for The Cold hearted, the Spirited and the Perfect9/29/2012 c22 Jesse5500
This story is just awesome! I love it! I started reading it 2 days ago and I couldn't stop! When I finished chapter 22 I was like "WTF? That's it?" I mean... I want more! please I need more chapters to read! I love Yami and Tea together, why do you keep sending Yami to the hospital? how the ** is he supposed to pay for that? and why you added that bastard Hirutani? well you are the writer, that means you do whatever you want and I have to shut the ** up and read jhsadg Any ways, I really love the story, you are an excellent writer and I hope I can read chapter 23 soon, please? :D
This story is just awesome! I love it! I started reading it 2 days ago and I couldn't stop! When I finished chapter 22 I was like "WTF? That's it?" I mean... I want more! please I need more chapters to read! I love Yami and Tea together, why do you keep sending Yami to the hospital? how the ** is he supposed to pay for that? and why you added that bastard Hirutani? well you are the writer, that means you do whatever you want and I have to shut the ** up and read jhsadg Any ways, I really love the story, you are an excellent writer and I hope I can read chapter 23 soon, please? :D
2/16/2010 c7 
1yukikaxnagami15
ok I may be late to the story but I am new to the site. I'm still learning the kinks and stuff, but I am one of the fans for the Yami and Tea paring. I love this sotory it has everything I like in a fanfiction. suspense, romance, and drama. Really good and aplogies for the very late reply after you published this.
1yukikaxnagami15ok I may be late to the story but I am new to the site. I'm still learning the kinks and stuff, but I am one of the fans for the Yami and Tea paring. I love this sotory it has everything I like in a fanfiction. suspense, romance, and drama. Really good and aplogies for the very late reply after you published this.
10/1/2009 c22 14empire14
THIS IS SUCH A COOL STORY! I don't know how you do it, but whatever it is. DOON'T stop. I'm really exited to see how it ends so please update soon.
And i love it how Kane gets all worried about Yami, so sweet!
14empire14THIS IS SUCH A COOL STORY! I don't know how you do it, but whatever it is. DOON'T stop. I'm really exited to see how it ends so please update soon.
And i love it how Kane gets all worried about Yami, so sweet!
8/26/2009 c22 Koragirl
OK that bad news Excellent work on your story keep it up . Please email me when chapter up OK. !
OK that bad news Excellent work on your story keep it up . Please email me when chapter up OK. !
8/24/2009 c22 4Midnight-Shadow18450
That evil... *gets flaming pitfork* Can I use this on him? Please?
Great chapter! Loved it :)
4Midnight-Shadow18450That evil... *gets flaming pitfork* Can I use this on him? Please?
Great chapter! Loved it :)
8/24/2009 c22 5yami yasi
hi sweetie ... i'm just satisfied too much but it's like that you climb up a too high mountain and with each step you are more close to top but you dont like get to it .. you want go high and high for ever ... and i want read more and more
i think i addict to your story .. i want read it and then think to it every night and think that how next chapter will be and ...
a good and awsome story can addict you and your story do this to me
when yami said “Don’t go,” .. i feel one person squeeze my heart in my chest very hard.. you know ... just this short sentence can shake you till you feel that you can take anymore and then you can see yami in your head like a broken glass and you want to gather all of his piece and take them with yourself till protect from them
you write beautiful and i love read each sentence in this story
and ,oh my god .. i understand now that i'm pervert ( opps )
you know sometimes a simple scene can take your breath away ... and you can blush and wow
(( She held up their connected hands to her lips and kissed Yami’s fingers ever so softly )) ...
if i read a lemon scene ,it couldn't make me like that moment i read this scene ..
i jealous... i want yami ( cry )
you must write a story that i kiss yami in that ( i know , you think may be you must take me to a mental hospital )
yasi in mental hospital :
yasi : no .. please .. give me yami back .. please /
Super-special-awesome Pirate : poor thing
and she hit with a heavy pipe in yasi's head
Super-special-awesome Pirate : my poor yasi .. it help you
yasi : oh my head ( hey honey you could hit me but you must give me yami back )
Super-special-awesome Pirate shake her head : poor thing
and hit again
and i think may be i must go ( escape )
5yami yasihi sweetie ... i'm just satisfied too much but it's like that you climb up a too high mountain and with each step you are more close to top but you dont like get to it .. you want go high and high for ever ... and i want read more and more
i think i addict to your story .. i want read it and then think to it every night and think that how next chapter will be and ...
a good and awsome story can addict you and your story do this to me
when yami said “Don’t go,” .. i feel one person squeeze my heart in my chest very hard.. you know ... just this short sentence can shake you till you feel that you can take anymore and then you can see yami in your head like a broken glass and you want to gather all of his piece and take them with yourself till protect from them
you write beautiful and i love read each sentence in this story
and ,oh my god .. i understand now that i'm pervert ( opps )
you know sometimes a simple scene can take your breath away ... and you can blush and wow
(( She held up their connected hands to her lips and kissed Yami’s fingers ever so softly )) ...
if i read a lemon scene ,it couldn't make me like that moment i read this scene ..
i jealous... i want yami ( cry )
you must write a story that i kiss yami in that ( i know , you think may be you must take me to a mental hospital )
yasi in mental hospital :
yasi : no .. please .. give me yami back .. please /
Super-special-awesome Pirate : poor thing
and she hit with a heavy pipe in yasi's head
Super-special-awesome Pirate : my poor yasi .. it help you
yasi : oh my head ( hey honey you could hit me but you must give me yami back )
Super-special-awesome Pirate shake her head : poor thing
and hit again
and i think may be i must go ( escape )
8/24/2009 c22 10Princess Of Sorrow
Well, I don't know where to start with, but I really liked this chapter.
First when Yami was having that dream about Tea telling him that they were in the park, I kinda tried to use my subconscious with something like Tea told Yami to do. Lol
Anyways, when he dreamed of her again covering his eyes and just telling him to go shower I smiled. I don't know why I loved this part. It kinda let me see how Tea and Yami start being close to each other.
As for when he woke up, that was like my best part! For the first time in all this story Yami manages to hug Tea. That was so great! (jump up and down). And I really feel so good that her mother knows that they're in love. man, I thought they wouldn't let her be with a trouble maker like Atem, if you know what I mean.
About the investigation part, that part just reminded me of Detective Conan; my favorite show beside Yugioh!. I felt that it was another episode and little Conan was solving the mysteries. You did a terrific job on that part, I tell you terrific!
That Hirutani I knew that he was going to accuse Yami with this way before the chapter ended. That punk... (grits teeth).
I just wanted Tea to be with Yami speacialy when he asked her to. Man, I would've stayed even if the doctors didn't allow me. But nothing to worry about, I think Yami could survive.
But I can't help but wonder now what would happen after that punk said that out loud. will Yami be in trouble! Oh, I hope not. Really, he suffered enough in the story already.
Great job with this chapter. I loved it.
(glares) school starts tomorrow! Man, not that I just hate school. I despise school! It's the worst thing in all the world. (Sigh). My school starts at 6 september and this year is my final year at school, so it will be the most difficult year I have. Oh well...
Update soon.
~Rawan
10Princess Of SorrowWell, I don't know where to start with, but I really liked this chapter.
First when Yami was having that dream about Tea telling him that they were in the park, I kinda tried to use my subconscious with something like Tea told Yami to do. Lol
Anyways, when he dreamed of her again covering his eyes and just telling him to go shower I smiled. I don't know why I loved this part. It kinda let me see how Tea and Yami start being close to each other.
As for when he woke up, that was like my best part! For the first time in all this story Yami manages to hug Tea. That was so great! (jump up and down). And I really feel so good that her mother knows that they're in love. man, I thought they wouldn't let her be with a trouble maker like Atem, if you know what I mean.
About the investigation part, that part just reminded me of Detective Conan; my favorite show beside Yugioh!. I felt that it was another episode and little Conan was solving the mysteries. You did a terrific job on that part, I tell you terrific!
That Hirutani I knew that he was going to accuse Yami with this way before the chapter ended. That punk... (grits teeth).
I just wanted Tea to be with Yami speacialy when he asked her to. Man, I would've stayed even if the doctors didn't allow me. But nothing to worry about, I think Yami could survive.
But I can't help but wonder now what would happen after that punk said that out loud. will Yami be in trouble! Oh, I hope not. Really, he suffered enough in the story already.
Great job with this chapter. I loved it.
(glares) school starts tomorrow! Man, not that I just hate school. I despise school! It's the worst thing in all the world. (Sigh). My school starts at 6 september and this year is my final year at school, so it will be the most difficult year I have. Oh well...
Update soon.
~Rawan
7/18/2009 c21 Koragirl
ok is Yami going to live and is Kane going to get the bad guys with Yami help. and is Tea going to be ok. Great work . Thank you for email me and up dating you story. Please email me when next chapter up. I think you writing is fabulous.!
ok is Yami going to live and is Kane going to get the bad guys with Yami help. and is Tea going to be ok. Great work . Thank you for email me and up dating you story. Please email me when next chapter up. I think you writing is fabulous.!
7/18/2009 c21 8YamixSetoFanatic94
NO! I WAS BORN IN THE 18 HUNDREDS! XD
HaHa, I'm old. Lol. Just kidding. ^^
Yes, I was born in 1994. ^^
Whoo-Hoo! I'm awesome! Lmao.
ANywayz, GREAT CHAPTER! :D I couldn't help but think when Kane held Yami, how great it would be if he ended up being his foster father if Yami's father gets arrested. x]
Grr, I just wanna lock his father in a car, blow it up, and let it sink in a lake! O XDD
Anwayz, awesome update. I'll be looking forward to the next one. ;]
-DeaDea-
MUSHROOMS! XD
8YamixSetoFanatic94NO! I WAS BORN IN THE 18 HUNDREDS! XD
HaHa, I'm old. Lol. Just kidding. ^^
Yes, I was born in 1994. ^^
Whoo-Hoo! I'm awesome! Lmao.
ANywayz, GREAT CHAPTER! :D I couldn't help but think when Kane held Yami, how great it would be if he ended up being his foster father if Yami's father gets arrested. x]
Grr, I just wanna lock his father in a car, blow it up, and let it sink in a lake! O XDD
Anwayz, awesome update. I'll be looking forward to the next one. ;]
-DeaDea-
MUSHROOMS! XD
7/18/2009 c21 12fantasia-49
hey my friend what a suspens and it was really excellent! and no your medecine part was so great too thank to md house (i'm a big fan too yeah)
good one really i wait for the next part ^^
see you soon my friend
12fantasia-49hey my friend what a suspens and it was really excellent! and no your medecine part was so great too thank to md house (i'm a big fan too yeah)
good one really i wait for the next part ^^
see you soon my friend
7/18/2009 c21 4Midnight-Shadow18450
Another great chapter from a great Author :) Good work :)
As for the numbers in my name,it's just a random combination :) Doesn't have any particular meaning to it :)
4Midnight-Shadow18450Another great chapter from a great Author :) Good work :)
As for the numbers in my name,it's just a random combination :) Doesn't have any particular meaning to it :)
7/18/2009 c21 5yami yasi
thanx honey . i really love this chappy .
wow . when officer kane found yami and called him and yami dident respond i scared to death .
i think may be i fell in love with kane ( laugh ). he is a very nice man ( love you kane . take care from yami for me )
dear this scene was great :
( What he wanted was to go home and see Tea. If he wasn’t so banged up he would run all the way to her house just to wrap his arms around her. Seeing her safe is all he needed right now.
“Please come,” he whispered. Kane stopped his yelling.
)
i love this paragraph . you know i can feel this scene .
you can feel yami's lonely , you can feel his tiredness , his shelterless and he just want one thing , a shelter , a person that care for him and he can care for her . it's not a major desire , he deserve this , but in this life some people think just they must live in world and other people just born to pleased them and if this people dont want pleased them , they dont deserve a calm life .
yami's father is like that . he must burn in hell . he is not like a father . i think in end yami kill him because he deserve this .
honey you write wonderful . you said (You know what? Imma make the next chapter better than this just for you) and with this you send me to heaven . love you dear . and yes . you must know , you write about medical stuff very excellent . you attend on details and it's great .
i wait for next chapter . write for me . write my lovely author
5yami yasithanx honey . i really love this chappy .
wow . when officer kane found yami and called him and yami dident respond i scared to death .
i think may be i fell in love with kane ( laugh ). he is a very nice man ( love you kane . take care from yami for me )
dear this scene was great :
( What he wanted was to go home and see Tea. If he wasn’t so banged up he would run all the way to her house just to wrap his arms around her. Seeing her safe is all he needed right now.
“Please come,” he whispered. Kane stopped his yelling.
)
i love this paragraph . you know i can feel this scene .
you can feel yami's lonely , you can feel his tiredness , his shelterless and he just want one thing , a shelter , a person that care for him and he can care for her . it's not a major desire , he deserve this , but in this life some people think just they must live in world and other people just born to pleased them and if this people dont want pleased them , they dont deserve a calm life .
yami's father is like that . he must burn in hell . he is not like a father . i think in end yami kill him because he deserve this .
honey you write wonderful . you said (You know what? Imma make the next chapter better than this just for you) and with this you send me to heaven . love you dear . and yes . you must know , you write about medical stuff very excellent . you attend on details and it's great .
i wait for next chapter . write for me . write my lovely author
7/17/2009 c21 10Princess Of Sorrow
You know what! I'm gonna kill you for endingit here!
Everytime I feel so happy that Tea is finally here with Yami, but then the scene slips away and they don't meet!UGH!
Anyways, liked the chapter. That Kane is so sweet. Thankgod there are some people who love yami in this story.
I hope you get the next chapter soon and it should be Tea and Yami chapter only, since finally Atem had admitted that he wants to take her in his arms!
And you better not make that snobby ** Vivian come to the hospital, or I'll die!
Rawan.
10Princess Of SorrowYou know what! I'm gonna kill you for endingit here!
Everytime I feel so happy that Tea is finally here with Yami, but then the scene slips away and they don't meet!UGH!
Anyways, liked the chapter. That Kane is so sweet. Thankgod there are some people who love yami in this story.
I hope you get the next chapter soon and it should be Tea and Yami chapter only, since finally Atem had admitted that he wants to take her in his arms!
And you better not make that snobby ** Vivian come to the hospital, or I'll die!
Rawan.