for Disturbing the Peace7/21/2012 c1 Guest
it wasnt to impressive seen as it was so shortmake it longer and carryit on a bit more I thought it was leading up to a really good story any case good job but make it longer
it wasnt to impressive seen as it was so shortmake it longer and carryit on a bit more I thought it was leading up to a really good story any case good job but make it longer
1/28/2011 c1 Guest
this. was. AWESOME! i have rarely read such a short yet wonderful fanfic that is naruhina
this. was. AWESOME! i have rarely read such a short yet wonderful fanfic that is naruhina
12/31/2010 c1 Mysterious Ninja
OMG that was the cutest story iv ever read! Lee was so FUUNNNYYY! Great story keep it up!
OMG that was the cutest story iv ever read! Lee was so FUUNNNYYY! Great story keep it up!
4/6/2009 c1
34Afalstein
Considering the amount of time this story's been up, I suspect you've forgotten about it, but I must say that I'm rather surprised that you haven't gotten more reviews. This is (or was) a very good story. Using dialogue to tell the entire story is hilarious, especially given how you work in each character. Lee especially is good.
34AfalsteinConsidering the amount of time this story's been up, I suspect you've forgotten about it, but I must say that I'm rather surprised that you haven't gotten more reviews. This is (or was) a very good story. Using dialogue to tell the entire story is hilarious, especially given how you work in each character. Lee especially is good.
8/13/2008 c1 Kasuchi Koichi
Funny. You should make a prequel of how Naruto and Hinata got in the possistion they were in. :
Funny. You should make a prequel of how Naruto and Hinata got in the possistion they were in. :
5/29/2008 c1
6bleached.to.an.inch.of.my.life
hahhaa...so cute... u made me laugh and grin like an idiot..so cute
6bleached.to.an.inch.of.my.lifehahhaa...so cute... u made me laugh and grin like an idiot..so cute
2/10/2008 c1 Veglma
...Bad Kiba and Lee!
*giggles*
...Bad Kiba and Lee!
*giggles*
12/21/2007 c1
40Ventiwings
It was cute and it was funny. The part where Lee came in was funny and I was confused on what they were talking about when I began reading but then at the end it pretty much made sense. This is so going into my favorites
40VentiwingsIt was cute and it was funny. The part where Lee came in was funny and I was confused on what they were talking about when I began reading but then at the end it pretty much made sense. This is so going into my favorites
11/12/2007 c1 crazy-kyra
that was pretty good and funny. I liked the way you got everyones personalitys right and made them say the stuff they say from the anime XD. Good job!
that was pretty good and funny. I liked the way you got everyones personalitys right and made them say the stuff they say from the anime XD. Good job!
