for Teralose5/31/2007 c2 
5Archer of Freedom
OH MY GOSH! I FEEL SO HAPPY FOR MARTIN! HE GOT HIS LOVE BACK! OH, THE HAPPIEST OF THE HAPPIEST. to bad he doesn't know who she is, even though he's got a ton of clues. i bet he will figure it out sooner or later. YEAH MARTIN!
oh, by the way, what has a red-stoned hilt?
5Archer of FreedomOH MY GOSH! I FEEL SO HAPPY FOR MARTIN! HE GOT HIS LOVE BACK! OH, THE HAPPIEST OF THE HAPPIEST. to bad he doesn't know who she is, even though he's got a ton of clues. i bet he will figure it out sooner or later. YEAH MARTIN!
oh, by the way, what has a red-stoned hilt?
5/30/2007 c2 nebula212255
This is very good! I have placed this on my alert list. One mistake; I believe that the third paragraph is missing the word "sword". I like this a lot and I can't wait to read more. Gonff is so true to character. I hope that you let Martin recognize Rose.
This is very good! I have placed this on my alert list. One mistake; I believe that the third paragraph is missing the word "sword". I like this a lot and I can't wait to read more. Gonff is so true to character. I hope that you let Martin recognize Rose.
5/26/2007 c1 Archer of Freedom
This is so good. I even know who Teralose is. I am loving the plot of the story, and i can't wait to see if she will see Martin again!
This is so good. I even know who Teralose is. I am loving the plot of the story, and i can't wait to see if she will see Martin again!
5/24/2007 c1 warriorofredwall
Good. You are in second place right now. Remember, Rose and Martin are supposed to be together. Good luck!
warriorofredwall, Martin/Rose contest manger.
Good. You are in second place right now. Remember, Rose and Martin are supposed to be together. Good luck!
warriorofredwall, Martin/Rose contest manger.
5/24/2007 c1 Tip
Talerose? Laterose? Anagram or coincidence?
Talerose? Laterose? Anagram or coincidence?
5/23/2007 c1 6Dirk O'Reilly
What is this contest that everyone but me seems to know about? If it is what I think it is, I might have an idea for it...so could you tell me what it is?
Interesting, but I got kind of lost when Brome was at the Gates of Dark Forest. You mentioned Boar, but then did you call him a mouse? I'm not sure, it was hard to tell who was speaking. Also, to me, Brome never seemed to be one that would be looked to as a leader, but *shrugs*, just my opinion.
Only one grammar mistake, you put two quotes at the beginning of the last line of dialogue.
Sounds pretty good, but you might want to go into more detail.
COuld you please tell me what the contest is?
6Dirk O'ReillyWhat is this contest that everyone but me seems to know about? If it is what I think it is, I might have an idea for it...so could you tell me what it is?
Interesting, but I got kind of lost when Brome was at the Gates of Dark Forest. You mentioned Boar, but then did you call him a mouse? I'm not sure, it was hard to tell who was speaking. Also, to me, Brome never seemed to be one that would be looked to as a leader, but *shrugs*, just my opinion.
Only one grammar mistake, you put two quotes at the beginning of the last line of dialogue.
Sounds pretty good, but you might want to go into more detail.
COuld you please tell me what the contest is?