for Pure Hope6/10/2008 c5 snowbirdyoukai
Interesting story so far. I'm glad you've made her strong. She fears Sesshoumaru which is healthy, but is not a wimp about it. She stands up for herself. It would seem he has something planned for her, to use her in some way. I hope one of his plans is for her to restore is arm once she learns to control her powers. I hate that part of the anime. I like a two armed Sesshoumaru, especially in love scenes.
It was a little distracting to read when you began to switch from 3rd person to 1st person. Back and forth, even in the same paragraph. It seems you've chosen to switch to 1st person.
This Snowbird looks forward to an enjoyable story.
Interesting story so far. I'm glad you've made her strong. She fears Sesshoumaru which is healthy, but is not a wimp about it. She stands up for herself. It would seem he has something planned for her, to use her in some way. I hope one of his plans is for her to restore is arm once she learns to control her powers. I hate that part of the anime. I like a two armed Sesshoumaru, especially in love scenes.
It was a little distracting to read when you began to switch from 3rd person to 1st person. Back and forth, even in the same paragraph. It seems you've chosen to switch to 1st person.
This Snowbird looks forward to an enjoyable story.
5/25/2008 c5 
3Dolce Latte van Creme
Come on, Kagome! Show him who's boss! Kick his **! Kick his A. S. S.! That did not stand for the Sesshomaru&Kagome fanfic website, either! Update soon!
JA NE!
3Dolce Latte van CremeCome on, Kagome! Show him who's boss! Kick his **! Kick his A. S. S.! That did not stand for the Sesshomaru&Kagome fanfic website, either! Update soon!
JA NE!
5/25/2008 c5 9miss quirky bookworm
wow im sure that Sesshomaru was surprised with how Kagome defended herself but that would have been evil if u ended it where u thought u were going to . :(
9miss quirky bookwormwow im sure that Sesshomaru was surprised with how Kagome defended herself but that would have been evil if u ended it where u thought u were going to . :(
5/24/2008 c5 1slmCandle
EK!
I am uber happy now. thank you. that was a good dose of "happy juice" lol mOre More moRe morE please.
1slmCandleEK!
I am uber happy now. thank you. that was a good dose of "happy juice" lol mOre More moRe morE please.
5/24/2008 c4 2Lady Melisande
I really am enjoying this story! =)
Sesshomaru is such an ** haha.
Just watch out what 'person' you tell the story in...
its first person one moment and the next its in third.
other than that it is great!
2Lady MelisandeI really am enjoying this story! =)
Sesshomaru is such an ** haha.
Just watch out what 'person' you tell the story in...
its first person one moment and the next its in third.
other than that it is great!
1/31/2008 c4 3candycorn87
You must update soon! I can't stand the suspense! I wonder what he's going to do?
3candycorn87You must update soon! I can't stand the suspense! I wonder what he's going to do?