for Taking Care Of11/14/2010 c3 
9midnight13731
SO CUTE! GO K! Tohma is cuteeeee! please update, asap!
love,
midnight13731
-x-
9midnight13731SO CUTE! GO K! Tohma is cuteeeee! please update, asap!
love,
midnight13731
-x-
3/15/2008 c4 kokoneko
Fluff! Fluff! More! More! =D
I've never been good at writing reviews, but I'll try. K's POV is really quite good as he's the seme and all, but maybe add a little more ukeness into Tohma's pOV.
Heh, I don't know if thats exactly what you don't want it to be, (thats why I'm no good at reviews) but just my opinion, k?
I will be waiting for the next chapter.
(this one was really satisfying, btw)
Fluff! Fluff! More! More! =D
I've never been good at writing reviews, but I'll try. K's POV is really quite good as he's the seme and all, but maybe add a little more ukeness into Tohma's pOV.
Heh, I don't know if thats exactly what you don't want it to be, (thats why I'm no good at reviews) but just my opinion, k?
I will be waiting for the next chapter.
(this one was really satisfying, btw)
3/15/2008 c4 2xxcrushinglyclosexx
Wow is all I can say! This is such a well written story and a even better bonus, one my favorite Gravi pairings too. You're so descriptive and it really pulls everything together. Especially K and Tohma's personalities.
I love your sense of humor with the characters quirks and little thing happening here and there. I couldn't stop laughing at the part where Tohma unexpectedly shoves a very surprised K out of bed! And that eccentric photographer was so funny.
It's nice to see that you are keeping this story up to date and I hope that you continue to do so! I'd love to read more and I'll be keeping tabs on this fanfic. *Adds to favorites*
2xxcrushinglyclosexxWow is all I can say! This is such a well written story and a even better bonus, one my favorite Gravi pairings too. You're so descriptive and it really pulls everything together. Especially K and Tohma's personalities.
I love your sense of humor with the characters quirks and little thing happening here and there. I couldn't stop laughing at the part where Tohma unexpectedly shoves a very surprised K out of bed! And that eccentric photographer was so funny.
It's nice to see that you are keeping this story up to date and I hope that you continue to do so! I'd love to read more and I'll be keeping tabs on this fanfic. *Adds to favorites*
3/13/2008 c4 Leya
I absolutely loved this chapter. Poor, poor K... ^^ It was very well written and all the scenes you've described were pictured in my head.
Great job. Please write more. Soon.
-Leya
P.S. The chapter was beautifully long.
I absolutely loved this chapter. Poor, poor K... ^^ It was very well written and all the scenes you've described were pictured in my head.
Great job. Please write more. Soon.
-Leya
P.S. The chapter was beautifully long.
3/12/2008 c4 24lavariel
Nice. I like the idea of a smexxy photoshoot with NG and K-san watching. These two are just so adorable together. Yay~ update soon!
24lavarielNice. I like the idea of a smexxy photoshoot with NG and K-san watching. These two are just so adorable together. Yay~ update soon!
3/12/2008 c4 37AlexJanna
I feel that you should deffinitly put some well deserved tohma/K smut! hell i never thought but this is hot. continue, we're waiting!
37AlexJannaI feel that you should deffinitly put some well deserved tohma/K smut! hell i never thought but this is hot. continue, we're waiting!
3/12/2008 c4 5l.h.o.o.q
(Whistle)
Well, you're right, it certainly is a different style. I thought it was funny. I mean, people think Yuki Eiri has a bad temper, when he has to do something he doesn't want to, but Tohma has the same miniscule tantrums. ;)
Puppies and zippers, yeah, I've seen those sorts of photoshoots before. Sad thing was I coul really, really imagine it. Tsk tsk, K-san thinks he owns the place. Or other things. Anyway, I should go. Before I giggle. Thanks for updating!
5l.h.o.o.q(Whistle)
Well, you're right, it certainly is a different style. I thought it was funny. I mean, people think Yuki Eiri has a bad temper, when he has to do something he doesn't want to, but Tohma has the same miniscule tantrums. ;)
Puppies and zippers, yeah, I've seen those sorts of photoshoots before. Sad thing was I coul really, really imagine it. Tsk tsk, K-san thinks he owns the place. Or other things. Anyway, I should go. Before I giggle. Thanks for updating!
2/13/2008 c3 xRainbowVeinsx
I love you're story so far! :]
And you **en rock. ^_^
I hope you update real soon.
I love you're story so far! :]
And you **en rock. ^_^
I hope you update real soon.
2/6/2008 c3 lavariel
Aw, I really hope you continue this. It's such a sweet story. Tohma's being all bratty and stuff. So adorable. Nice to see someone who also likes my favorite Gravi pairing. :)
Please update if you can. ^^
Aw, I really hope you continue this. It's such a sweet story. Tohma's being all bratty and stuff. So adorable. Nice to see someone who also likes my favorite Gravi pairing. :)
Please update if you can. ^^
2/3/2008 c3 8Kerrz
I love this! It's great. I've never been a big fan of this couple, but you've seriously made me love them! I love you K! :D
- hope you continue soon! :b
8KerrzI love this! It's great. I've never been a big fan of this couple, but you've seriously made me love them! I love you K! :D
- hope you continue soon! :b
1/12/2008 c3 36Koshi Sekisen
Cute!
I'm really starting to like your Tohma-centered fanfiction...
Adding you to Author Alert list, BTW!
36Koshi SekisenCute!
I'm really starting to like your Tohma-centered fanfiction...
Adding you to Author Alert list, BTW!
1/12/2008 c3 6Sarahfreak
Fluff is good from all the other Tohma is the devil incarnate stories in this fandom...Tohma is indeed very cute it seems in the morning...am waiting for your next chapter! Loved it!
6SarahfreakFluff is good from all the other Tohma is the devil incarnate stories in this fandom...Tohma is indeed very cute it seems in the morning...am waiting for your next chapter! Loved it!
1/5/2008 c3 30Leya
Your Tohma is not only cute - he's adorable^^ I never saw him as fluffy and nearly childlike as you described him but I really like it. And K is just...K. I love him when he is all protective and decisive towards Tohma.
Please write more.
-Leya
30LeyaYour Tohma is not only cute - he's adorable^^ I never saw him as fluffy and nearly childlike as you described him but I really like it. And K is just...K. I love him when he is all protective and decisive towards Tohma.
Please write more.
-Leya
1/5/2008 c3 24lavariel
Aw, so cuute! I love this pairing but there are so few fanfics about them! I'm so glad you wrote this one. It's going to my fave stories list! Update soon, 'kay? Tohma-chan is so adorable when he's fussing about work and K-san is cute when he's acting mother-hen. Harhar. :)
24lavarielAw, so cuute! I love this pairing but there are so few fanfics about them! I'm so glad you wrote this one. It's going to my fave stories list! Update soon, 'kay? Tohma-chan is so adorable when he's fussing about work and K-san is cute when he's acting mother-hen. Harhar. :)
12/14/2007 c2 1ToriTheInvader
I liked this story. The pairing is rather unusual and you have a good way of expressing what is going on. I hope you make more chapters. ^-^
1ToriTheInvaderI liked this story. The pairing is rather unusual and you have a good way of expressing what is going on. I hope you make more chapters. ^-^