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10/20/2007 c1 9Sailor GaOn Donut
aww... so sad...
9/5/2007 c1 56Inulover4eva
Aw man, here I go crying 'cause of you.

you suck!

:huggles:

no, I kid. you ROCK!

but damn you and your talent for making such amazing stories! Why did Kira have to die? its no fair! (although I shouldn't be talking because in Lovely Phantasm I've killed off Cagalli .;) when Cagalli's words break off, and she stutters it gives such an images of her choking on her tears I want to die inside.

this was so very well written and executed and I love you, every bit of you, for it. thank you for dedicating such a wonderful piece to me.

:hugs:
9/1/2007 c1 Anonymous
Please try to keep references to religion (aside from the hawaiian goddess Haumea, in the case of Orb citizens) out of Gundam SEED fanfiction. The series takes place in a world in which religion in general has largely subsided as a result of the failure of religious authorities to provide a satisfactory explanation for Evidence One, the sample of alien life George Glenn recovered from Jupiter. With very few exceptions, religious references will immediately place your characters out of character.
8/31/2007 c1 5Third Time's The Charm
Hey...your story was written beautifuly (i think that's the word i'm looking for) I could rly sense Cagalli's pain. Hehe. I'm so glad u gave me the sight to watch or else i would have no clue of what was going on. Thanks a million. Oh and thanks for using Kira and Cagalli.
8/31/2007 c1 56junon2
Hi ^^ how are you?

Oh my God, it's so beuatiful and so sad *cry* Seriously, verry sad story but you made Cagalli's feeling alive ^^ The reader can feel the cagalli's pain ^^ really, good job ^^ and you're a good writer ^^

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