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25AntiSora
Haha! Oh, that was PRICELESS. Oh, I was highly amused when Tear confronted Luke. XD Oh, Jade is just made of WIN. XD
Nicely written, absolutely adorable and hilarious. XD
25AntiSoraHaha! Oh, that was PRICELESS. Oh, I was highly amused when Tear confronted Luke. XD Oh, Jade is just made of WIN. XD
Nicely written, absolutely adorable and hilarious. XD
1/11/2010 c1 7KaUiA
Short, funny and cute!
I love it!
Luke can be a little bit too dense sometimes!
Tear's just about the same way too!
Ha ha ha...
7KaUiAShort, funny and cute!
I love it!
Luke can be a little bit too dense sometimes!
Tear's just about the same way too!
Ha ha ha...
11/13/2008 c1 38NexusTehULF0o
Aw, Luke...How adorable.
I absolutely loved Jade in this fic. You had him spot on! * fav *
~ Thanks for the read!
~Nexus
38NexusTehULF0oAw, Luke...How adorable.
I absolutely loved Jade in this fic. You had him spot on! * fav *
~ Thanks for the read!
~Nexus
7/9/2008 c1 Nameless for now
That was absolutely adorable. XD I love how Luke thought he had something deadly the whole time when he was actually just crushing.
Tear seemed a bit OOC for a moment, but it worked. P:
And Jade's awesome. I loved, "Nothing had ever terrified Guy more in all of his life as when he awoke, in the dark of the night, to the cynical laughter of the Necromancer." especially. I can just imagine that. XD
But seriously, wonderful job on this fic. :) I enjoyed it a lot.
That was absolutely adorable. XD I love how Luke thought he had something deadly the whole time when he was actually just crushing.
Tear seemed a bit OOC for a moment, but it worked. P:
And Jade's awesome. I loved, "Nothing had ever terrified Guy more in all of his life as when he awoke, in the dark of the night, to the cynical laughter of the Necromancer." especially. I can just imagine that. XD
But seriously, wonderful job on this fic. :) I enjoyed it a lot.
5/3/2008 c1 26Jillian Leonhart
Kya!How cute! Luke is a lovesick little puppy!I wanna cuddle him!That is really a great idea!
26Jillian LeonhartKya!How cute! Luke is a lovesick little puppy!I wanna cuddle him!That is really a great idea!
3/12/2008 c1 18TechNomaNcer28
Cute story. Jade's such a smart-ass and so totally the bad guy here,in a good way of course.
18TechNomaNcer28Cute story. Jade's such a smart-ass and so totally the bad guy here,in a good way of course.
10/6/2007 c1 28iTomato
Oh My God. That was amazing. I absolutely loved the way you wrote Jade-snark, sarcasm, and awesome, perfectly done. And even the little notes about the other characters were spot on! Like the line about Guy jumping a hundred feet away-excellent XD
And I LOVED this bit:
Nothing had ever terrified Guy more in all of his life as when he awoke, in the dark of the night, to the cynical laughter of the Necromancer.
Had me laughing like woah.
So yes. I loved this fic so much. Characterizations of everyone were spot on. Luke/Tear for the win! Wonderful writing! :D
28iTomatoOh My God. That was amazing. I absolutely loved the way you wrote Jade-snark, sarcasm, and awesome, perfectly done. And even the little notes about the other characters were spot on! Like the line about Guy jumping a hundred feet away-excellent XD
And I LOVED this bit:
Nothing had ever terrified Guy more in all of his life as when he awoke, in the dark of the night, to the cynical laughter of the Necromancer.
Had me laughing like woah.
So yes. I loved this fic so much. Characterizations of everyone were spot on. Luke/Tear for the win! Wonderful writing! :D
8/14/2007 c1 2Hattertant
Oh shoot I'm so sorry for favoriting it and then forgetting to review...I know that must have pissed you off. :(
Anyway...This was a pretty funny story, how Jade solves the mysterious 'disease'. Great job! ^^
2HattertantOh shoot I'm so sorry for favoriting it and then forgetting to review...I know that must have pissed you off. :(
Anyway...This was a pretty funny story, how Jade solves the mysterious 'disease'. Great job! ^^
8/11/2007 c1 VilyaSage
Sorry, too lazy to log in. Silly numbers telling me I am human...
Anyway. This was a very cute story! I liked Luke's reactions (they were very HIM), and Tear's little explosion was right on her character too. Jade got a little OOC at the end, but the cuteness makes up for it. Great read. :)
Sorry, too lazy to log in. Silly numbers telling me I am human...
Anyway. This was a very cute story! I liked Luke's reactions (they were very HIM), and Tear's little explosion was right on her character too. Jade got a little OOC at the end, but the cuteness makes up for it. Great read. :)