for Isis’s Dance4/13 c15 Vodka
Dude, Wheres my update?
Dude, Wheres my update?
3/26 c15 Shazza
OK L, loved Of Earth. now waiting on Of Fire, along with a few other things...Please?
OK L, loved Of Earth. now waiting on Of Fire, along with a few other things...Please?
3/26 c15 Shazza
I LOVED of water. This is something I wish Jenson could have read before starting to inturpret Dean. It really adds to the underlying strength and chatecter of the future Guardian.
I LOVED of water. This is something I wish Jenson could have read before starting to inturpret Dean. It really adds to the underlying strength and chatecter of the future Guardian.
3/26 c15 Shazza
I really liked your story about the crystal Dean gave to Caleb. Your many references to great children's books makes me very nostalgic.
I really liked your story about the crystal Dean gave to Caleb. Your many references to great children's books makes me very nostalgic.
3/26 c15 Shazza
Really L, Pilliers of Fire, not completed? Dean's doctor walks in? I am not starting anything else of your unless it's marked Complete! I am now humble before you and ask timidly for more please.
Really L, Pilliers of Fire, not completed? Dean's doctor walks in? I am not starting anything else of your unless it's marked Complete! I am now humble before you and ask timidly for more please.
3/26 c15 Shazza
Wow, I did not expect Circles. To bad he cw's Dean does not have that relevation. Dean seems to be drinking less, but only in contrast to his own history.
Wow, I did not expect Circles. To bad he cw's Dean does not have that relevation. Dean seems to be drinking less, but only in contrast to his own history.
3/26 c15 Shazza
I really like Bobby's voice in the story about love lifts. Dean and Bobby always had something special.
I really like Bobby's voice in the story about love lifts. Dean and Bobby always had something special.
3/26 c15 Shazza
Just read the story about being "special". A good friend has a son with downs syndrome. He is truly special
Just read the story about being "special". A good friend has a son with downs syndrome. He is truly special
3/26 c15 Shazza
OK, I just read First Steps, I really liked the tone of the story. Sentimental, without being smalzy. I will continue to review, in hopes that you will notice the changes in number and be inticed to come back.
OK, I just read First Steps, I really liked the tone of the story. Sentimental, without being smalzy. I will continue to review, in hopes that you will notice the changes in number and be inticed to come back.
3/26 c15 Shazza
I just started reading your stories, I am now awestruck in admiration for craft and imagination. I hope all is well with you and that I'll health or luck is not what stopped you from writing. I will continue to posts reviews in the hopes that whatever stopped your creativity has passed. I
I just started reading your stories, I am now awestruck in admiration for craft and imagination. I hope all is well with you and that I'll health or luck is not what stopped you from writing. I will continue to posts reviews in the hopes that whatever stopped your creativity has passed. I
2/18 c15 Guest
I'm guessing this is no longer being worked on or will be finished. But this story is great. Its interesting, has a lot of twists and turns, and a lot of information on your version of the brotherhood. I hope you decide to continue someday, but I understand creatively you may be done. Great job though!
I'm guessing this is no longer being worked on or will be finished. But this story is great. Its interesting, has a lot of twists and turns, and a lot of information on your version of the brotherhood. I hope you decide to continue someday, but I understand creatively you may be done. Great job though!
239/16/2012 c1 PokeyDotes
Ridley mentioned this in one of her stories, and I thought I should probably read it. I'm very glad I did. You had me from the first paragraph, and I swear, with the reading of each line I was pulled in more and more. Normally, I don't like it when anyone other than Ridley, Tidia, or Will attempts to do the Brotherhood, and I've only read the first chapter, but I think I'm hooked and I can already tell I'm really going to enjoy this.
Ridley mentioned this in one of her stories, and I thought I should probably read it. I'm very glad I did. You had me from the first paragraph, and I swear, with the reading of each line I was pulled in more and more. Normally, I don't like it when anyone other than Ridley, Tidia, or Will attempts to do the Brotherhood, and I've only read the first chapter, but I think I'm hooked and I can already tell I'm really going to enjoy this.
9/12/2012 c15 twotoe
You tell some of the most amazing intelligent realistic Brotherhood stories around and I love them. I don't know if you've stopped, but I really hope you update this story soon and I've been waiting and hoping to read the 'Of Fire' story as well. 'Of Water' was one of my faves.
I love how you mention the realistic soldier and hunter facts such as 'lose the shine' and then add that the Brotherhood wore their rings in defiance of the darkness. Really great writing. Dean and the silver he has called in his fevered mindset is pretty great too and I cannot wait to see what happens when Jim arrives. Jim being the full Guardian in the know, though I imagine that Dean being so strong to begin with is able to tap into a lot himself like this 'because' he is out of his mind. But still waiting on Jim. Remembering him mention how the other place wouldn't have been taken in the first place if a Guardian had been there-obviously because it was built on the silver. Love too the blending of the myths of Sir Gawain and his story in with the Brotherhood mythology as well. I love taking that leap. Gawain is interesting too and I keep wondering if we'll stumble on Roland too at some point as for some reason I always associate them from my college days. But I'm digressing. I find the detail here interesting as you add things such as Caleb's bracelet and his using a salt scrub as salt purifies doesn't it, and in so many ways in the Supernatural world. I believe Ridley has now even mentioned the bracelet in her stories. Or maybe Tidia, but I think it was Rid. All those little details are wonderful. Everything you write flows and is alive and interesting and I can't wait to read something more. Please, please think of updating. We're waiting for Nate to get his and to get Dean healed up soon-I hope. And please also if you aren't sure of all the details for this yet, maybe doing 'Of Fire'. Hope to see something soon.
You tell some of the most amazing intelligent realistic Brotherhood stories around and I love them. I don't know if you've stopped, but I really hope you update this story soon and I've been waiting and hoping to read the 'Of Fire' story as well. 'Of Water' was one of my faves.
I love how you mention the realistic soldier and hunter facts such as 'lose the shine' and then add that the Brotherhood wore their rings in defiance of the darkness. Really great writing. Dean and the silver he has called in his fevered mindset is pretty great too and I cannot wait to see what happens when Jim arrives. Jim being the full Guardian in the know, though I imagine that Dean being so strong to begin with is able to tap into a lot himself like this 'because' he is out of his mind. But still waiting on Jim. Remembering him mention how the other place wouldn't have been taken in the first place if a Guardian had been there-obviously because it was built on the silver. Love too the blending of the myths of Sir Gawain and his story in with the Brotherhood mythology as well. I love taking that leap. Gawain is interesting too and I keep wondering if we'll stumble on Roland too at some point as for some reason I always associate them from my college days. But I'm digressing. I find the detail here interesting as you add things such as Caleb's bracelet and his using a salt scrub as salt purifies doesn't it, and in so many ways in the Supernatural world. I believe Ridley has now even mentioned the bracelet in her stories. Or maybe Tidia, but I think it was Rid. All those little details are wonderful. Everything you write flows and is alive and interesting and I can't wait to read something more. Please, please think of updating. We're waiting for Nate to get his and to get Dean healed up soon-I hope. And please also if you aren't sure of all the details for this yet, maybe doing 'Of Fire'. Hope to see something soon.