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4Borys68
Interesting but PLEASE re-read what you've written. The lack of suffixes is cringe worthy. And for All What is Holy - not ROHANS! Rohirrim or Eorlingas! Horselords, horseboys, strawheads, anything but ROHANS.
In the last chapter you have regent instead of regret, for instance. All the typos, misspellings etc. make the whole story look like a draught.
Phillip? PHILLIP?! I can pull a name like Horslieb from my ass - it means the same but at least remotely looks like a Rohirrim name.
And you dashed my hopes for a Ryder/Danica romance :(
Borys
4Borys68Interesting but PLEASE re-read what you've written. The lack of suffixes is cringe worthy. And for All What is Holy - not ROHANS! Rohirrim or Eorlingas! Horselords, horseboys, strawheads, anything but ROHANS.
In the last chapter you have regent instead of regret, for instance. All the typos, misspellings etc. make the whole story look like a draught.
Phillip? PHILLIP?! I can pull a name like Horslieb from my ass - it means the same but at least remotely looks like a Rohirrim name.
And you dashed my hopes for a Ryder/Danica romance :(
Borys
12/1/2012 c1 1Mitodoteira
Um, I guess I was always a good-Orc person so my opinion might be biased, but I think in the books there are certainly hints that the orcs are, if not good, still sentient but mostly just brought up to hate elves/men/dwarves much the same way that elves/men/dvarves are taught that the orcs are filthy beasts.
1MitodoteiraUm, I guess I was always a good-Orc person so my opinion might be biased, but I think in the books there are certainly hints that the orcs are, if not good, still sentient but mostly just brought up to hate elves/men/dwarves much the same way that elves/men/dvarves are taught that the orcs are filthy beasts.
11/7/2012 c19 3LadyWolfRider
I like the insight into orc culture from Elrond's point of view at the start and of course the rest as well. I look forward to the continuation of your fic.
I do think it needs one more look through for grammar, there are a few places where the wording is awkward, almost repetitive and doesn't feel quite correct. It is especially jarring in Elrond's section as his thoughts should reflect his wise manner.
Glad you're back Firechild, very glad indeed.
3LadyWolfRiderI like the insight into orc culture from Elrond's point of view at the start and of course the rest as well. I look forward to the continuation of your fic.
I do think it needs one more look through for grammar, there are a few places where the wording is awkward, almost repetitive and doesn't feel quite correct. It is especially jarring in Elrond's section as his thoughts should reflect his wise manner.
Glad you're back Firechild, very glad indeed.
1/22/2012 c18 Darkness
A new chapter *.*
Thank you so much. I loved it. Estel/Mokûrz is finally adoptet into Kaghed's family. Elrond had a vision about the adoption, I am sure of it. Ryder will have a hard time in the orc camp but I am interested how you will integrate him in the orc-tribe.
I hope the next chapter will not take as long as the last one. ;)
A new chapter *.*
Thank you so much. I loved it. Estel/Mokûrz is finally adoptet into Kaghed's family. Elrond had a vision about the adoption, I am sure of it. Ryder will have a hard time in the orc camp but I am interested how you will integrate him in the orc-tribe.
I hope the next chapter will not take as long as the last one. ;)
12/25/2011 c18 3LadyWolfRider
You have returned my friend and brought your wonderful story with you!
This was a great chapter, I can't wait for more.
3LadyWolfRiderYou have returned my friend and brought your wonderful story with you!
This was a great chapter, I can't wait for more.
8/16/2011 c17 Jess
I know this is probably hopeless, and you probably will never finish this or ever even right on FF.net ever again, but this is awesome. It made my day. I truly want to see how this turns out. Too many questions peaked my mind to be put in a review and it's been a long time since that happened. I am BEGGING you to continue this, to not abandon this!
I know this is probably hopeless, and you probably will never finish this or ever even right on FF.net ever again, but this is awesome. It made my day. I truly want to see how this turns out. Too many questions peaked my mind to be put in a review and it's been a long time since that happened. I am BEGGING you to continue this, to not abandon this!
10/5/2010 c17 Anonymous
Finally an update! I have been reading your story for a while now. Sorry I never reviewed until now. 42 reviews are much too little for a story that good. I really like your story. You made your orcs very realistic. I can't wait for your next update.
I was wondering, if the orcs have skills in healing, maybe they have an antidote against the poison of the spiders in Mirkwood?
Keep it up!
Finally an update! I have been reading your story for a while now. Sorry I never reviewed until now. 42 reviews are much too little for a story that good. I really like your story. You made your orcs very realistic. I can't wait for your next update.
I was wondering, if the orcs have skills in healing, maybe they have an antidote against the poison of the spiders in Mirkwood?
Keep it up!
10/2/2010 c17 LadyWolfRider
You're back! What a great chapter after so long, it is great to continue reading this unique tale again. There are a few mistakes here and there but overall the chapter showed the growing dynamic of Estel and his new home.
You're back! What a great chapter after so long, it is great to continue reading this unique tale again. There are a few mistakes here and there but overall the chapter showed the growing dynamic of Estel and his new home.
12/13/2009 c16 1Laetitia du Chatelet
I am still torn between disgust I feel for orcs, and the gratitude for caring for Estel...Still, I really hope that Elrond will find him soon. Well, I won't mind having the human boy as Aragorn's servant either...
1Laetitia du ChateletI am still torn between disgust I feel for orcs, and the gratitude for caring for Estel...Still, I really hope that Elrond will find him soon. Well, I won't mind having the human boy as Aragorn's servant either...
10/8/2009 c16 3mimifoxlove
hi
great chapter!
I think it sweet that Kaghed 'save' the young man who was fighting with the orcs. What will Estel going to think when his adoptive father come home with a slave?
update soon
-mimi
3mimifoxlovehi
great chapter!
I think it sweet that Kaghed 'save' the young man who was fighting with the orcs. What will Estel going to think when his adoptive father come home with a slave?
update soon
-mimi
10/8/2009 c16 3LadyWolfRider
So good! the image of Aragorn snuggling with the worg is so cute! This chapter was once again a delight to read and I can not wait for the next
3LadyWolfRiderSo good! the image of Aragorn snuggling with the worg is so cute! This chapter was once again a delight to read and I can not wait for the next
9/29/2009 c15 3mimifoxlove
hi
I am so glad that Elrond come with Elohir on the search for Estel.I wounder what Elrond oldest son will think when he finds out that his father and little brother lefted without telling where they were going.
I am looking forword to reading the prequel to this story.
update soon
-mimi
3mimifoxlovehi
I am so glad that Elrond come with Elohir on the search for Estel.I wounder what Elrond oldest son will think when he finds out that his father and little brother lefted without telling where they were going.
I am looking forword to reading the prequel to this story.
update soon
-mimi