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12All-things
Whew. What a great series. Poor guys. You certainly put everyone through the ringer. I loved the bad guys as I could picture them in mind's eyes and they were very believable.
Amazingly done.
12All-thingsWhew. What a great series. Poor guys. You certainly put everyone through the ringer. I loved the bad guys as I could picture them in mind's eyes and they were very believable.
Amazingly done.
10/25/2010 c16 1MyLifeIsComplete
ALEO, I must say that this is my favorite book by you yet and it inspired me to write a numb3rs fic of my own. Thank you for writing. You kept everyone in character most beautifully. I loved the Don/Charlie interaction and the Don/Alan interaction. Very believable and very well done. I must say, well done!
1MyLifeIsCompleteALEO, I must say that this is my favorite book by you yet and it inspired me to write a numb3rs fic of my own. Thank you for writing. You kept everyone in character most beautifully. I loved the Don/Charlie interaction and the Don/Alan interaction. Very believable and very well done. I must say, well done!
5/21/2009 c16 EmptySky
I can see this being problematic, Don having to talk to someone potentially holding his brother hostage and having to be objective and calm. Or I thought so until I got to the end of the first chapter, and got a shock. From your description there… it can’t be Charlie? I shall read on and find out! It’s obviously a tough struggle, also very well to be seen by the way you lay it out; at one point it’s Charlie, simply Charlie, and then a few passages later it’s the gunman to Don. I like it. I’m really wondering who’s behind everything, and who’s talking to Charlie there. It can’t be Telford and Ryder and the ones he worked with? The name ‘Luke’ does sort of ring a bell, but I thought he was just a minion… I do not remember a brother, though. Oh, but now with the ‘Boots’ reference I definitely know. There was once again so much action and suspense going on, and a pleasure to read. The bit with Charlie raising the loaded gun like that was unexpected, but logical in that moment. It definitely added to the drama. I remember Barnathan, too =D But only because I think his last name is weird. And Wachowski too. I’m glad this all ended well, and that everyone will be physically and hopefully psychically fine =) I’m excited to read more of your stories, but not tonight cause I’m tired. 31 chapters in one day will do that to you ;) Thanks for the entertainment!
I can see this being problematic, Don having to talk to someone potentially holding his brother hostage and having to be objective and calm. Or I thought so until I got to the end of the first chapter, and got a shock. From your description there… it can’t be Charlie? I shall read on and find out! It’s obviously a tough struggle, also very well to be seen by the way you lay it out; at one point it’s Charlie, simply Charlie, and then a few passages later it’s the gunman to Don. I like it. I’m really wondering who’s behind everything, and who’s talking to Charlie there. It can’t be Telford and Ryder and the ones he worked with? The name ‘Luke’ does sort of ring a bell, but I thought he was just a minion… I do not remember a brother, though. Oh, but now with the ‘Boots’ reference I definitely know. There was once again so much action and suspense going on, and a pleasure to read. The bit with Charlie raising the loaded gun like that was unexpected, but logical in that moment. It definitely added to the drama. I remember Barnathan, too =D But only because I think his last name is weird. And Wachowski too. I’m glad this all ended well, and that everyone will be physically and hopefully psychically fine =) I’m excited to read more of your stories, but not tonight cause I’m tired. 31 chapters in one day will do that to you ;) Thanks for the entertainment!
5/7/2009 c16 61epalladino
With this you managed to top your other two stories in this series (which is a real feat). Both Charlie and Don were perfect and they way you had them work out their dilemma was exactly the way I would see the characters doing this. I also loved the way you used Alan and the well-crafted conflict between the FBI and the LAPD.
Thanks, Beth
P.S. I'd love to see an epilogue to this one...
61epalladinoWith this you managed to top your other two stories in this series (which is a real feat). Both Charlie and Don were perfect and they way you had them work out their dilemma was exactly the way I would see the characters doing this. I also loved the way you used Alan and the well-crafted conflict between the FBI and the LAPD.
Thanks, Beth
P.S. I'd love to see an epilogue to this one...
12/29/2007 c16 1Sharon
What a well paced and well written story! You kept the action and tension high throughout the whole thing. Great characterization of the Eppes and Don's team - their words and actions were very believable.
Hope to see more from you in the future!
1SharonWhat a well paced and well written story! You kept the action and tension high throughout the whole thing. Great characterization of the Eppes and Don's team - their words and actions were very believable.
Hope to see more from you in the future!
11/30/2007 c16 12Cairis Rin
I actually had a hard time reading this one. Mostly because as I was reading I kept thinking there was just no possible way the Eppes could get out of this emotionally unscathed. But that's also what made it a very poignant and extremely well done story. You have my respect for even daring to write this.
12Cairis RinI actually had a hard time reading this one. Mostly because as I was reading I kept thinking there was just no possible way the Eppes could get out of this emotionally unscathed. But that's also what made it a very poignant and extremely well done story. You have my respect for even daring to write this.
11/18/2007 c16 17Lisa Paris
Neat ending to an immaculate story, I really like this one, ALEO. Glad to see that Charlie's plight had a happy and realistic conclusion.
A great study in bravery of every kind, and of course, a story about love. I was so sorry to see it come to an end, but pleased to see something new from you.
17Lisa ParisNeat ending to an immaculate story, I really like this one, ALEO. Glad to see that Charlie's plight had a happy and realistic conclusion.
A great study in bravery of every kind, and of course, a story about love. I was so sorry to see it come to an end, but pleased to see something new from you.
11/17/2007 c15 celadon
LOL! Love the three Eppes men together - especially loved the finish with Alan. Great scene.
LOL! Love the three Eppes men together - especially loved the finish with Alan. Great scene.
11/12/2007 c16 newgal
short and sweet, but good as usual. I'm always sad to see your stories end. Hope you are already working on another.
short and sweet, but good as usual. I'm always sad to see your stories end. Hope you are already working on another.
11/12/2007 c16 7orangepotato
(again, this is jagonseeker-since i changed my name-) great story! i loved the entie thing! the only thing that didnt tie up was whether the students would except charlie, but i figure that, with what they spoke of in their reports, they will... looking forwards to more from you soon!
orangepotato
7orangepotato(again, this is jagonseeker-since i changed my name-) great story! i loved the entie thing! the only thing that didnt tie up was whether the students would except charlie, but i figure that, with what they spoke of in their reports, they will... looking forwards to more from you soon!
orangepotato
11/12/2007 c16 sayatahu
oh kay, enjoyed this story. Dont usually review cause no time... no time at all. Study study and more study. Now I have much time on hand just completed my exams and having long hols.
Am backtracking for the other two. :-
oh kay, enjoyed this story. Dont usually review cause no time... no time at all. Study study and more study. Now I have much time on hand just completed my exams and having long hols.
Am backtracking for the other two. :-