for Within Green Eyes7/24/2011 c5 
2Aggie Holmes
I really like this story, I love how it switches from Lily to Harry! You can really see the differences in Petunia too, I love the sister interaction. Thanks!
- Aggie
2Aggie HolmesI really like this story, I love how it switches from Lily to Harry! You can really see the differences in Petunia too, I love the sister interaction. Thanks!
- Aggie
3/25/2008 c5 72AngelMoon Girl
You're such a good writer! I love this story and how well you compare Harry and Lily. So who was the lady on Harry's birthday? Petunia or Lily? My guess is Petunia.
Update soon!
Angel
72AngelMoon GirlYou're such a good writer! I love this story and how well you compare Harry and Lily. So who was the lady on Harry's birthday? Petunia or Lily? My guess is Petunia.
Update soon!
Angel
2/26/2008 c5 luthian-elanor
Really great Job!
I Like this story it's different, sweet, sad, and well written.
I hope you update soon I'll be looking forward to it!
10/10
Really great Job!
I Like this story it's different, sweet, sad, and well written.
I hope you update soon I'll be looking forward to it!
10/10
2/24/2008 c5 Jessiz
I quite missed this story :D
Yet again, I really loved it. I like how you added a lot more detail to the already written events, it's a lot more fun to read that way. xD
Thank-you for updating, and I hope to see more chapters soon. :)
I quite missed this story :D
Yet again, I really loved it. I like how you added a lot more detail to the already written events, it's a lot more fun to read that way. xD
Thank-you for updating, and I hope to see more chapters soon. :)
2/24/2008 c5 25Emmy-loo
Well...okay, but only because you asked so nicely. :)
This is a good chapter, but there are a few, very minor, errors. You capitalized Glare, for example, which makes sense in some instances, but not this one in particular. Other than that, very good work! I like the contrast you show with Petunia's reaction to magic - in the first half she's an overprotective, jealous sister, and in the second she's spiteful and mean. Keep it up!
25Emmy-looWell...okay, but only because you asked so nicely. :)
This is a good chapter, but there are a few, very minor, errors. You capitalized Glare, for example, which makes sense in some instances, but not this one in particular. Other than that, very good work! I like the contrast you show with Petunia's reaction to magic - in the first half she's an overprotective, jealous sister, and in the second she's spiteful and mean. Keep it up!
9/30/2007 c4 ratherfeelpain93
god i hate aunt petunia. i never could get how she could do that to her sister's son.
god i hate aunt petunia. i never could get how she could do that to her sister's son.
9/30/2007 c4 Jessiz
This was amazing, as usual.
Poor Harry. D=!
Great job, update soon!
And also,
"Quivering, but not entirely from the cold, he opened the door to the cupboard, entered, and pulled the latch from the inside."
That was my favourite line.
Possibly my favourite EVER.
This was amazing, as usual.
Poor Harry. D=!
Great job, update soon!
And also,
"Quivering, but not entirely from the cold, he opened the door to the cupboard, entered, and pulled the latch from the inside."
That was my favourite line.
Possibly my favourite EVER.
8/23/2007 c3 Jessiz
Awh, poor Harry.
AND YES, IT WAS FUN.
xDD
Thanks again.
You have to update soon, this is amazing!
Awh, poor Harry.
AND YES, IT WAS FUN.
xDD
Thanks again.
You have to update soon, this is amazing!
8/22/2007 c2 Jessiz
Awh, I love you. xD
And, this was sad. D=
Although, I can imagine both things happening to the two.
Great chapter! Update soon!
Awh, I love you. xD
And, this was sad. D=
Although, I can imagine both things happening to the two.
Great chapter! Update soon!