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4happy-go-lucky writer
Whoah! So cool! I wonder what happens next! Please update whenever you can :)
4happy-go-lucky writerWhoah! So cool! I wonder what happens next! Please update whenever you can :)
5/3 c16 3Alara Phoenix
Daaaaaaamn! This is real interesting! Like amazingly so! Haha, to be completely honest I first came across this story on Deviant (I was looking for a good pic of a humanized Kurama to help me with my own fic, nothing posted yet unfortunately) while looking through Lizeth's amaaazing art and I really think you're doing them justice! It's even better because I have both visuals and the story :) Thanks for writing and keep it up yeah? I'll be waiting for more! :D!
3Alara PhoenixDaaaaaaamn! This is real interesting! Like amazingly so! Haha, to be completely honest I first came across this story on Deviant (I was looking for a good pic of a humanized Kurama to help me with my own fic, nothing posted yet unfortunately) while looking through Lizeth's amaaazing art and I really think you're doing them justice! It's even better because I have both visuals and the story :) Thanks for writing and keep it up yeah? I'll be waiting for more! :D!
4/20 c16 Jostanos
YOU PASS!
FLAWLESS VICTORY!
*eyes wide as saucers* HOLY FRELL!
*smiles* Enough said.
YOU PASS!
FLAWLESS VICTORY!
*eyes wide as saucers* HOLY FRELL!
*smiles* Enough said.
4/17 c16 3ByeByeBriar
This is an awesome story. I love how this AU is turning out with the relationships between the Kyuubi and Naruto, and everyone else. Keep up the good work and please up date soon!
3ByeByeBriarThis is an awesome story. I love how this AU is turning out with the relationships between the Kyuubi and Naruto, and everyone else. Keep up the good work and please up date soon!
4/15 c16 6Azrielle.Antoinette
You know, I've seen the flames that people keep sending and I don't get the point of them. I'm not saying that they're idiots but... You have basically addressed the same things in the two flames that you've put in the chapters. I find it interesting how you made Minato seem weak, to a point. It strengthens his character to me. It shows that he isn't a heartless shinobi like Danzo but one who actually cares about the people in his village.
Also, having the biju afraid of Madara is understandable! If Madara is able to control Kyūbi then he will be able to control the others easily. They are weaker than Kyūbi so why wouldn't he be able to control them?
I find it interesting how you made Gaara talk in the third person though; why does he talk like that?
Is it a childish thing that causes Naruto and Gaara to consider the other biju their family or is it a demon thing, as in, they must stick together and protect the younger as they are few and far between?
Sorry for the long review, I loathe posting a review for each chapter and rather just post one at the end. I enjoyed what you have out so far and look forward to the next chapter.
Ja ne
6Azrielle.AntoinetteYou know, I've seen the flames that people keep sending and I don't get the point of them. I'm not saying that they're idiots but... You have basically addressed the same things in the two flames that you've put in the chapters. I find it interesting how you made Minato seem weak, to a point. It strengthens his character to me. It shows that he isn't a heartless shinobi like Danzo but one who actually cares about the people in his village.
Also, having the biju afraid of Madara is understandable! If Madara is able to control Kyūbi then he will be able to control the others easily. They are weaker than Kyūbi so why wouldn't he be able to control them?
I find it interesting how you made Gaara talk in the third person though; why does he talk like that?
Is it a childish thing that causes Naruto and Gaara to consider the other biju their family or is it a demon thing, as in, they must stick together and protect the younger as they are few and far between?
Sorry for the long review, I loathe posting a review for each chapter and rather just post one at the end. I enjoyed what you have out so far and look forward to the next chapter.
Ja ne
3/28 c12 lilanimefan247
A TRUE Hanyou? You mean I'm not a demon?" The fox froze at the wounded tone from his son
-so sad, great job
A TRUE Hanyou? You mean I'm not a demon?" The fox froze at the wounded tone from his son
-so sad, great job