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11/11/2007 c6 4deliriousdancer
Just when it looks like a relationship is going to break, it can actually gets stronger. Bobby was right, they are different people but that does not mean that what they build from this point forward will not be stronger and even better. I am looking forward to see what they build in the future. Good story.
11/11/2007 c6 4guitar73girl
I like how you've left it; it seems realistic that they have talked it out so far and are working on the rest. Still think it might be a case of things getting worse before they get better between them. I do like how you write Bobby.
11/11/2007 c6 vipercharmed
I totally get what you are saying because in Depths you could totally see the tension between the two of them. I love this fic, Please update.
11/11/2007 c6 2rindy713
hi! i liked your description of their talk. i think it was honest and caring for both of them. and i'm glad they don't really want to break up. i think bobby should confide in alex about brady. if not, he's sort of making the same mistake again - trying to handle alone things he needs help with. and i wish they would both realize that it's ok not to be what they were; they can be even better - if they let each other help.
11/11/2007 c6 12Metisse
I'd say it's as good a place as any to end. Considering Depths was filmed before Amends or Smile, it's hard to tell where they will be by the next episode. Out of sequence airing of episodes drive me nuts! LOL

Good job with your story. I enjoyed it. :-)
11/11/2007 c6 22I-am-LMR
Thanks for giving us such a great post-ep. I think your "on the other hand" descriptions of Bobby are the best I've ever read. I've never seen him written so accurately. Bravo! I thought this was a great way to tie it up, and I guess we'll see Thursday if things have gotten any better. Thanks again.
11/5/2007 c5 vipercharmed
If I was Bobby I would have been so ** at Alex, I would have totally ended my relationship with her even though they make the coolest couple ever.
11/5/2007 c5 4deliriousdancer
I think it is good that Alex is geting a little taste of what Bobby has gone through with their partnership and his own insecurities. Experience is a good teacher and equalizer. Lewis was wonderful as the voice of reason here. He knows Bobby better than anyone and he seemed pretty confident that Bobby doesn't want this break up either, and that Alex should not give up on him. I like that Alex has regained her stubborn determination in the last chapter. Yeah, Alex, track him down and have that long overdue discussion. You will both feel better, and I will too.
11/5/2007 c5 2rindy713
i really hope they can save it. bobby's on the brink, and alex is the only one who can pull him back - even if she helped put him there. i like it when lewis gets involved with alex and bobby's relationship. in his own way, he's so close to both of them. he's a good middle man.
11/4/2007 c5 Secret Phoenix 679
Excellent Chapter :)
11/4/2007 c5 7C.I.TigerFan
I'm really enjoying your story.
11/4/2007 c5 19Marion the Geek
And I look forward to reading that talk. Another great chapter. I look forward to more.
11/4/2007 c5 12Metisse
Can't stand Bobby and Alex apart. *sigh* I'm way too invested in these two. I'm still angst ridden over that last line in Smile.
11/4/2007 c5 22I-am-LMR
Oh, a cliffhanger! I'm really excited to see where this goes. Great detail and a great original character with Jorge. Thank you, and here's hoping things will work out on the show like this.
11/2/2007 c4 448scoob2222
loving this story, cannot wait for more
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