for Waiting for Dawn10/26/2012 c33 LAB1
I have loved reading your story! Such a perfect romance without the heavy lemons I skip over. I'm thrilled with your writing style and your story is wonderful!
I have loved reading your story! Such a perfect romance without the heavy lemons I skip over. I'm thrilled with your writing style and your story is wonderful!
10/16/2012 c2 anonymous
how sweet their getting married
how sweet their getting married
10/2/2012 c30 twilightgran
Really good story,) about a quarter of the way into the story I realized this was my second time reading it. I think it was even better the second time around. Anyway, thanks for sharing.)
Really good story,) about a quarter of the way into the story I realized this was my second time reading it. I think it was even better the second time around. Anyway, thanks for sharing.)
9/6/2012 c4 Just Sayin
Thank for sharing your story. As promised I started another chapter, however I did not have the strength to finish chapter 4. It's just not holding my attention.
Thank for sharing your story. As promised I started another chapter, however I did not have the strength to finish chapter 4. It's just not holding my attention.
9/6/2012 c3 Just Sayin
Ooops I meant *explain
So I'm at the end of chapter 3. Contemplating weather to continue. In all honesty the writing itself needs some work. I got a little bit confused at the end of chapter 3 ( the Alice Attacks bit) other parts was just a bit dry. Ok I will read one more chapter. If it doesn't get any better then on to the next. I tried.
Ooops I meant *explain
So I'm at the end of chapter 3. Contemplating weather to continue. In all honesty the writing itself needs some work. I got a little bit confused at the end of chapter 3 ( the Alice Attacks bit) other parts was just a bit dry. Ok I will read one more chapter. If it doesn't get any better then on to the next. I tried.
9/6/2012 c2 Just Sayin
So I found this second chapter to be a bit dry, but still toughing it out and will be reading the 3rd Chapter. I hope it gets better as I go.
Don't really understand this part where you wrote "Kissing Edward was like falling into him." yeah i didn't get that part.. How is kissing him like falling into him. Please explaine, if not...oh well...NEXT!
So I found this second chapter to be a bit dry, but still toughing it out and will be reading the 3rd Chapter. I hope it gets better as I go.
Don't really understand this part where you wrote "Kissing Edward was like falling into him." yeah i didn't get that part.. How is kissing him like falling into him. Please explaine, if not...oh well...NEXT!
9/6/2012 c1 Just Sayin
So far so good. Could have had a little more depth during convo with Charlie rather than just sayin..."I need her"
I'll give a chance and see how it goes.
So far so good. Could have had a little more depth during convo with Charlie rather than just sayin..."I need her"
I'll give a chance and see how it goes.
9/4/2012 c17 
9Dreaming while awake
Awesome story, love it. Um, that wasn't really Eliezars gift, unless I read the book wrong... I guess it doesn't really matter at this point!
9Dreaming while awakeAwesome story, love it. Um, that wasn't really Eliezars gift, unless I read the book wrong... I guess it doesn't really matter at this point!
7/19/2012 c25 Guest
"I was consumed by fire. No need for blood had ever been or could ever be as strong as my need for Edward at that moment. As he entered me I felt as if my soul opened up; I was the in the nucleus of the world; the universe was rushing through me and I in turn poured all of it back into him. I found hope there, in the center of everything where I couldn't tell where I ended and he began. Our bodies shuddered, meeting again and again as we found the rest of ourselves in each other."
I've read a tremendous amount of fanfic - good, bad, mediocre, great, etc., etc. But this description is ranks way up there as totally AWESOME! Love, hope, desperation, need, want, desire, with mind- and heart-blowing ecstasy! Rock on!
"I was consumed by fire. No need for blood had ever been or could ever be as strong as my need for Edward at that moment. As he entered me I felt as if my soul opened up; I was the in the nucleus of the world; the universe was rushing through me and I in turn poured all of it back into him. I found hope there, in the center of everything where I couldn't tell where I ended and he began. Our bodies shuddered, meeting again and again as we found the rest of ourselves in each other."
I've read a tremendous amount of fanfic - good, bad, mediocre, great, etc., etc. But this description is ranks way up there as totally AWESOME! Love, hope, desperation, need, want, desire, with mind- and heart-blowing ecstasy! Rock on!
7/16/2012 c29 Guest
Enjoyed this x
Enjoyed this x
6/26/2012 c33 4bronzed topaz
Did I read somewhere that you wrote this before Breaking Dawn? If so, you're psychic. It followed the storyline so well without including Renesmee. Actually, it was exactly what I was expecting of the book, and I didn't even factor in a half species baby.
If you wrote this after the book was published, again, it was great how you made the story your own. Whether or not you wrote the story before or after, you stuck so well to the characters. Everything they did, every little decision they made, was believable. There was not one moment where I thought that something was out of character. That's a momentous thing to achieve and I congratulate you on that immensely.
Though the Epilogue ended a bit too soon for my liking, the story was fabulous. Awesome job!
4bronzed topazDid I read somewhere that you wrote this before Breaking Dawn? If so, you're psychic. It followed the storyline so well without including Renesmee. Actually, it was exactly what I was expecting of the book, and I didn't even factor in a half species baby.
If you wrote this after the book was published, again, it was great how you made the story your own. Whether or not you wrote the story before or after, you stuck so well to the characters. Everything they did, every little decision they made, was believable. There was not one moment where I thought that something was out of character. That's a momentous thing to achieve and I congratulate you on that immensely.
Though the Epilogue ended a bit too soon for my liking, the story was fabulous. Awesome job!
5/22/2012 c29 babesbraves
This is one of the best fanfiction stories i have ever read and i am nearly 50! i laughed and i cried i read it in one sitting barely leaving my computer. please write more on the twilight saga you have a rare and wonderful talent that makes the book come alive like you are living it with the cullens. Thankyou!
This is one of the best fanfiction stories i have ever read and i am nearly 50! i laughed and i cried i read it in one sitting barely leaving my computer. please write more on the twilight saga you have a rare and wonderful talent that makes the book come alive like you are living it with the cullens. Thankyou!