for Utopia8/27/2011 c1 ZachQuintoLover2011
Very good story. I loved it. Keep going with good stories with The Master/Doctor.
Very good story. I loved it. Keep going with good stories with The Master/Doctor.
8/9/2011 c1 
2DarkLordRaven
Oh that was just so heart warming. And heart wrenching at the same time. 3 This is how the episode should have ended. Please continue the story. :3
2DarkLordRavenOh that was just so heart warming. And heart wrenching at the same time. 3 This is how the episode should have ended. Please continue the story. :3
9/10/2009 c1 Drose Forever
Great story! I would definetly like to read more! Just a few things though. You used the scene change when it wasn't really necessary. And also Gallifrey is spelt like this. Other than that, brilliant!
Drose Forever
Great story! I would definetly like to read more! Just a few things though. You used the scene change when it wasn't really necessary. And also Gallifrey is spelt like this. Other than that, brilliant!
Drose Forever
7/29/2009 c1 4cuillere
OMG that is Brilliant!
I have some comments to make but keep in mind that it is brilliant!
This is not at all the apearance i would have chosen for the Master. I know that's my personal point of view but I needed to write that^^'
I really liked the idea of their body fitting well together and maybe could you find it again with the new Master.
Martha' family was ready to kill the Master so I don't get how they came to just let him leave... And Maybe you could insist a bit on Martha and Lucy's reactions. Because both of them were in love with one Time Lord wich go away together...
And a Time Lord needs to get some rest after his regeneration. so maybe he could sleep a bit after traveling with the Doctor, you know, just enought time to bring other people back home...Maybe it would during that time that the Doctor manage to convince everyone else (appart from Jack) that the Master is under his responsabily and assure them that he won't harm anyone else...
These are just ideas of mine!
I like it as a Oneshot but I would be so interested in how they'll go together again and live together in that Tardis and what they will do of their time etc.. So just do as you feel it. If you wnt to continue it, have fun! I'll be pleased to read that!^^
cuillere
4cuillereOMG that is Brilliant!
I have some comments to make but keep in mind that it is brilliant!
This is not at all the apearance i would have chosen for the Master. I know that's my personal point of view but I needed to write that^^'
I really liked the idea of their body fitting well together and maybe could you find it again with the new Master.
Martha' family was ready to kill the Master so I don't get how they came to just let him leave... And Maybe you could insist a bit on Martha and Lucy's reactions. Because both of them were in love with one Time Lord wich go away together...
And a Time Lord needs to get some rest after his regeneration. so maybe he could sleep a bit after traveling with the Doctor, you know, just enought time to bring other people back home...Maybe it would during that time that the Doctor manage to convince everyone else (appart from Jack) that the Master is under his responsabily and assure them that he won't harm anyone else...
These are just ideas of mine!
I like it as a Oneshot but I would be so interested in how they'll go together again and live together in that Tardis and what they will do of their time etc.. So just do as you feel it. If you wnt to continue it, have fun! I'll be pleased to read that!^^
cuillere
3/10/2008 c1 35skinnyrita
i really like this! i don't think I've ever read this pairing, in fact i'm certain of it. i think it ends well as a oneshot, there is a sense that the reader leaves the characters but they continue on and have a future together that is their own.
skinnyrita x
35skinnyritai really like this! i don't think I've ever read this pairing, in fact i'm certain of it. i think it ends well as a oneshot, there is a sense that the reader leaves the characters but they continue on and have a future together that is their own.
skinnyrita x
8/25/2007 c1 Dark Knight
AW!
THAT'S SO CUTE!
BUT PWESE DON'T WRITE MORE OR DA MASTA MIGHT DIE!
PWESE DON'T KILL HIM!
AW!
THAT'S SO CUTE!
BUT PWESE DON'T WRITE MORE OR DA MASTA MIGHT DIE!
PWESE DON'T KILL HIM!
7/4/2007 c1 Kara
This i amazing. Well done. I absolutely love it. You wrote both characters well and did an excellent job of incorporating their feelings into what was shown in the episode. Excellent job. I would love to see more. Please write more.
*offers bribe of cookies and sugary goodness for more*
Please please please!
This i amazing. Well done. I absolutely love it. You wrote both characters well and did an excellent job of incorporating their feelings into what was shown in the episode. Excellent job. I would love to see more. Please write more.
*offers bribe of cookies and sugary goodness for more*
Please please please!
7/4/2007 c1 6Dark-Yukari
that was a really good story! Don't worry, I too think that their chemistry was screaming out in the episodes. I wouldn't mind if you continued their story, it's very good! whatever you decide, I wish you the best.
6Dark-Yukarithat was a really good story! Don't worry, I too think that their chemistry was screaming out in the episodes. I wouldn't mind if you continued their story, it's very good! whatever you decide, I wish you the best.