for Window Of Opportunity Bonanza7/31/2012 c6 
22mudstalker
Does Michelle have ancient tech, or just regular earth computers? I'm wondering where she gets the energy to recharge her laptop.
22mudstalkerDoes Michelle have ancient tech, or just regular earth computers? I'm wondering where she gets the energy to recharge her laptop.
7/31/2012 c2 mudstalker
Ha, this chapter is hilarious! Love the way you described the entire incident; things like this do happen in small towns! :) Loving the story so far.
Ha, this chapter is hilarious! Love the way you described the entire incident; things like this do happen in small towns! :) Loving the story so far.
6/23/2012 c1 DejaToo
Late to the party on this one but I stumbled across it and it's such a great story-you really captured the characters from both series so well.
Late to the party on this one but I stumbled across it and it's such a great story-you really captured the characters from both series so well.
1/12/2012 c16 1Saissa
Whoah!
This was a wodnerful story!
I havent seen Bonanaza for many years - not even on reruns. From what I can remember, you seem to have the Cartright characters down pretty much accurately.
And the twist at the end? That was cool too.
1SaissaWhoah!
This was a wodnerful story!
I havent seen Bonanaza for many years - not even on reruns. From what I can remember, you seem to have the Cartright characters down pretty much accurately.
And the twist at the end? That was cool too.
6/8/2011 c16 DP
Another phenomenal story! I loved the tie in with the time loop events. Very clever! Again you have the characters down pat... completely in line with the series. Your writing style as you know is first rate and you could certainly be successful with your own stories not based on any existing canon. One minor thing that bugs me but this is probably my neurosis is how in all the stories everyone is super suspicious and questioning of everyone else. Maybe its a DC thing. Another personal issue for me but not a problem with the stories is how Jack always ends up dominated by a woman in some way, Sam doesnt get Jack, the Asgard are not our friends and the female lead characters are all devious to the point of being machiavellian. And no, I dont feel threatened, just annoyed :) Like I said that just my personal gut response. Style wise, plot wise, characacter development wise the stories are worthy of a Nebulla Award. I hope you write more and if you ever publish please let us know your pen name! BR
Another phenomenal story! I loved the tie in with the time loop events. Very clever! Again you have the characters down pat... completely in line with the series. Your writing style as you know is first rate and you could certainly be successful with your own stories not based on any existing canon. One minor thing that bugs me but this is probably my neurosis is how in all the stories everyone is super suspicious and questioning of everyone else. Maybe its a DC thing. Another personal issue for me but not a problem with the stories is how Jack always ends up dominated by a woman in some way, Sam doesnt get Jack, the Asgard are not our friends and the female lead characters are all devious to the point of being machiavellian. And no, I dont feel threatened, just annoyed :) Like I said that just my personal gut response. Style wise, plot wise, characacter development wise the stories are worthy of a Nebulla Award. I hope you write more and if you ever publish please let us know your pen name! BR
3/7/2010 c16 3Razzbaby
I love it! What a surprise ending. I did NOT see that one coming. Nope no how! I really liked it! And I liked the short bursts that Jack did. At least he wasn't bored with all the looping! LOL. Very good. I hope more people find this gem!
3RazzbabyI love it! What a surprise ending. I did NOT see that one coming. Nope no how! I really liked it! And I liked the short bursts that Jack did. At least he wasn't bored with all the looping! LOL. Very good. I hope more people find this gem!
3/6/2010 c8 Razzbaby
Okay if someone had suggested a xo with Bonanza, I would have wondered. But this excellent. You've pared the characters in such a way it is very credible. I like how bits and pieces are coming up... would I do that if I were in Michelle's position. I like how you've handled the paradoxes...(isn't that paradoxi?) lol. Sorry couldn't resist, but this is very good. I like the way you are pairing the present with the past or vice versa. It gives a history to her experiences.
Okay if someone had suggested a xo with Bonanza, I would have wondered. But this excellent. You've pared the characters in such a way it is very credible. I like how bits and pieces are coming up... would I do that if I were in Michelle's position. I like how you've handled the paradoxes...(isn't that paradoxi?) lol. Sorry couldn't resist, but this is very good. I like the way you are pairing the present with the past or vice versa. It gives a history to her experiences.
3/6/2010 c1 Razzbaby
When you first posted this I thought it was an interesting idea, and marked it in my many fics to read. I am so glad I I found this. I like what you write, style etc. But I didn't get around to reading until today. And I'm glad it's completed. I like the finished fic so much better. I hope more people find it in their to read files! Because so far it's a definite!
When you first posted this I thought it was an interesting idea, and marked it in my many fics to read. I am so glad I I found this. I like what you write, style etc. But I didn't get around to reading until today. And I'm glad it's completed. I like the finished fic so much better. I hope more people find it in their to read files! Because so far it's a definite!
8/2/2009 c5 10Deritine
LOL! This chapter is awesome, though I'm curious and also unsure if I want to know just how they managed to kick the crap out of their bed. Hilarious chapter!
10DeritineLOL! This chapter is awesome, though I'm curious and also unsure if I want to know just how they managed to kick the crap out of their bed. Hilarious chapter!
8/2/2009 c4 Deritine
Yeah, I was thinking, and it's actually a bit weird I've even seen Bonanza. I think it's more my parents' or grandparents' era, being that it ended in like the 60s or 70s. My uncle waxed all nostalgic when I told him what I was reading lol. The SG1 plot is becoming more interesting. I was really confused on what was going on as those flashes are so short. I think you could have spent more time on them.
Yeah, I was thinking, and it's actually a bit weird I've even seen Bonanza. I think it's more my parents' or grandparents' era, being that it ended in like the 60s or 70s. My uncle waxed all nostalgic when I told him what I was reading lol. The SG1 plot is becoming more interesting. I was really confused on what was going on as those flashes are so short. I think you could have spent more time on them.
8/2/2009 c3 Deritine
You do say some phrases multiple times- I get the feel that they are facts you looked up. However, when mentioned more than once as the exact same phrase it sounds like that, versus being an interesting tidbit to add to her narrative. Eg- the egg costing a dollar and miners not raising chickens. I think you've said that like 3 times.
Very interesting story, though. There is no way I would have read a Bonanza cross without that review reply though. lol
You do say some phrases multiple times- I get the feel that they are facts you looked up. However, when mentioned more than once as the exact same phrase it sounds like that, versus being an interesting tidbit to add to her narrative. Eg- the egg costing a dollar and miners not raising chickens. I think you've said that like 3 times.
Very interesting story, though. There is no way I would have read a Bonanza cross without that review reply though. lol
8/2/2009 c1 Deritine
So I was pretty dubious when you recc'ed your own story, but this is really interesting! I think I'm addicted to her journal entries.
So I was pretty dubious when you recc'ed your own story, but this is really interesting! I think I'm addicted to her journal entries.
11/12/2008 c16 kjnh
OH just loved it. What a fanastic story, with all the best components- love, suspense, intregue, action and favourite characters. It was great and even had me in tears at the end.
OH just loved it. What a fanastic story, with all the best components- love, suspense, intregue, action and favourite characters. It was great and even had me in tears at the end.
11/5/2008 c16 9marianne
That was one fantastic read. As a fast reader I just love long stories. I was searching for the one Stargate Revealed, but didn't remember the title first but kept searching as suddenly I remembered it was part Stargate as title. grin. I reread it a lot but I always seem to forget the title every single time and it is so easy. And found it and stepped on your site after that long read again. Computer Crashes always make me loose links. I really enjoyed this read and was really intrigued when I saw it was a Crossover with Bonanza and just had to read it. Grin, you really are something else and your research and writing is fabulous and I just got a feeling that in the end Jack somehow was in that family. Loved the ending and would love to read some more of it.
9marianneThat was one fantastic read. As a fast reader I just love long stories. I was searching for the one Stargate Revealed, but didn't remember the title first but kept searching as suddenly I remembered it was part Stargate as title. grin. I reread it a lot but I always seem to forget the title every single time and it is so easy. And found it and stepped on your site after that long read again. Computer Crashes always make me loose links. I really enjoyed this read and was really intrigued when I saw it was a Crossover with Bonanza and just had to read it. Grin, you really are something else and your research and writing is fabulous and I just got a feeling that in the end Jack somehow was in that family. Loved the ending and would love to read some more of it.
4/20/2008 c1 Kaci
This was a wonderful story! I love how you used Stargate to connect to Bonanza. Full of timelines and the characters are down pat. I love Bonanza too, so using Hoss was the perfect character. Thanks for a great read!
~ Kaci
This was a wonderful story! I love how you used Stargate to connect to Bonanza. Full of timelines and the characters are down pat. I love Bonanza too, so using Hoss was the perfect character. Thanks for a great read!
~ Kaci