for Isabella3/22/2012 c7 JellyWinchester
Hey, Hi, Hello...It seems we have a cliffhanger...WHY?
-dramatically bursts out crying- LOL, great story line, really enjoyed reading it. Only one error, your chapters. They're too short. You should have added them together making it into two or three long chapters. BUT other than that, story's great.
Hey, Hi, Hello...It seems we have a cliffhanger...WHY?
-dramatically bursts out crying- LOL, great story line, really enjoyed reading it. Only one error, your chapters. They're too short. You should have added them together making it into two or three long chapters. BUT other than that, story's great.
7/24/2007 c7 
1Dean-ReaperLover2o1o
O! I LOVE IT! ITS GREAT...Thats a gud cliffhanger 4 the ending of the story. CONTINUE!
1Dean-ReaperLover2o1oO! I LOVE IT! ITS GREAT...Thats a gud cliffhanger 4 the ending of the story. CONTINUE!
7/18/2007 c6 18othspnluver
this is really good ... i liked this update ... so cute tho "Are you my daddy?" just wondering if your gonna fast forward a couple years or so ... as for ideas hm i liked the one someone said about a bad medical history ...
Maybe something like one of jo's ex's coming back and she still likes him as a friend and they're close ... but dean thinks of him as a threat ... you know like competition, idk. You could probably add some bonding time between bella and the new dude so it'll be like an actual relationship and not a fake one. Hope that helps, sorry if it doesn't. if you need more help just ask. :)
18othspnluverthis is really good ... i liked this update ... so cute tho "Are you my daddy?" just wondering if your gonna fast forward a couple years or so ... as for ideas hm i liked the one someone said about a bad medical history ...
Maybe something like one of jo's ex's coming back and she still likes him as a friend and they're close ... but dean thinks of him as a threat ... you know like competition, idk. You could probably add some bonding time between bella and the new dude so it'll be like an actual relationship and not a fake one. Hope that helps, sorry if it doesn't. if you need more help just ask. :)
7/11/2007 c6 55dudeurfugly
"Are you my Daddy?" lol. that was cute!
As for ideas, maybe have them go out and do something as a family or something... you could maybe add some more details about the things going on, as well. Just a suggestion.
Keep up the good work! Update soon!
55dudeurfugly"Are you my Daddy?" lol. that was cute!
As for ideas, maybe have them go out and do something as a family or something... you could maybe add some more details about the things going on, as well. Just a suggestion.
Keep up the good work! Update soon!