for Flight and Fall9/10/2008 c1 
16LaueHime
great oneshot. i liked the way you put nathan's memories in their. they felt real with the story. all of it was well written as well. i enjoyed and had a great time reading it. thanks for writing
16LaueHimegreat oneshot. i liked the way you put nathan's memories in their. they felt real with the story. all of it was well written as well. i enjoyed and had a great time reading it. thanks for writing
9/28/2007 c1 13Polly
I loved this fic - it's superbly paced and pieced together: the action, dialogue and flashbacks really meld well together. Plus, I love the way that Nathan can go through all of that brotherly turmoil only to come out of it the other end with a perfect lie, tripping off the tongue. It was a very realistic portrayal of the inner journey Nathan might have gone through up to the start of chapter 2.
13PollyI loved this fic - it's superbly paced and pieced together: the action, dialogue and flashbacks really meld well together. Plus, I love the way that Nathan can go through all of that brotherly turmoil only to come out of it the other end with a perfect lie, tripping off the tongue. It was a very realistic portrayal of the inner journey Nathan might have gone through up to the start of chapter 2.
9/3/2007 c1 92zookitty
great story! really well written, adorible! yay Petrelli!
I really love it. great job!
-zooky-
92zookittygreat story! really well written, adorible! yay Petrelli!
I really love it. great job!
-zooky-
8/28/2007 c1 Kathy
What's with the typos? "Held it out of Peter's reached." "he was supposed to come over Mark's house " you don't come over to Mark's you go over to Mark's. Please fix the errors it will make the story better.
What's with the typos? "Held it out of Peter's reached." "he was supposed to come over Mark's house " you don't come over to Mark's you go over to Mark's. Please fix the errors it will make the story better.
8/20/2007 c1 25Ladywilde
Oh wow! This was amazing. The flashbacks were beautifully done and added so much to the story. I really loved it... nice look inside Nathan's head and at his relationship w. Peter.
Lovely.
25LadywildeOh wow! This was amazing. The flashbacks were beautifully done and added so much to the story. I really loved it... nice look inside Nathan's head and at his relationship w. Peter.
Lovely.
8/19/2007 c1 94Road1985J2
That was really great, I've loved it. I also love the relationship between the brothers.
It was a fantastic story.
94Road1985J2That was really great, I've loved it. I also love the relationship between the brothers.
It was a fantastic story.
8/19/2007 c1 14Gosurori-Otaku
This almost made me cry- especially the flashbacky bits! ^^
Only error is that Nathan is a politician, not a lawyer!
14Gosurori-OtakuThis almost made me cry- especially the flashbacky bits! ^^
Only error is that Nathan is a politician, not a lawyer!
8/19/2007 c1 110Hieiko
I felt like crying, too... when Nathan was feeling SO guilty over having dropped his brother...
110HieikoI felt like crying, too... when Nathan was feeling SO guilty over having dropped his brother...
8/19/2007 c1 55GreenLeoFiend
Great story! I really enjoyed! Great narrative! Great flashback, great insight! And then of course Peter shows up on the roof and Nathan gets scared that Peter will do it again! Oh how I love the brothers. They are my main reason for watching too! ;-) Great job!
55GreenLeoFiendGreat story! I really enjoyed! Great narrative! Great flashback, great insight! And then of course Peter shows up on the roof and Nathan gets scared that Peter will do it again! Oh how I love the brothers. They are my main reason for watching too! ;-) Great job!