for Trespassing7/28/2012 c1 
3DarkAngel620
This is... it's just... wow. Honestly. I'm not sure how you did it but you seem to have PERFECTLY captured his character, the very esence of Blackheart, a hard thing to do mind you. It's beautifully written and I just loved how it seemlessly fit into the the movie scene at the end there. Awesome job. :D
3DarkAngel620This is... it's just... wow. Honestly. I'm not sure how you did it but you seem to have PERFECTLY captured his character, the very esence of Blackheart, a hard thing to do mind you. It's beautifully written and I just loved how it seemlessly fit into the the movie scene at the end there. Awesome job. :D
10/8/2008 c1 chalicity
bravo! very well-written an fitting to the character. i love the feel of this. bravo, indeed! :D
bravo! very well-written an fitting to the character. i love the feel of this. bravo, indeed! :D
9/11/2008 c1 21Ice-Princess-Amber
Very nice. Your style is rather unique in that it seems... archaic (from a different time period, to be more precise) Blackheart's thoughts would definitely make any theologian pause and consider if he could truly repent. Bravo.
21Ice-Princess-AmberVery nice. Your style is rather unique in that it seems... archaic (from a different time period, to be more precise) Blackheart's thoughts would definitely make any theologian pause and consider if he could truly repent. Bravo.
2/4/2008 c1 49Invader-Hime
Loved it!
This was a pleasant bit of Blackheart fiction. He's quite round for a bad guy and you explored this well. ^_^
49Invader-HimeLoved it!
This was a pleasant bit of Blackheart fiction. He's quite round for a bad guy and you explored this well. ^_^
1/10/2008 c1 43Princess Artemis
I have never seen the movie, nor knew much of the comic, but I don't think that matters in the slightest. This is wonderfully evocative and thoughtful, thought provoking.
Though the book is spelled Revelation...an easy error but one that did jar a bit.
43Princess ArtemisI have never seen the movie, nor knew much of the comic, but I don't think that matters in the slightest. This is wonderfully evocative and thoughtful, thought provoking.
Though the book is spelled Revelation...an easy error but one that did jar a bit.
12/26/2007 c1 20mithrilxmoon
This is beautifully written. I've envious of how effortlessly your prose flows. You've made Blackheart even more, much more, intriguing than he is in the movie (I've never read the comic...). His theological musings are wonderful and mind-boggling. You must write more!
20mithrilxmoonThis is beautifully written. I've envious of how effortlessly your prose flows. You've made Blackheart even more, much more, intriguing than he is in the movie (I've never read the comic...). His theological musings are wonderful and mind-boggling. You must write more!
12/18/2007 c1 cybergaki
Oh. I liked this very much. Very well written and true to character. I can picture Blackheart doing this very thing.
Oh. I liked this very much. Very well written and true to character. I can picture Blackheart doing this very thing.
11/17/2007 c1 Nightmare Anatomy
Amazing! I love the ending - a LOT! I really like how it tied into the story...and the way you captured Blackheart's personality! I can image him saying those exact lines in the movie! Once again, terrific job!
Amazing! I love the ending - a LOT! I really like how it tied into the story...and the way you captured Blackheart's personality! I can image him saying those exact lines in the movie! Once again, terrific job!
11/9/2007 c1 17Topgallant
Excuse me, did you hear that sound? Oh, I believe it was my jaw dropping to the floor.
Amazing, stunning work. Your descriptions and writing style simply flowed through the story, and the dialogue was excellent. You captured Blackheart's personality flawlessly.
In my personal opinion, you're one of the few people who portrayed him accurately on this entire website.
I also like the way that you tied it off cleanly into the movie.
I'd love to hear more of him. Well done!
17TopgallantExcuse me, did you hear that sound? Oh, I believe it was my jaw dropping to the floor.
Amazing, stunning work. Your descriptions and writing style simply flowed through the story, and the dialogue was excellent. You captured Blackheart's personality flawlessly.
In my personal opinion, you're one of the few people who portrayed him accurately on this entire website.
I also like the way that you tied it off cleanly into the movie.
I'd love to hear more of him. Well done!
8/7/2007 c1 Karate-Ninja-Queen
Amazing, i have never red anything like that. good job, i request another one from blackheart. you are very talented. thanks alot.
Amazing, i have never red anything like that. good job, i request another one from blackheart. you are very talented. thanks alot.
8/1/2007 c1 Ayame-the-Oreo
Geez, your like a professoinal or something because that was really good. You need to write more like that.
Geez, your like a professoinal or something because that was really good. You need to write more like that.
7/27/2007 c1 14blueangel994
Wow! I really really like Ghost Rider. The way people are about Harry Potter, that's how I am with GR, almost. You have an incredible writing talent! Your description of details are amazing to say the least, and you describe things so vivid that I would've never thought to even bother putting in a story. Keep up the good work! :D
~hnc~
14blueangel994Wow! I really really like Ghost Rider. The way people are about Harry Potter, that's how I am with GR, almost. You have an incredible writing talent! Your description of details are amazing to say the least, and you describe things so vivid that I would've never thought to even bother putting in a story. Keep up the good work! :D
~hnc~
7/26/2007 c1 9FlyingFish15
Wow! Very well written, you certainly have a flair for description; it was so real! And I really like your portrayal of Blackheart, keeping him in character while showing a lot more depth to him then we ever saw in the movie. A very good read indeed! *adds to favorites*
~FlyingFish15
9FlyingFish15Wow! Very well written, you certainly have a flair for description; it was so real! And I really like your portrayal of Blackheart, keeping him in character while showing a lot more depth to him then we ever saw in the movie. A very good read indeed! *adds to favorites*
~FlyingFish15