for No Doubt3/18/2011 c1 
1sakurenjiDREamer
waw! :D
She knows that much about him? :D Well, she has the eyes to see behind his mask. :DD
Good job. :)
anyway, David defeated Goliath because he believed he can do it because God is on his side. :)
Galing mo talaga Zoofreak! :)
1sakurenjiDREamerwaw! :D
She knows that much about him? :D Well, she has the eyes to see behind his mask. :DD
Good job. :)
anyway, David defeated Goliath because he believed he can do it because God is on his side. :)
Galing mo talaga Zoofreak! :)
11/19/2007 c1 106Tatsumaki-sama
Aww! That was so sweet. I liked how you went "underneath it all" about Hiruma and how he's much deeper than the gun-wielding, bullet-shooting, devilish captain as we all know. Yay for Mamori and Hiruma moments!
106Tatsumaki-samaAww! That was so sweet. I liked how you went "underneath it all" about Hiruma and how he's much deeper than the gun-wielding, bullet-shooting, devilish captain as we all know. Yay for Mamori and Hiruma moments!
10/14/2007 c1 10devil cat07
are most of your stories before the game against the Hakushyu? I also noticed that most of them happened either in the locker/changing room or the clubhouse... Purposefully or incidentally?
10devil cat07are most of your stories before the game against the Hakushyu? I also noticed that most of them happened either in the locker/changing room or the clubhouse... Purposefully or incidentally?
10/10/2007 c1 18darkmage009
I may be writing a lame-** review but well since I scanned through this fic I thought I really might have to atleast give you a piece of my opinion.
It's a good fic. XD
you're definitely improving more. and the updates you write are... yay! cheers.
18darkmage009I may be writing a lame-** review but well since I scanned through this fic I thought I really might have to atleast give you a piece of my opinion.
It's a good fic. XD
you're definitely improving more. and the updates you write are... yay! cheers.
10/8/2007 c1 9lycanine
Good, good. Excellent writing of Mamori's feelings towards the upcoming game and of course, the devil quarterback.
Neither of them are OOC at all, the insight is totally like Mamori. Maybe you would like to try writing Hiruma's insight towards the upcoming game.
Gambatte!
9lycanineGood, good. Excellent writing of Mamori's feelings towards the upcoming game and of course, the devil quarterback.
Neither of them are OOC at all, the insight is totally like Mamori. Maybe you would like to try writing Hiruma's insight towards the upcoming game.
Gambatte!
10/7/2007 c1 Larethiana
Short but very beautiful story... I'm a boulimic reader...and your fiction was a delicious piece of art for my mind. I Love Mamori Character...Eyeshield21 is one of the new shonen which give a psychology and a mind to the feminine characters...and you respect it very well. Thank you for this fiction... i hope having the pleasure to read you more!
Short but very beautiful story... I'm a boulimic reader...and your fiction was a delicious piece of art for my mind. I Love Mamori Character...Eyeshield21 is one of the new shonen which give a psychology and a mind to the feminine characters...and you respect it very well. Thank you for this fiction... i hope having the pleasure to read you more!
10/7/2007 c1 22Luna Addictus
I hate you. You made me cry in public because I was reading your fic in an internet cafe.
Buwah...
I love your Mamo-nee, she's just so... Mamo-nee. . I hate you. XD!*
~ LA
22Luna AddictusI hate you. You made me cry in public because I was reading your fic in an internet cafe.
Buwah...
I love your Mamo-nee, she's just so... Mamo-nee. . I hate you. XD!*
~ LA