for Onigiri Oni Giri1/21/2011 c1 
12Miyu Hinamori
Say, how many reviews do you want to continue the story. I mean you've got 45 now, counting me in! Write more, I wanna see what happens with Tohru. It is her, right? Can you also bring in a few Juunishi, they can pretend to be devil fruit eaters to not cause suspicion.
12Miyu HinamoriSay, how many reviews do you want to continue the story. I mean you've got 45 now, counting me in! Write more, I wanna see what happens with Tohru. It is her, right? Can you also bring in a few Juunishi, they can pretend to be devil fruit eaters to not cause suspicion.
12/27/2010 c1 4CreativityIsWriting
Hope to read more soon this story looks like it will be a good one.
4CreativityIsWritingHope to read more soon this story looks like it will be a good one.
10/5/2010 c1 4AlexTheGoth
I really liked that! Please do more! chapterschapterschapters!
Bahbye! Love Yah'
4AlexTheGothI really liked that! Please do more! chapterschapterschapters!
Bahbye! Love Yah'
7/21/2010 c1 9ClassicCartoon27
Ineresting rewrite. Very different approch to it's predicessor, can't wait to see what happens.
9ClassicCartoon27Ineresting rewrite. Very different approch to it's predicessor, can't wait to see what happens.
7/19/2010 c1 1Kage Hakari
i didn't get to read the note you left because i keep getting this outdated url thing. so could you explain the rewrite please?
1Kage Hakarii didn't get to read the note you left because i keep getting this outdated url thing. so could you explain the rewrite please?
7/17/2010 c1 ShyAznGrl94
hmm i guess this is pretty good but i would want you to update it daily. i mean i liked the previous story also b/c i've been waiting for it to be updated but you never did. i wish you didnt erased that one and i wished you finished it. oh well. this is a good beginning though. so is tohru gonna get involved with luffy and his crew?
hmm i guess this is pretty good but i would want you to update it daily. i mean i liked the previous story also b/c i've been waiting for it to be updated but you never did. i wish you didnt erased that one and i wished you finished it. oh well. this is a good beginning though. so is tohru gonna get involved with luffy and his crew?
7/17/2010 c1 6FriggyEsquire
Umm... This WAS the story with Tohru finding ZORO and joining the crew and all that, right? Did you just... decide to make it a run off of your organization series to be able to continue it? I liked it just as much before, but I have hope for this new one I guess.
6FriggyEsquireUmm... This WAS the story with Tohru finding ZORO and joining the crew and all that, right? Did you just... decide to make it a run off of your organization series to be able to continue it? I liked it just as much before, but I have hope for this new one I guess.