for Looking Out11/11/2008 c2 
5charlie-becks
u should add a chapter about the story they come up with, i love it how it is though if u don't i jus think it'd be funny.
5charlie-becksu should add a chapter about the story they come up with, i love it how it is though if u don't i jus think it'd be funny.
11/1/2008 c2 17ExtremeWriter
Haha, well, while I just loved the first chapter (it left me both laughing and wanting to hug Ponyboy, like any good Outsiders story should, IMO), the second was just...woah. Woah, woah, woah. It had some good moments, but you really went far. Haha, but everyone was so freaked out. I had to laugh at that. :)
But good job, especially on chapter one.
17ExtremeWriterHaha, well, while I just loved the first chapter (it left me both laughing and wanting to hug Ponyboy, like any good Outsiders story should, IMO), the second was just...woah. Woah, woah, woah. It had some good moments, but you really went far. Haha, but everyone was so freaked out. I had to laugh at that. :)
But good job, especially on chapter one.
5/26/2008 c2 117verbal acuity
I liked both of these, but I definitely like the second one better. Soda's reaction was great. Damn Socs. Great story, though! Ponyboy always gets himself into trouble. But I love it, though! ^^
117verbal acuityI liked both of these, but I definitely like the second one better. Soda's reaction was great. Damn Socs. Great story, though! Ponyboy always gets himself into trouble. But I love it, though! ^^
1/3/2008 c2 20Celestra
Hahah, this was great.. you have to give major props to any story (or stories) that manages to be sweet and absolutely hysterical at the same time :p
20CelestraHahah, this was great.. you have to give major props to any story (or stories) that manages to be sweet and absolutely hysterical at the same time :p
7/7/2007 c2 7Haligh
Hahaha. XD Pony and Johnny are so crazy, getting into such a weird predicament. Nobody has really written something like this as far as I've come across in the Outsiders fanfictions here, so +10 points for originality.
Very well written. [: Johnny definately seemed IC, and Pony, too. Darry made me lol. Hes like, "I just... don't know if I wanna know o_O"
I'm looking forward to any updates. ^_^
7HalighHahaha. XD Pony and Johnny are so crazy, getting into such a weird predicament. Nobody has really written something like this as far as I've come across in the Outsiders fanfictions here, so +10 points for originality.
Very well written. [: Johnny definately seemed IC, and Pony, too. Darry made me lol. Hes like, "I just... don't know if I wanna know o_O"
I'm looking forward to any updates. ^_^
5/28/2007 c2 TrunksGRL13
You should add more chapters for sure! Great story!
You should add more chapters for sure! Great story!
5/28/2007 c2 29Maddiecake
You enjoy making Ponyboy and Johnny naked, don't you? xD
Well, in any case, it was funny. I enjoy reading this :]
Update soon!
29MaddiecakeYou enjoy making Ponyboy and Johnny naked, don't you? xD
Well, in any case, it was funny. I enjoy reading this :]
Update soon!
5/16/2007 c1 Live2Read
Aww, this was cute. I liked it :)
Aww, this was cute. I liked it :)
5/16/2007 c1 die an outsider
Don't know what gave you an idea to write about something like that =) but it came out cute =)
Don't know what gave you an idea to write about something like that =) but it came out cute =)