for A Kiss is an Autograph of Love1/27 c9 shabby
its a splendid story, i was hoping you could still find a spare of time to finish this. i was taken aback on the last chapter. well honestly, i felt bad for lacus it seems like she's going to look like a horrid rebound in the future story line, but i still hope for a good one from you. anyways, you deserve a credit from this story.
its a splendid story, i was hoping you could still find a spare of time to finish this. i was taken aback on the last chapter. well honestly, i felt bad for lacus it seems like she's going to look like a horrid rebound in the future story line, but i still hope for a good one from you. anyways, you deserve a credit from this story.
1/27 c4 ANIMEDOSHIA
HI, I RECENTLY FOUND OUT YOUR GREAT STORY:)))) ITS BEAUTIFULLL :)))) I HOPE YOU COULD KEEP UP STORIES LIKE THIS WHERE KIRA X LACUS IS THE MAIN LINE :)))) THANKS FOR THE STORY, I MUST SAY, IM VERY IMPRESSED :)
HI, I RECENTLY FOUND OUT YOUR GREAT STORY:)))) ITS BEAUTIFULLL :)))) I HOPE YOU COULD KEEP UP STORIES LIKE THIS WHERE KIRA X LACUS IS THE MAIN LINE :)))) THANKS FOR THE STORY, I MUST SAY, IM VERY IMPRESSED :)
6/3/2012 c7 
2Cemetary Kitten
I'm sorry to hear about your history paper. The same thing happened to me back in highschool. 'No one of your grade could possibly have such a wide vocabulary'. I fought it though, as much as i could, and refused to write another draft. I accepted my failing grade with dignity :P
Some teachers forget that it's students like us that are the reason for them to be teaching in the first place.
Anyway, i'm reading through your story now and though its a tad obvious you arent overly confident with your english, it's a lot better than others i have read. I was a bit dubious about the portrayal of Kira as ambiguous and brooding, but it seems to have worked out ok. At least, so far.
Thankyou for writing.
2Cemetary KittenI'm sorry to hear about your history paper. The same thing happened to me back in highschool. 'No one of your grade could possibly have such a wide vocabulary'. I fought it though, as much as i could, and refused to write another draft. I accepted my failing grade with dignity :P
Some teachers forget that it's students like us that are the reason for them to be teaching in the first place.
Anyway, i'm reading through your story now and though its a tad obvious you arent overly confident with your english, it's a lot better than others i have read. I was a bit dubious about the portrayal of Kira as ambiguous and brooding, but it seems to have worked out ok. At least, so far.
Thankyou for writing.
3/17/2012 c1 danman15
I've read through your story a while back actually and I want to leave my feed back because your work is currently my favorite AU fic. Your writing is amazing. Each chapter is done very well and I continually want more. The dialogue is very natural, and you do a good job of not forcing the story to have KxL moments. It's frustrating but it really makes for a more enjoyable story at the same time.
It's been very long since you last updated and I'm sure you have many fans continually checking in and hoping that you'll continue with this amazing work!
I've read through your story a while back actually and I want to leave my feed back because your work is currently my favorite AU fic. Your writing is amazing. Each chapter is done very well and I continually want more. The dialogue is very natural, and you do a good job of not forcing the story to have KxL moments. It's frustrating but it really makes for a more enjoyable story at the same time.
It's been very long since you last updated and I'm sure you have many fans continually checking in and hoping that you'll continue with this amazing work!
2/18/2012 c9 1Cupcake Logic
This is honestly one of the few AU stories that I truly enjoyed reading, your writing style is delicious! It appears you haven't updated in a long while, if you ever read this, please for a stranger's sake, continue!
1Cupcake LogicThis is honestly one of the few AU stories that I truly enjoyed reading, your writing style is delicious! It appears you haven't updated in a long while, if you ever read this, please for a stranger's sake, continue!
9/27/2011 c1 5DoNt.do-tHis.2-ME
yes $40 American does seem a bit much... but for me $40 for a big shot writer is near normal. I live in Australia and yeah our books can be REALLY expensive! but i like your writing styal and its an easy read. Maybe just a few errors like write instead of right and where instead of were. But not too many =] and i know what you mean when I read it so its easy to read over... But brilliant first chapter i look forward to reading the next few chapters =]
5DoNt.do-tHis.2-MEyes $40 American does seem a bit much... but for me $40 for a big shot writer is near normal. I live in Australia and yeah our books can be REALLY expensive! but i like your writing styal and its an easy read. Maybe just a few errors like write instead of right and where instead of were. But not too many =] and i know what you mean when I read it so its easy to read over... But brilliant first chapter i look forward to reading the next few chapters =]
9/13/2011 c4 TheNabooQueen
Really an awesome story, and i am looking forward to more chapters
Keep up the good work
XDXD
Really an awesome story, and i am looking forward to more chapters
Keep up the good work
XDXD
5/15/2011 c1 2Sadalmelik
This is great. I like the way you write. Even though I'm really not a fan of romance stories, your way of writing intrigued me. And it's really not that bad; your grammar is almost flawless. I'd like to see more from you soon. :)
2SadalmelikThis is great. I like the way you write. Even though I'm really not a fan of romance stories, your way of writing intrigued me. And it's really not that bad; your grammar is almost flawless. I'd like to see more from you soon. :)
7/27/2010 c9 queenboogie16
I miss this story sooo much. I love it because of the writing and the fact that it's AU. There's so few of them out there. Also I like that the relationship between Kira and Lacus has to build. Instead of it just being "I love you" all of a sudden. I really, really hope you update soon. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Just waiting patiently for the next update. Keep up the good work! :D
I miss this story sooo much. I love it because of the writing and the fact that it's AU. There's so few of them out there. Also I like that the relationship between Kira and Lacus has to build. Instead of it just being "I love you" all of a sudden. I really, really hope you update soon. Can't wait to find out what happens next. Just waiting patiently for the next update. Keep up the good work! :D
7/22/2010 c9 Gs105
OMGG this is such an awesome story! This is seriously one of my favourites. Pleaseeeee keep writing! I can't wait to see what happens next. :D
OMGG this is such an awesome story! This is seriously one of my favourites. Pleaseeeee keep writing! I can't wait to see what happens next. :D
3/30/2010 c4 2The Strike Freedom
i really like how this story is going. I love stories that apply real life issues to anime and i have really enjoyed reading this.
updates soon :)
2The Strike Freedomi really like how this story is going. I love stories that apply real life issues to anime and i have really enjoyed reading this.
updates soon :)
3/4/2010 c9 5ChaosAnn
please update it!
I like the flow of the story, even though this is my first time to read Rated: M.
So, please update it.
5ChaosAnnplease update it!
I like the flow of the story, even though this is my first time to read Rated: M.
So, please update it.
8/13/2009 c9 8Zero'N'oveR
Oh. My. God.
I've just returned from my trip to a foreign place, and in return, I receive a brand new chapter of AKIAAOL! [Made it up on the spot. Sue me later if it is unappealing~]
Ah...where to start where to start.
1) The French is back. It creates much of the spice and variety of the conversations between the characters. Add a bit more here and there because it adds flair.
2) Minor grammatical errors.
To is a from of movement from one place to another.
Too is an addition to something.
And apostrophes are added to show possessiveness of objects.
You have a few sentences that can use this correction.
3) I love Kira x Murrue fics. I really do. I can't help but love siblingrealtionships between two non-family members. [Incest is not as much favored.] So when you threw THIS in, I was more than elastic to see such an involvement. By the way, I believe Murrue is only about 10~15 years older than him. Picturing her with wrinkles is a bit too much. Slightly.
4) The storyline is kicking up again. Oh you fiend, making me desperately wait for a new chapter. And if the chapter takes the same amount of time to update, I'm afraid you are going to lose a loyal member from hyperventalation. [So do not make me wait! *grins*]
5) As a personal note, I hope your life flows much more smoother as you pay off your debts and your loand.
From your loyal dieing member,
(ZNO)
8Zero'N'oveROh. My. God.
I've just returned from my trip to a foreign place, and in return, I receive a brand new chapter of AKIAAOL! [Made it up on the spot. Sue me later if it is unappealing~]
Ah...where to start where to start.
1) The French is back. It creates much of the spice and variety of the conversations between the characters. Add a bit more here and there because it adds flair.
2) Minor grammatical errors.
To is a from of movement from one place to another.
Too is an addition to something.
And apostrophes are added to show possessiveness of objects.
You have a few sentences that can use this correction.
3) I love Kira x Murrue fics. I really do. I can't help but love siblingrealtionships between two non-family members. [Incest is not as much favored.] So when you threw THIS in, I was more than elastic to see such an involvement. By the way, I believe Murrue is only about 10~15 years older than him. Picturing her with wrinkles is a bit too much. Slightly.
4) The storyline is kicking up again. Oh you fiend, making me desperately wait for a new chapter. And if the chapter takes the same amount of time to update, I'm afraid you are going to lose a loyal member from hyperventalation. [So do not make me wait! *grins*]
5) As a personal note, I hope your life flows much more smoother as you pay off your debts and your loand.
From your loyal dieing member,
(ZNO)