for Window Of Opportunity Bonanza3/23/2008 c16 
27Isis the Sphinx
Damn, this was good. Really long, but amazingly good. You really did do your research. very nice.
Keep writing!
27Isis the SphinxDamn, this was good. Really long, but amazingly good. You really did do your research. very nice.
Keep writing!
2/28/2008 c16 FuFuMira
This was a great story. I really enjoyed it. Very interesting use of the time loop.
This was a great story. I really enjoyed it. Very interesting use of the time loop.
1/29/2008 c16 fly
incredible!
took me weeks to get over the bonanzathing and starting reading your story...didn't regret it for one second
great job!
incredible!
took me weeks to get over the bonanzathing and starting reading your story...didn't regret it for one second
great job!
1/2/2008 c16 6MythsterBlack
Oh, this was just so good. I finally got some sleep after I finished the whole thing in one straight reading. I only have one small complaint. I don't want it to be over. I want more. (stamping my feet and pouting madly)
So. . . I guess I have no choice but to go back and read it again, that way I will catch a few small things that always get missed in the first read.
I also decided to find all your other stuff and read most of them as well, today, (the shorter ones that is like Quantum leap, Jeannie and The light within.)
In fact, I think the only one of your stories I have not read is Research part 2 as I don't particularly like reading about the Roman Empire/gladiators etc. But that is the only one I passed on. I remember reading Research part 1 and that one too was quite a ride.
Whenever I want to sink my teeth into a good read I have at least 9 of your stories in my private archive to consume.
Personally, I thank you once again for such great entertainment stories and please keep them coming.
Steve
6MythsterBlackOh, this was just so good. I finally got some sleep after I finished the whole thing in one straight reading. I only have one small complaint. I don't want it to be over. I want more. (stamping my feet and pouting madly)
So. . . I guess I have no choice but to go back and read it again, that way I will catch a few small things that always get missed in the first read.
I also decided to find all your other stuff and read most of them as well, today, (the shorter ones that is like Quantum leap, Jeannie and The light within.)
In fact, I think the only one of your stories I have not read is Research part 2 as I don't particularly like reading about the Roman Empire/gladiators etc. But that is the only one I passed on. I remember reading Research part 1 and that one too was quite a ride.
Whenever I want to sink my teeth into a good read I have at least 9 of your stories in my private archive to consume.
Personally, I thank you once again for such great entertainment stories and please keep them coming.
Steve
1/1/2008 c9 MythsterBlack
I've stayed up all night reading this. I just could not put it away to get some sleep. You are one very amazing AUTHOR. Although this is not your usual O'Niell centric story. It is absolutely AMAZING and I still have a few more chapters to go. I had not had you on my Author alerts list and had not not clicked on your FF web site for some time, so I didn't even know about this one until last night. I have since added you to the Author alerts list so I don't miss anything else you turn out.
Thank you for such good entertainment stories. I do, so very much, enjoy reading anything you grant us with. I wish there were many more out there even half as good as you are at this.
Steve gives 10 ( * * * * * - * * * * * ) Oh yes , 10 STARS on the this one. They just don't get any better than this creation.
Steve
I've stayed up all night reading this. I just could not put it away to get some sleep. You are one very amazing AUTHOR. Although this is not your usual O'Niell centric story. It is absolutely AMAZING and I still have a few more chapters to go. I had not had you on my Author alerts list and had not not clicked on your FF web site for some time, so I didn't even know about this one until last night. I have since added you to the Author alerts list so I don't miss anything else you turn out.
Thank you for such good entertainment stories. I do, so very much, enjoy reading anything you grant us with. I wish there were many more out there even half as good as you are at this.
Steve gives 10 ( * * * * * - * * * * * ) Oh yes , 10 STARS on the this one. They just don't get any better than this creation.
Steve
12/27/2007 c16 Taelyn Sass
Oh my, this was one incredible story, Livi! You interwove the timelines of the two shows seamlessly and believably. A most excellent job!
Oh my, this was one incredible story, Livi! You interwove the timelines of the two shows seamlessly and believably. A most excellent job!
12/27/2007 c16 27The Sithspawn
Good endind, so it was naquada and not an Ancient facitily? heh. Didn't see the O'Neill twist coming though. Anyway, good story:)
27The SithspawnGood endind, so it was naquada and not an Ancient facitily? heh. Didn't see the O'Neill twist coming though. Anyway, good story:)
12/20/2007 c16 gibblesgal
Utterly fantastic! I hear the closing Bonanza song with a trace of Stargate in the background.
Utterly fantastic! I hear the closing Bonanza song with a trace of Stargate in the background.
12/19/2007 c16 68Su Freund
A superb tour de force, Livi! I so enjoyed all the twists and turns, the futzing with time and time loops and the historical detail. Great plotting, intriguing story. Quite a ride! I guessed Jack would turn out to be a Cartwright and am pleased I was right. Nice one!
perhaps now you have got this out of your system we might see some other updates from you? I'm just sayin'...
68Su FreundA superb tour de force, Livi! I so enjoyed all the twists and turns, the futzing with time and time loops and the historical detail. Great plotting, intriguing story. Quite a ride! I guessed Jack would turn out to be a Cartwright and am pleased I was right. Nice one!
perhaps now you have got this out of your system we might see some other updates from you? I'm just sayin'...
12/19/2007 c16 5Neiths Arrow
That was a great ending for a very original story. You wrapped up everything so nicely. I wasn't sure how you were going to do it, but never imagined this. Poor Jack - looping so many times. Again, great story.
5Neiths ArrowThat was a great ending for a very original story. You wrapped up everything so nicely. I wasn't sure how you were going to do it, but never imagined this. Poor Jack - looping so many times. Again, great story.
12/19/2007 c16 Nzie
what a great story! totally in keeping with the series in terms of time-warp episodes. loved it- what a great way to make such connections and yet keep in with both series (mostly!). well-written, original, and really enjoyable. Brava!
~Nzie
what a great story! totally in keeping with the series in terms of time-warp episodes. loved it- what a great way to make such connections and yet keep in with both series (mostly!). well-written, original, and really enjoyable. Brava!
~Nzie
12/19/2007 c16 mabpagan
"No, I don't want it to be over!" (says my inner child, throwing a major tantrum.)
Fabulous, magnificent, brilliant-I could go on and on. I truly, deeply loved this story.
A perfect crossover. More,please!
"No, I don't want it to be over!" (says my inner child, throwing a major tantrum.)
Fabulous, magnificent, brilliant-I could go on and on. I truly, deeply loved this story.
A perfect crossover. More,please!
12/19/2007 c16 Emelf
It's over? Say it ain't so!
I liked how you ended it. I suspected you were going to have Jack as the descendant of the Cartwrights. Cool. Thank you for the very entertaining story.
It's over? Say it ain't so!
I liked how you ended it. I suspected you were going to have Jack as the descendant of the Cartwrights. Cool. Thank you for the very entertaining story.
12/11/2007 c15 27The Sithspawn
Heh so you've peaked my interest, what exatly is hidden down int eh tunnels? Some sort of hidden Ancient insatllation? Filled with ZPMs maybe:P;p Or is an old Goa'uld lab? Maybe something like Nirrti's? Something made to speed up human evolution?
Nice to see the Cartwrights getting some info, but I was wondering, is she ever going to tell them that she's originally from the future? I'd love to see their reaction to that!:D
Anwyay, update soon please!
27The SithspawnHeh so you've peaked my interest, what exatly is hidden down int eh tunnels? Some sort of hidden Ancient insatllation? Filled with ZPMs maybe:P;p Or is an old Goa'uld lab? Maybe something like Nirrti's? Something made to speed up human evolution?
Nice to see the Cartwrights getting some info, but I was wondering, is she ever going to tell them that she's originally from the future? I'd love to see their reaction to that!:D
Anwyay, update soon please!
12/10/2007 c14 68Su Freund
Brilliant chapter, Livi! This is such a YOU story - unique. It's really great to see Jack and co there and backing up our heroine. As fascinating as ever, if not more so now! I hope to get the chance to catch up with chapter 15 before I go away, but if I don't, I certinly have something to look forward to when I get back. Keep 'em coming.
68Su FreundBrilliant chapter, Livi! This is such a YOU story - unique. It's really great to see Jack and co there and backing up our heroine. As fascinating as ever, if not more so now! I hope to get the chance to catch up with chapter 15 before I go away, but if I don't, I certinly have something to look forward to when I get back. Keep 'em coming.