for Through Glass9/17/2007 c1
85foxdvd
Amazing piece! The rhythm is almost poetical in itself, and the feelings are very well depicted. Very close to the truth, I'm afraid...
But amazingly well done!
85foxdvdAmazing piece! The rhythm is almost poetical in itself, and the feelings are very well depicted. Very close to the truth, I'm afraid...
But amazingly well done!
9/17/2007 c1
12Anne Herbold
This was great! A very nice reminder that Nick still suffers from being buried alive. Nick's my favorite character as well, and I was infuriated with the writers of CSI for not delving into more of Nick's feelings and how he was doing mentally after that horrific experience. You did a very good job writing this; I loved how you put it all in present tense, allowing the reading to sympathize and experience this with Nick. Again, lovely story; you kept the story realistic and Nick in-character, which some writers tend to forget. I certainly hope to read more of your stories!
12Anne HerboldThis was great! A very nice reminder that Nick still suffers from being buried alive. Nick's my favorite character as well, and I was infuriated with the writers of CSI for not delving into more of Nick's feelings and how he was doing mentally after that horrific experience. You did a very good job writing this; I loved how you put it all in present tense, allowing the reading to sympathize and experience this with Nick. Again, lovely story; you kept the story realistic and Nick in-character, which some writers tend to forget. I certainly hope to read more of your stories!
9/16/2007 c1
27PernDragonrider
Excellent, to me anyway. I know that the show didn't touch very much on this and your tale is definitely an exceptional look into the horrors Nick must face after the trauma of that time.
Keep up the wonderful work,
Pern
27PernDragonriderExcellent, to me anyway. I know that the show didn't touch very much on this and your tale is definitely an exceptional look into the horrors Nick must face after the trauma of that time.
Keep up the wonderful work,
Pern
