for Their Room14h ago c8 
20Mrs-N-Uzumaki
I've been really enjoying your work, so don't get me wrong when I say that this chapter wasn't one of them. I felt the characters were quite OOC. Especially Lucious - I know that he is a bully and a terrible parenting figure, but I doubt he would ever harm his son like that. He's prideful, vicious, cruel, but he also cares for Draco. He follows Voldi out of fear, not admiration, therefore he would try and avoid getting Draco involved with a man so dangerous who would most likely kill him and his family with the tinest slip-up.
On the other hand, looking back at the date of when this story was written I can understand why you write Lucious like this.
Also, Hermione wouldn't throw her arms around Draco like that so early in their barely cemented friendship so far.
20Mrs-N-UzumakiI've been really enjoying your work, so don't get me wrong when I say that this chapter wasn't one of them. I felt the characters were quite OOC. Especially Lucious - I know that he is a bully and a terrible parenting figure, but I doubt he would ever harm his son like that. He's prideful, vicious, cruel, but he also cares for Draco. He follows Voldi out of fear, not admiration, therefore he would try and avoid getting Draco involved with a man so dangerous who would most likely kill him and his family with the tinest slip-up.
On the other hand, looking back at the date of when this story was written I can understand why you write Lucious like this.
Also, Hermione wouldn't throw her arms around Draco like that so early in their barely cemented friendship so far.
15h ago c4 Mrs-N-Uzumaki
It's been a while since I've come across a decent Dramione fic. Yours by far is actually very close to the canon.
It's been a while since I've come across a decent Dramione fic. Yours by far is actually very close to the canon.
15h ago c3 Mrs-N-Uzumaki
"You know Malfoy, I just saved your life, doesn't that mean that there is some sort at special bond between us?" Hermione asked, knowing perfectly well that the idea at a bond with a mudblood would drive Malfoy insane.
"Shut up, if you dare mention this to anyone I will make to regret it."
You keep them in such perfect character :D
"You know Malfoy, I just saved your life, doesn't that mean that there is some sort at special bond between us?" Hermione asked, knowing perfectly well that the idea at a bond with a mudblood would drive Malfoy insane.
"Shut up, if you dare mention this to anyone I will make to regret it."
You keep them in such perfect character :D
5/1 c31 2Lady Saotome
This was an excellent story. Thanks for all your hard work! I really thought you wrote the characters very well, especially Draco. I didn't always like the way he acted but I think you really hit the nail on the head in characterization - he really would have been that way! And I appreciated that they didn't go any farther physically than what they did in the story. I also thought the whole O'Leary plot was very well thought out - his inventing the killing curse & the counter curse - very clever!
The only question I had was who was watching Hermione from the forest that one time she got creeped out? Was is Pansy spying on her? Lucius?
2Lady SaotomeThis was an excellent story. Thanks for all your hard work! I really thought you wrote the characters very well, especially Draco. I didn't always like the way he acted but I think you really hit the nail on the head in characterization - he really would have been that way! And I appreciated that they didn't go any farther physically than what they did in the story. I also thought the whole O'Leary plot was very well thought out - his inventing the killing curse & the counter curse - very clever!
The only question I had was who was watching Hermione from the forest that one time she got creeped out? Was is Pansy spying on her? Lucius?
4/28 c1 Analis17
This was brilliant! Thank you for sharing - I truly enjoyed all the hard work and thought you put into your writing and I enjoyed your characterizations mightily. This is a Draco and Hermione that makes sense - very in character and I'm glad that you kept it so clean (I love that Draco is really a hopeless male with his foot in his mouth).
Thank you for sharing! I don't have an account but when I do this will be a favorite. :D
A.
This was brilliant! Thank you for sharing - I truly enjoyed all the hard work and thought you put into your writing and I enjoyed your characterizations mightily. This is a Draco and Hermione that makes sense - very in character and I'm glad that you kept it so clean (I love that Draco is really a hopeless male with his foot in his mouth).
Thank you for sharing! I don't have an account but when I do this will be a favorite. :D
A.
4/25 c31 anonyxxx
I liked it :) the progression and hesitancy in their relationship was very realistic. Their friends and their support or lack thereof was very accurate as well :) good job !
I liked it :) the progression and hesitancy in their relationship was very realistic. Their friends and their support or lack thereof was very accurate as well :) good job !
3/30 c31 4just-CALL-me-KENDAL
I know it has been sooo long since you updated, and i mean years, but I love this story! PLease don't let this story go!
Kendal
4just-CALL-me-KENDALI know it has been sooo long since you updated, and i mean years, but I love this story! PLease don't let this story go!
Kendal
3/9 c31 I am Coolio D
Wow, this is great! Dramiones are always fun to read. Is this the end or is there a sequel?
Wow, this is great! Dramiones are always fun to read. Is this the end or is there a sequel?
3/4 c2 1rainbowlollipops15
and good story so far, but a character's thoughts do not need " " (which i noticed you did a few times in the last chapter)
1rainbowlollipops15and good story so far, but a character's thoughts do not need " " (which i noticed you did a few times in the last chapter)
2/19 c31 2CityThatNeverSleeps
This was a great story! It was so cute! I loved the concept of the counter curse! Great writing!
2CityThatNeverSleepsThis was a great story! It was so cute! I loved the concept of the counter curse! Great writing!
2/13 c6 Yamuna
I like your way of writing. It has a certain charm to it. Draco could be a bit more nicer. Describe them a bit more. Describe their facial emotions.
I like your way of writing. It has a certain charm to it. Draco could be a bit more nicer. Describe them a bit more. Describe their facial emotions.