for Waiting for Dawn5/11 c4 Bugzy Eclipse
"...And you'll carry red roses and I'll have white – Edward she can't carry freesia all the time – oh ok we'll have some in there as well…"
Best line in this chapter! Dying!
"...And you'll carry red roses and I'll have white – Edward she can't carry freesia all the time – oh ok we'll have some in there as well…"
Best line in this chapter! Dying!
1/27 c20 Guest
awesome story, you are truly talented! thank you for writing..
awesome story, you are truly talented! thank you for writing..
12/29/2012 c31 SarcasticBimbo
This was a very enjoyable read. Thank you so much for posting it. Since you were writing this at the same time as Stephenie Meyer, I think you did a great job imagining it. I really enjoyed the passage of Bella getting her first whiff of human blood and her reaction to it. So different than Stephenie's yet so much the same. You are a very good writer. Stick with it. I am a fan.
This was a very enjoyable read. Thank you so much for posting it. Since you were writing this at the same time as Stephenie Meyer, I think you did a great job imagining it. I really enjoyed the passage of Bella getting her first whiff of human blood and her reaction to it. So different than Stephenie's yet so much the same. You are a very good writer. Stick with it. I am a fan.
12/28/2012 c1 ladylibre
WHOA. Edward's confession was like... wow.
I love "missing canon moments" fics, so I'm very excited!
Clicking NEXT...
WHOA. Edward's confession was like... wow.
I love "missing canon moments" fics, so I'm very excited!
Clicking NEXT...
11/14/2012 c12 Jane
thank you for the seeing the beauty through Bella's eyes.
thank you for the seeing the beauty through Bella's eyes.
11/14/2012 c11 Jane
Beautiful prose combining the beats with images of Bella's life.
Three sentences convey so much.
Thank you
Beautiful prose combining the beats with images of Bella's life.
Three sentences convey so much.
Thank you
10/26/2012 c33 LAB1
I have loved reading your story! Such a perfect romance without the heavy lemons I skip over. I'm thrilled with your writing style and your story is wonderful!
I have loved reading your story! Such a perfect romance without the heavy lemons I skip over. I'm thrilled with your writing style and your story is wonderful!

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