for The Fourth Tale4/21 c44 Mean Man
Haha! You, your uncle, and your fic suck balls. :) :) :) :) :) :D :D :D
Way to not mention Loyd's and Ursula's deaths moron! And Akeli or whatever your retarded name was SUCKED! The lame-ass personality, the shitty clichè backstory, His stuck-up and bitchy-ness, the whole religion-smartass-fanboy stuff made me wanna slug your grandma! Its awful like you sick pervert!
I'll find you and bash your face in then tear your testicles off and shove a pineapple up your ass and anus!
*Ahem* I apologize, pretend none of the above happened and I'll just say "You suck."
Good day. Nice weather we're having?
bitch.
Haha! You, your uncle, and your fic suck balls. :) :) :) :) :) :D :D :D
Way to not mention Loyd's and Ursula's deaths moron! And Akeli or whatever your retarded name was SUCKED! The lame-ass personality, the shitty clichè backstory, His stuck-up and bitchy-ness, the whole religion-smartass-fanboy stuff made me wanna slug your grandma! Its awful like you sick pervert!
I'll find you and bash your face in then tear your testicles off and shove a pineapple up your ass and anus!
*Ahem* I apologize, pretend none of the above happened and I'll just say "You suck."
Good day. Nice weather we're having?
bitch.
4/21 c27 Cruel Man
Haha! Your uncle had it coming! :D
Haha! Your uncle had it coming! :D
10/9/2012 c6 I thought
I should've read the reviews before taking a dip.
You honestly think this belongs to the community of tactician stories done well?
This tactician is so op and stu it boggles my mind that no one had the decency to tell you in the opening few chapters of this story. It's sort of what you would expect if you combine for instance Light Yagami's genius, Majin Buu's power and Eliwood's morality. It is Gandhi, Chuck Norris, and Rommel combined. In other words, it's a joke. Now if you were to tell me this is a parody of similar tacticians I'd be somewhat more enthusiastic to read this.
I should've read the reviews before taking a dip.
You honestly think this belongs to the community of tactician stories done well?
This tactician is so op and stu it boggles my mind that no one had the decency to tell you in the opening few chapters of this story. It's sort of what you would expect if you combine for instance Light Yagami's genius, Majin Buu's power and Eliwood's morality. It is Gandhi, Chuck Norris, and Rommel combined. In other words, it's a joke. Now if you were to tell me this is a parody of similar tacticians I'd be somewhat more enthusiastic to read this.
12/12/2011 c7 CodeCid
An epic tale of hopeless Gary Stuery, congratulations. I suggest reading "On Writing". Character development and plot. Brush up on grammar, btw.
An epic tale of hopeless Gary Stuery, congratulations. I suggest reading "On Writing". Character development and plot. Brush up on grammar, btw.
11/25/2011 c44 MilleniaMaster
I'm now definitely a fan of this story, Alkeni.
The chapters were short, but theyre gith to the point, and I like that. I also like how you added that mid-war romance stuff with Lyn and Alkeni, I like stories like that, so good work.
I'll be sure look forward to the new sequel. The teaser was a cliffhanger, so I'm all antsy about the new story.
I'm a fan, just saying. ;)
I'm now definitely a fan of this story, Alkeni.
The chapters were short, but theyre gith to the point, and I like that. I also like how you added that mid-war romance stuff with Lyn and Alkeni, I like stories like that, so good work.
I'll be sure look forward to the new sequel. The teaser was a cliffhanger, so I'm all antsy about the new story.
I'm a fan, just saying. ;)
9/23/2011 c44 Kazuho Muramasa - Cant login
This is... the Third best fic I've read for Fire Emblem. I loved your story, so do go on. I expect a Journey... through Tellius and Magvel.
1st: Fire Emblem: Spellbinding Raidiance
2nd: Kageshoujo's FE 7 and FE 6 stories. FEVII: Trials Of A Teenage Tactition(I THINK thats the name..) FEVI: BERN/Queen Of Bern
3rd: The Fourth Tale - Der You.
4th: A Debt Of Honor
This is... the Third best fic I've read for Fire Emblem. I loved your story, so do go on. I expect a Journey... through Tellius and Magvel.
1st: Fire Emblem: Spellbinding Raidiance
2nd: Kageshoujo's FE 7 and FE 6 stories. FEVII: Trials Of A Teenage Tactition(I THINK thats the name..) FEVI: BERN/Queen Of Bern
3rd: The Fourth Tale - Der You.
4th: A Debt Of Honor
9/22/2011 c36 Guest
YUP. Im not reading this anymore.
Ninian's dead, THE FUCK?
YUP. Im not reading this anymore.
Ninian's dead, THE FUCK?
9/22/2011 c13 Guest
I see Eragon rip offs
I see Eragon rip offs
9/22/2011 c6 tHe FlAmEs Of WaR
you suck! -trollface-
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Kidding xD! I think you've done well, I hope to see a Fire Emblem: Path Of Radiance story soon!
you suck! -trollface-
'_'
Kidding xD! I think you've done well, I hope to see a Fire Emblem: Path Of Radiance story soon!
7/23/2011 c42 
1Aang10
Well I'm not too fond of the Alkeni and Serra not getting along but other than that I find no problem with the story
1Aang10Well I'm not too fond of the Alkeni and Serra not getting along but other than that I find no problem with the story
3/12/2011 c44 Red Damian
Considering that you went as far as to leave your own writing as an example of what to do right in tactician-centered fanfiction, I expected something fantastic.
Instead, I see everything that, in your own words, makes tactician fic look bad.
A tactician who fights, despite this contradicting his canon role of being a tactician and staying out of the fray. Very little is given about the tactician; you could at least hold true to what is. Constant sassing and maligning of the canon characters, particularly rivals for Lyn's affection. (Say what you like about Kent, but there is no evidence whatsoever that he is racist. In fact, his supports with Lyn and behavior all throughout Sacae show otherwise, but you chose to demonize him to make your Alkeni look superior. Typical.) Numerous talents that make little to no sense for a tactician. Knife throwing, scripture quoting (and putting all the regular characters to shame with it - funny, considering you cannot even seem to spell "Elimine" correctly), tactics, ease with Sacaean words... well, isn't that just special.
Perhaps you should take a look at your own writing before trouncing over to others' stories and accusing them of making the tactician look bad? Having a popular, well-known story does not make you a good writer or an authority. Just look at HP fandom's "My Immortal".
Considering that you went as far as to leave your own writing as an example of what to do right in tactician-centered fanfiction, I expected something fantastic.
Instead, I see everything that, in your own words, makes tactician fic look bad.
A tactician who fights, despite this contradicting his canon role of being a tactician and staying out of the fray. Very little is given about the tactician; you could at least hold true to what is. Constant sassing and maligning of the canon characters, particularly rivals for Lyn's affection. (Say what you like about Kent, but there is no evidence whatsoever that he is racist. In fact, his supports with Lyn and behavior all throughout Sacae show otherwise, but you chose to demonize him to make your Alkeni look superior. Typical.) Numerous talents that make little to no sense for a tactician. Knife throwing, scripture quoting (and putting all the regular characters to shame with it - funny, considering you cannot even seem to spell "Elimine" correctly), tactics, ease with Sacaean words... well, isn't that just special.
Perhaps you should take a look at your own writing before trouncing over to others' stories and accusing them of making the tactician look bad? Having a popular, well-known story does not make you a good writer or an authority. Just look at HP fandom's "My Immortal".
10/21/2010 c13 Guest
Your Tactician has a really interesting story
Your Tactician has a really interesting story
10/20/2010 c7 Guest
The story is getting pretty interesting, good job
The story is getting pretty interesting, good job