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1/5/2010 c1 J
I thought it was cute. There were some spelling errors and you forgot to add some apostrophes. I thought it was cute that Lily gave James a chance and then the date didn't go as planned. But James is SO adorable!
7/1/2008 c1 10callmefall
Aw! That's so sweet!
6/22/2008 c1 2ebdarcy.qt4good
Cute! :D
9/6/2007 c1 8siriusedwardLOVE
I LOVE LOVE LOVE this! clumsy james.amazing!
8/5/2007 c1 5amortentiaaa
absolutely adore the ending
7/28/2007 c1 9Lady Livia
Ohh I love you so bad !

This story is amazing!

"Sirius began to fiddle, moving bits of fluff from one side of the sofa arm to the other, and then trying to build a monument to his greatness with them."

hahaha! I love it!

James is way to sweet too...

If i didn't love Sirius so much.. well.. *hides from Michaela*

Yay!

*Adds to favs*
7/27/2007 c1 6FizzingWhizbeez
Aw that was SO GOOD! That was the cutest Lily/James oneshot I've read in a long time. I wish I could include all the little phrases in the story that made me smile, but then I'd have to copy and paste the entire story into this review! :) That was so sweet, how they both thought they were making fools out of themselves when in fact, it made them all the more endearing and perfectly un-perfect to the other person. Great fic!
7/19/2007 c1 50just giddy
omg. so cute. cliched ending but it was completely called for.

so so so so so so so so so so cute.

coughshipjumpercough

KIDDING! im like the queen of that but weve always dicussed that. but wow, just so adorable. you know its stories like these that maked james so steal-able which in turn makes me like a harry a little bit more.

not that i dont like harry, but the movies just make me unjustifiably mad at him. yeah, i dont get it either.

hahaha

lots o love!
7/19/2007 c1 5SummerSweetMelody
aw. i loved it. absolutely loved it. everything was so perfect and extremely well written! I guess james really isnt that bad a singer after all!

amazing story :]

xLaken
7/17/2007 c1 BigEnoughUmbrella
very sweet.
7/17/2007 c1 46xx.just.a.contradiction.xx
naww. Kate, this was adorable! one of the cutest things i've ever read. Lily, James, Sirius and Remus are all in perfect character.. Sirius was my favourite though, so, well, Sirius-y, lol.

loved this: "Sirius and food appreciation was a almost perfect match." and then how it went on about the house elves, hahaha. so good.

all in all, great to see you back - i've missed your writing so-so-so much! =]

love ya,

Ash x
7/17/2007 c1 SingingBird812
Nice story! I enjoyed reading it. :D

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