for Help Elsewhere11/28/2007 c2 
5Salt Sauce Paans
Wow...you are a really good writer! I really like this story..and I usually don't like Tohma/K fics but this one is really good! Great job can't wait for more!
5Salt Sauce PaansWow...you are a really good writer! I really like this story..and I usually don't like Tohma/K fics but this one is really good! Great job can't wait for more!
11/26/2007 c1 21Ayame99
My attention is grabbed! You write wonderfully and I love the real-like thoughts in K's head. I feel sorry for Tohma here, its an interesting angle for him.
Also, I love how it seems you're taking your time to develop a plot. So far it's moving real nice. Enjoy your story, I await patiently for more.
The part that made me laugh-out-loud: that chick with the god-awful headband
LOL! That's hilarious.
YAY! K will take care of you Tohma!
21Ayame99My attention is grabbed! You write wonderfully and I love the real-like thoughts in K's head. I feel sorry for Tohma here, its an interesting angle for him.
Also, I love how it seems you're taking your time to develop a plot. So far it's moving real nice. Enjoy your story, I await patiently for more.
The part that made me laugh-out-loud: that chick with the god-awful headband
LOL! That's hilarious.
YAY! K will take care of you Tohma!
11/25/2007 c1 12Irken PopTart
...You are my new best friend, and I think that I absoloutely love you.
Beautiful writing, and a pairing I've longed to see for quite a while now.
12Irken PopTart...You are my new best friend, and I think that I absoloutely love you.
Beautiful writing, and a pairing I've longed to see for quite a while now.