for Ears, noses, eyelashes and lips9/4/2012 c1 Loverofart
That was so of the best piece of work I've ever read :D
That was so of the best piece of work I've ever read :D
11/25/2007 c1
8smc1214
So poetic and sweet. You were very descriptive and I loved it so much! It was so sweet, great job!
8smc1214So poetic and sweet. You were very descriptive and I loved it so much! It was so sweet, great job!
11/17/2007 c1
12Therese Delacoeur
...Nice. Very nice! I love the way you don't let them go rushing into each other's arms, and how they're both rehearsing it, and how... Oh my word, this was just a nice piece!
Keep it up! ~Therese
12Therese Delacoeur...Nice. Very nice! I love the way you don't let them go rushing into each other's arms, and how they're both rehearsing it, and how... Oh my word, this was just a nice piece!
Keep it up! ~Therese
11/12/2007 c1
1Millie-pops
Beautiful...fluffy...cute...pure...not suggestive...
You. Have. Made. My. Day! Seriously though, I really needed this. You've written it so beautifully: the grammar and puncuation is all perfect, the description is simply unmatched. Bravo. BRAVO!
Tehe. Look at what you've done to me. Hehe. And very beautiful use of parallelism on Aang's part. See, school word. Hehe.
I'll stop now. Keep it up! Best wishes, TotalTVAddict
1Millie-popsBeautiful...fluffy...cute...pure...not suggestive...
You. Have. Made. My. Day! Seriously though, I really needed this. You've written it so beautifully: the grammar and puncuation is all perfect, the description is simply unmatched. Bravo. BRAVO!
Tehe. Look at what you've done to me. Hehe. And very beautiful use of parallelism on Aang's part. See, school word. Hehe.
I'll stop now. Keep it up! Best wishes, TotalTVAddict
11/11/2007 c1
75Lyralocke
I really enjoyed this. Very well written. It's hard to get Katara's mixed-up thoughts down right, but you did it very well.
75LyralockeI really enjoyed this. Very well written. It's hard to get Katara's mixed-up thoughts down right, but you did it very well.
11/11/2007 c1
11MavsGirl22
oh wow... i don't even know what to say besides... that is beautiful and touching! I love it! :)
11MavsGirl22oh wow... i don't even know what to say besides... that is beautiful and touching! I love it! :)
