for Rebuilding a Broken Heart10/28/2011 c5 daisukeandhikari
I just finished reading this. Btw I am Syeda Abbas the one who left anonymous review on your fanfic My Work is Done. I decided to make an account finally.
Now, my comments. I personally don't support the idea of cheating but I do like the fact that Patamon and Gatomon came out clean with Veemon and didn't have affairs behind his back since that's what normally happens in fanfics and in real life. I been through the same thing myself unfortunately. :(
Also, I do hope you give Veemon some love and maybe have him being clueless that he actually loves the new wommon then Patamon and Gatomon can return the favour and play matchmaker :P Also I hope you keep Veemon and Gatomon good friends, because despite the fact that they are not together, I think even being in a short-term relationship they will always have a small bond with one another plus I think both Patamon and Gatomon will always respect Veemon for what he did for them.
As a suggestion for a girlfriend for Veemon, how about a Mikemon? I may not be a VeeGato supporter but I like the idea of him getting his own kitty ^^
I just finished reading this. Btw I am Syeda Abbas the one who left anonymous review on your fanfic My Work is Done. I decided to make an account finally.
Now, my comments. I personally don't support the idea of cheating but I do like the fact that Patamon and Gatomon came out clean with Veemon and didn't have affairs behind his back since that's what normally happens in fanfics and in real life. I been through the same thing myself unfortunately. :(
Also, I do hope you give Veemon some love and maybe have him being clueless that he actually loves the new wommon then Patamon and Gatomon can return the favour and play matchmaker :P Also I hope you keep Veemon and Gatomon good friends, because despite the fact that they are not together, I think even being in a short-term relationship they will always have a small bond with one another plus I think both Patamon and Gatomon will always respect Veemon for what he did for them.
As a suggestion for a girlfriend for Veemon, how about a Mikemon? I may not be a VeeGato supporter but I like the idea of him getting his own kitty ^^
7/1/2011 c5 
5SuperDryBombs
Good job, LP. Can you consider making a comedy P/G fic, like how I'm making a comedy V/G fic. I wanna see how it comes out :P
5SuperDryBombsGood job, LP. Can you consider making a comedy P/G fic, like how I'm making a comedy V/G fic. I wanna see how it comes out :P
6/8/2011 c1 Digimon Hearts
This story is adorable ^-^
You have amazing talent and do not listen to anyone attempting to plagiarise you, some people are just jealous.
Not the biggest Michi/Sorato fan but you made it work well ^_^
If you want to be friends, PM me and we can talk. Or I'll PM you xD :)
Amazing fic
This story is adorable ^-^
You have amazing talent and do not listen to anyone attempting to plagiarise you, some people are just jealous.
Not the biggest Michi/Sorato fan but you made it work well ^_^
If you want to be friends, PM me and we can talk. Or I'll PM you xD :)
Amazing fic
12/21/2010 c5 2Ventus du Stormclad
I'll be the first to say I don't support this couple, but I can enjoy good story, especially a romantic one even if I don't agree with it. Good story, gotta say after reading I like the pairing a bit more, though not enough to change my mind. Cause I think that cute kitty's heart belongs, to that crazy little azure dragon, by the way are you bilingual, able to speak two languages. Huge fan by the way... of you, not the pairing.
2Ventus du StormcladI'll be the first to say I don't support this couple, but I can enjoy good story, especially a romantic one even if I don't agree with it. Good story, gotta say after reading I like the pairing a bit more, though not enough to change my mind. Cause I think that cute kitty's heart belongs, to that crazy little azure dragon, by the way are you bilingual, able to speak two languages. Huge fan by the way... of you, not the pairing.
7/9/2010 c5 1Syra Yousuf
Aww please update this soon I am very much enjoying it you showed Veemon very well but may I make a request? Please give him some love too now that Patamon and Gatomon are together. I suggest Lunamon *nods*
1Syra YousufAww please update this soon I am very much enjoying it you showed Veemon very well but may I make a request? Please give him some love too now that Patamon and Gatomon are together. I suggest Lunamon *nods*
7/9/2010 c4 Syra Yousuf
Wow this was intense though I hope Gatomon breaks up with Veemon. Okay that came out wrong what I meant is I hope she tells him the truth and apologises and I hope you give him love too.
Wow this was intense though I hope Gatomon breaks up with Veemon. Okay that came out wrong what I meant is I hope she tells him the truth and apologises and I hope you give him love too.
7/9/2010 c3 Syra Yousuf
I totally love this chapter it is so beautiful Patamon and Gatomon make a really cute couple Im glad you didnt make Gatomon totally forget Wizardmon though its nice to know he'll be remembered I have a soft spot for WizaGato sorry :)
I totally love this chapter it is so beautiful Patamon and Gatomon make a really cute couple Im glad you didnt make Gatomon totally forget Wizardmon though its nice to know he'll be remembered I have a soft spot for WizaGato sorry :)
7/9/2010 c2 Syra Yousuf
Aww thats sweet but and this is not a flame. Just a few tips please dont be angry at it
- First Patamon cant digivolve without TK as Gatomon cant without Kari
- Secondly I feel you dont show TK and Patamon's friendship good I mean it came across that he doesnt even seem to care that Patamon is upset
Thats all other than that it was quite cute
Aww thats sweet but and this is not a flame. Just a few tips please dont be angry at it
- First Patamon cant digivolve without TK as Gatomon cant without Kari
- Secondly I feel you dont show TK and Patamon's friendship good I mean it came across that he doesnt even seem to care that Patamon is upset
Thats all other than that it was quite cute
7/9/2010 c1 Syra Yousuf
Very sweet there Lord Pata but I thought you were Taiora sorry I dont like Michi or Sorato much oh well I suppose Nekomon and I can look over that since it has Nekomon's lovely parents.
Nekomon: And I hope they get together in your story soon.
Very sweet there Lord Pata but I thought you were Taiora sorry I dont like Michi or Sorato much oh well I suppose Nekomon and I can look over that since it has Nekomon's lovely parents.
Nekomon: And I hope they get together in your story soon.
5/25/2010 c5 3Chosen child of loyalty
I just read this fic you showed everyone so true to character I love it when people do that and you showed Tai good as well didnt like the Michi much but I can overlook it I wasnt too picky with a story not being Taiora before but since Tai is my favorite character and he seems to be bashed a lot I decided to turn pro Taichi and Taiora so its like my fav couple but I loved this fic so short and sweet hopefully you update soon.
3Chosen child of loyaltyI just read this fic you showed everyone so true to character I love it when people do that and you showed Tai good as well didnt like the Michi much but I can overlook it I wasnt too picky with a story not being Taiora before but since Tai is my favorite character and he seems to be bashed a lot I decided to turn pro Taichi and Taiora so its like my fav couple but I loved this fic so short and sweet hopefully you update soon.
3/23/2010 c3 27MechaUltimaZero
"She was mounting Patamon"... that sounds wrong on so many levels, I can't even begin to go into it.
But other than the insanity that my mind notices like that, another satisfying update. BTW, think you could translate your humancentric fics into English for me? I'm learning Spanish, but I can't read an entire story yet.
I seem to be much better at human interactions than those concerning the Digimon themselves, as my Pata/Gato fic needs a helluva lot of work before I'm satisfied with it enough to publish. Any tips?
27MechaUltimaZero"She was mounting Patamon"... that sounds wrong on so many levels, I can't even begin to go into it.
But other than the insanity that my mind notices like that, another satisfying update. BTW, think you could translate your humancentric fics into English for me? I'm learning Spanish, but I can't read an entire story yet.
I seem to be much better at human interactions than those concerning the Digimon themselves, as my Pata/Gato fic needs a helluva lot of work before I'm satisfied with it enough to publish. Any tips?
3/22/2010 c2 MechaUltimaZero
Interesting indeed... I've seen re-re-RE-resurrected Myotismon done to bits, and Etemon used once, but I don't think I've ever seen Devimon reused as a villain, even for just one chapter. Hrm.
Anyway, at least you tried VeeGato, and for that I dub you almost-but-not-quite Saint Pata. To become a full Saint, you must... wait, I haven't decided yet. Hrm... just keep doin' what you're doin', I guess... At any rate, good job, and never surrender, never give in (to writer's block) !
Interesting indeed... I've seen re-re-RE-resurrected Myotismon done to bits, and Etemon used once, but I don't think I've ever seen Devimon reused as a villain, even for just one chapter. Hrm.
Anyway, at least you tried VeeGato, and for that I dub you almost-but-not-quite Saint Pata. To become a full Saint, you must... wait, I haven't decided yet. Hrm... just keep doin' what you're doin', I guess... At any rate, good job, and never surrender, never give in (to writer's block) !
3/22/2010 c1 MechaUltimaZero
Hrm... Interesting. I can't really tell ya if it's good or bad yet, but it's certainly interesting, I'll give ya that.
Anyway, I always liked Tai/Sora a few million times better than Matt/Sora, but I guess Tai/Mimi is funny enough to make up for it... maybe... Hrm, I'll have to investigate that, won't I? Also, those pairing names confuse the hell out of me sometimes. I know it's a bit shorter, but T.K./Kari and Tai/Mimi make more sense to me than "Takari" and "Michi". I had no idea what the hell that meant.
Hrm... Interesting. I can't really tell ya if it's good or bad yet, but it's certainly interesting, I'll give ya that.
Anyway, I always liked Tai/Sora a few million times better than Matt/Sora, but I guess Tai/Mimi is funny enough to make up for it... maybe... Hrm, I'll have to investigate that, won't I? Also, those pairing names confuse the hell out of me sometimes. I know it's a bit shorter, but T.K./Kari and Tai/Mimi make more sense to me than "Takari" and "Michi". I had no idea what the hell that meant.