for Kiss Me Fool4/6/2008 c9 
68DiehardJavaJunkie14
Okay, I lied when I said I hadn't seen the last chapter. But you know what I meant. I said that a lot, but since I was awakened at seven this morning by that obnoxious beeping that is Laura's alarm, just pass it by and ignore my insanity, please? I'd already READ them, it's just that I didn't REMEMBER some as well as others, so there.
Anyway, this chapter was great, I remember reading it on LJ. I loved when Lorelai said "offspring, hoodlum". It was so great. I love the progression of Jess and Rory's relationship in this story, you make it adorable and believable. Keep up the great work with Rory and Jess!
68DiehardJavaJunkie14Okay, I lied when I said I hadn't seen the last chapter. But you know what I meant. I said that a lot, but since I was awakened at seven this morning by that obnoxious beeping that is Laura's alarm, just pass it by and ignore my insanity, please? I'd already READ them, it's just that I didn't REMEMBER some as well as others, so there.
Anyway, this chapter was great, I remember reading it on LJ. I loved when Lorelai said "offspring, hoodlum". It was so great. I love the progression of Jess and Rory's relationship in this story, you make it adorable and believable. Keep up the great work with Rory and Jess!
4/6/2008 c8 DiehardJavaJunkie14
I liked this chapter a lot! Rory giving up the carnival for Jess, and Jess relenting to let her stay and make him feel better. The interaction they have is great. It's so honest and so real. And it's not too fluffy, but it's fluffy enough to make us smile as readers. You've got a way with making the chapters seem like we have a background on Rory and Jess for "Diamonds and Rust"... I'm not sure if that was your intention, but you've succeeded. Anyway, great job as always, and I look forward to reviewing some more. I'm glad I found this chapter, I hadn't seen it yet!
I liked this chapter a lot! Rory giving up the carnival for Jess, and Jess relenting to let her stay and make him feel better. The interaction they have is great. It's so honest and so real. And it's not too fluffy, but it's fluffy enough to make us smile as readers. You've got a way with making the chapters seem like we have a background on Rory and Jess for "Diamonds and Rust"... I'm not sure if that was your intention, but you've succeeded. Anyway, great job as always, and I look forward to reviewing some more. I'm glad I found this chapter, I hadn't seen it yet!
4/6/2008 c7 DiehardJavaJunkie14
I like this one. I'd read it before and probably should have given it its own little review. But, alas, I didn't, so here goes. I think it's funny that Jess didn't take Rory seriously at first, but then all of a sudden, he realized she wasn't joking. Then he just gave up the cigarettes for Rory, without a second thought. I liked that part. Well, you've still managed to keep me hooked, and I'm waiting for the chapter when it will deny me any more reviews. BUT, I shall find SOMETHING to do to give you the justice you so deserve. :D
I like this one. I'd read it before and probably should have given it its own little review. But, alas, I didn't, so here goes. I think it's funny that Jess didn't take Rory seriously at first, but then all of a sudden, he realized she wasn't joking. Then he just gave up the cigarettes for Rory, without a second thought. I liked that part. Well, you've still managed to keep me hooked, and I'm waiting for the chapter when it will deny me any more reviews. BUT, I shall find SOMETHING to do to give you the justice you so deserve. :D
4/6/2008 c6 DiehardJavaJunkie14
I loved this chapter! Rory going after Jess once Luke tried his best to explain what Jess may or may not have been thinking. I'm glad he didn't get too far before Rory came and set him straight. See, that's really in character for Rory, she goes after what she wants. And I can't thank you enough for writing it that way. Great, great job with that one. You're awesome. Still. I wish there was more stuff I could review...
I loved this chapter! Rory going after Jess once Luke tried his best to explain what Jess may or may not have been thinking. I'm glad he didn't get too far before Rory came and set him straight. See, that's really in character for Rory, she goes after what she wants. And I can't thank you enough for writing it that way. Great, great job with that one. You're awesome. Still. I wish there was more stuff I could review...
4/6/2008 c5 DiehardJavaJunkie14
Aw. I love it. Lorelai and Rory together have one-upped Jess. I mean, Rory could have done it alone, sure, but the fact that Lorelai helped out in getting Jess to admit it is hysterical. I also loved the Chips Ahoy line, even though it had no significance, because Chips Ahoy are like... amazing. I love them when they have this frozen chocolate filling between a chips ahoy sandwich... okay, never mind. But it was all great. I loved it and it was so in character for Jess to cave.
Aw. I love it. Lorelai and Rory together have one-upped Jess. I mean, Rory could have done it alone, sure, but the fact that Lorelai helped out in getting Jess to admit it is hysterical. I also loved the Chips Ahoy line, even though it had no significance, because Chips Ahoy are like... amazing. I love them when they have this frozen chocolate filling between a chips ahoy sandwich... okay, never mind. But it was all great. I loved it and it was so in character for Jess to cave.
4/6/2008 c4 DiehardJavaJunkie14
Ooh, a little more intense from Mr. Jess Mariano! I really liked the letters, and how short they were at the beginning, and how Jess put "I miss you" as the entire letter once. I thought that was so Jess. I thought it was very in character. I'm sure that last letter stunned Rory! It surprised me! You're great, and your young Rory and Jess are really great too. I look forward to more! Hopefully I didn't review those already with one mushed review.
Ooh, a little more intense from Mr. Jess Mariano! I really liked the letters, and how short they were at the beginning, and how Jess put "I miss you" as the entire letter once. I thought that was so Jess. I thought it was very in character. I'm sure that last letter stunned Rory! It surprised me! You're great, and your young Rory and Jess are really great too. I look forward to more! Hopefully I didn't review those already with one mushed review.
4/6/2008 c3 DiehardJavaJunkie14
I love this one! I've never read this one before. I thought it was adorable. I also love how Luke's and Luke himself is such a part of their lives. I mean, if Rory and Jess are together, best friends or not, that makes Luke in their lives, but I think it's cute how special of a role he has, for Lorelai and for Rory. It's really cute. I enjoyed this chapter from the lost archives very much.
I love this one! I've never read this one before. I thought it was adorable. I also love how Luke's and Luke himself is such a part of their lives. I mean, if Rory and Jess are together, best friends or not, that makes Luke in their lives, but I think it's cute how special of a role he has, for Lorelai and for Rory. It's really cute. I enjoyed this chapter from the lost archives very much.
4/6/2008 c2 DiehardJavaJunkie14
Okay, so first of all I LOVE your author's note. I totally spammed OLC when the Sox won, I should have spammed fic-wise. Anyway, this was another one I've read elsewhere but felt I should just tell you again how adorable it was. And Luke! was a part of this one, so I totally give you kudos for that. Jess is so sweet to eat the vegetables for Rory. I love how there wasn't any interaction between anyone in this chapter, but it had the same effect. I adored it very much.
Okay, so first of all I LOVE your author's note. I totally spammed OLC when the Sox won, I should have spammed fic-wise. Anyway, this was another one I've read elsewhere but felt I should just tell you again how adorable it was. And Luke! was a part of this one, so I totally give you kudos for that. Jess is so sweet to eat the vegetables for Rory. I love how there wasn't any interaction between anyone in this chapter, but it had the same effect. I adored it very much.
4/6/2008 c1 DiehardJavaJunkie14
I read this! I've read this one! I now get to smother you with reviews as much as possible because of your awesomeness. This one made me so warm and fuzzy inside. I loved how little Jess did that for Rory, and it's such an innocent way of "fixing" things. It's why I really believe kids are smarter than us half the time. Hee hee. Anyway, I really really loved this little part. You're amazing.
I read this! I've read this one! I now get to smother you with reviews as much as possible because of your awesomeness. This one made me so warm and fuzzy inside. I loved how little Jess did that for Rory, and it's such an innocent way of "fixing" things. It's why I really believe kids are smarter than us half the time. Hee hee. Anyway, I really really loved this little part. You're amazing.
3/22/2008 c12 68DiehardJavaJunkie14
Well, I loved this drabble. It's so cute. Rory and Jess, and the adventures they can have with ice cream. *sigh* And Luke made an appearance! Adorable and sweet. Jess is taking the lead at a young age, and Rory's very open to Jess's new introductions of the luxuries she isn't familiar with. You're great and so was this drabble!
68DiehardJavaJunkie14Well, I loved this drabble. It's so cute. Rory and Jess, and the adventures they can have with ice cream. *sigh* And Luke made an appearance! Adorable and sweet. Jess is taking the lead at a young age, and Rory's very open to Jess's new introductions of the luxuries she isn't familiar with. You're great and so was this drabble!
3/14/2008 c11 14CherryWolf713
Aww...short and sweet! Just like Jess (ok, ok...maybe Jess wasn't that short - Dean was just abnormally and grotesquely tall) but ya get my point :)
Melissa
14CherryWolf713Aww...short and sweet! Just like Jess (ok, ok...maybe Jess wasn't that short - Dean was just abnormally and grotesquely tall) but ya get my point :)
Melissa
3/14/2008 c11 68DiehardJavaJunkie14
Okay, so there's not much here, but it speaks like it's a novel. Jess and Rory's interaction as well as Luke and Lorelai's interaction was fantastic. There's so much there, even with just a short few sentences!
Keep it up! Awesome job.
68DiehardJavaJunkie14Okay, so there's not much here, but it speaks like it's a novel. Jess and Rory's interaction as well as Luke and Lorelai's interaction was fantastic. There's so much there, even with just a short few sentences!
Keep it up! Awesome job.