. The brushes he had with the Five were fleeting, but sufficiently tense and creepy. You still do a great job at showing all sorts of pain and exhaustion in Drake.
The scene with Gosalyn and Morgana was sweet and painful. However, nice to see Gosalyn's spirit in keeping the door wedged open.
Good job, and I am looking forward to seeing more from you.
4Fire From AboveWhoa, you actually updated quickly. I am proud of you for that.
There were plenty of interesting parts here. The brushes he had with the Five were fleeting, but sufficiently tense and creepy. You still do a great job at showing all sorts of pain and exhaustion in Drake.
The scene with Gosalyn and Morgana was sweet and painful. However, nice to see Gosalyn's spirit in keeping the door wedged open.
Good job, and I am looking forward to seeing more from you.
2/26 c11 nemzit
Brilliant as always m'dear. Had to read it from the start to get my head around everything that was happening again, and what a treat it was to see it all coming together. This is definitely a darker Darkwing - with the fate of the Four revealed, puppets of a murderous 'Duncan' - and I'm looking forward to the next chapters.. whenever they occur ;)
Brilliant as always m'dear. Had to read it from the start to get my head around everything that was happening again, and what a treat it was to see it all coming together. This is definitely a darker Darkwing - with the fate of the Four revealed, puppets of a murderous 'Duncan' - and I'm looking forward to the next chapters.. whenever they occur ;)
2/25 c1 64animatedrose
Hooray! You updated!
I only recently started rereading this series and just when I was giving up on an update...walah! You updated! Yay!
Poor DW just doesn't get a break, huh? Poor Bushroot too...
I hope you can update again soon! This story rules!
64animatedroseHooray! You updated!
I only recently started rereading this series and just when I was giving up on an update...walah! You updated! Yay!
Poor DW just doesn't get a break, huh? Poor Bushroot too...
I hope you can update again soon! This story rules!
2/23 c10 4Fire From Above
Whoa, it's been a while. Interesting reunion Morgana had, but I am wondering if there could have been more to it. Gosalyn's confrontation with Moloculo was neat in that you did a good job showing her game plan. She was really astute, and seemed to mostly know how to mine for information.
I wish you luck in writing the rest of the story. It has been a couple of years.
4Fire From AboveWhoa, it's been a while. Interesting reunion Morgana had, but I am wondering if there could have been more to it. Gosalyn's confrontation with Moloculo was neat in that you did a good job showing her game plan. She was really astute, and seemed to mostly know how to mine for information.
I wish you luck in writing the rest of the story. It has been a couple of years.
2/18 c10 49acosta perez jose ramiro
Whoa. This is pretty cool, specially Gos scenes.
Keep the good writing.
49acosta perez jose ramiroWhoa. This is pretty cool, specially Gos scenes.
Keep the good writing.
2/17 c10 damonika2009
Wow so emotional. I remember the drawing you had of Ambrosia. Gorgeous woman she was, I know Moloculo still misses her. I hope Morg can see Drake. If she doesn't get caught by the Fearsome 5 that is.
Wow so emotional. I remember the drawing you had of Ambrosia. Gorgeous woman she was, I know Moloculo still misses her. I hope Morg can see Drake. If she doesn't get caught by the Fearsome 5 that is.
2/17 c10 6laal ratty
I obviously chose a good time to re-read the previous stories in this series - Doubts and Doppelgangers was finished a couple of days ago. Nice chapter here. I have to wonder whether there is a Jekyll and Hyde thing going on with Negs and Darkwing in this series - whether Glomgold really did kill his parents, got sent to the asylum and they gave him something that split him into his good and bad parts.
6laal rattyI obviously chose a good time to re-read the previous stories in this series - Doubts and Doppelgangers was finished a couple of days ago. Nice chapter here. I have to wonder whether there is a Jekyll and Hyde thing going on with Negs and Darkwing in this series - whether Glomgold really did kill his parents, got sent to the asylum and they gave him something that split him into his good and bad parts.
12/12/2012 c1 4one heart that stands alone
PLEASE! Update this! I'm in love with this story and it gave me the inspiration to finish another story! Please dont let us down
4one heart that stands alonePLEASE! Update this! I'm in love with this story and it gave me the inspiration to finish another story! Please dont let us down