for Liar8/5/2011 c4 
6Ms.BloodyLove
omg this story is awesome i hope you update soon, I really hate Kasha but Kruser seems interesting and obviously he has and interest in Allen :D
6Ms.BloodyLoveomg this story is awesome i hope you update soon, I really hate Kasha but Kruser seems interesting and obviously he has and interest in Allen :D
5/20/2011 c1 RuneRenXD
I am really enjoying this so far, but when do you think that you will update?
it's been a while now and I want to know what happens next ^^;
I don't like Kasha, but that was intentional on your part...
I am really enjoying this so far, but when do you think that you will update?
it's been a while now and I want to know what happens next ^^;
I don't like Kasha, but that was intentional on your part...
12/26/2010 c4 1DescendantoftheRose
Your story is addicting! I love your writing style, the way you describe a setting or character is absolutely beautiful! Can't wait until you update!
1DescendantoftheRoseYour story is addicting! I love your writing style, the way you describe a setting or character is absolutely beautiful! Can't wait until you update!
10/16/2010 c4 Runeren
Kasha is showing such arrogance and disrespect to Allen.
Sigh... just shows that women can be so annoying(Even though I'm a woman myself)
You do a very good job at showing that Kasha's looks are only skin deep and that her personality is very crude and wretched.
You also do a very good job at hinting that Kruser has a very fishy and has a slight interest and a hit of lust towards Allen. I bet that Kruser is going to assault the moyashi or perhaps drug him. You may even make Kruser the "hotspot" or the cause for the so-called "curse" the villagers mentioned earlier in the chapter.
And most likely, Kruser is going to strengthen the bond between Kanda and Allen, Make them stop denying themselves to their feelings.
God forbid that Kasha gets together with Kruser. She's too much of filth to get anyone. I hope that her personality catches up with her.
Have you noticed most of the characters you have but into the story that isn’t in the original story D. Gray-Man start with a ‘K’ (Kasha, Kruser)
Hehe^^
I hope that you will update to story soon. (#^^#)
Kasha is showing such arrogance and disrespect to Allen.
Sigh... just shows that women can be so annoying(Even though I'm a woman myself)
You do a very good job at showing that Kasha's looks are only skin deep and that her personality is very crude and wretched.
You also do a very good job at hinting that Kruser has a very fishy and has a slight interest and a hit of lust towards Allen. I bet that Kruser is going to assault the moyashi or perhaps drug him. You may even make Kruser the "hotspot" or the cause for the so-called "curse" the villagers mentioned earlier in the chapter.
And most likely, Kruser is going to strengthen the bond between Kanda and Allen, Make them stop denying themselves to their feelings.
God forbid that Kasha gets together with Kruser. She's too much of filth to get anyone. I hope that her personality catches up with her.
Have you noticed most of the characters you have but into the story that isn’t in the original story D. Gray-Man start with a ‘K’ (Kasha, Kruser)
Hehe^^
I hope that you will update to story soon. (#^^#)
10/6/2010 c4 14Suki Doll
D:
continue
Please
This story is unusually interesting. I thought I would hate it because of Kasha but because of her scarce appearances, it actually makes her seem fairly enjoyable. Though I question her perpendicular personality.
And this Mr. Falls sir... interesting... *devious smirk*
Hope the next chapter will get things moving and exciting!
14Suki DollD:
continue
Please
This story is unusually interesting. I thought I would hate it because of Kasha but because of her scarce appearances, it actually makes her seem fairly enjoyable. Though I question her perpendicular personality.
And this Mr. Falls sir... interesting... *devious smirk*
Hope the next chapter will get things moving and exciting!
9/4/2010 c4 Xxkawaii-samaxX
ARGHHHHHHHHHH UPDATEEE PLZZZZZZZZZZZzz
ARGHHHHHHHHHH UPDATEEE PLZZZZZZZZZZZzz
8/2/2010 c4 1TheYullenLover
OMFG! you updated *singsong voice* I am soooo glad~-~
The new chapter is awesome, Kruser seems like a really intresting person...
Please continue your good work!
1TheYullenLoverOMFG! you updated *singsong voice* I am soooo glad~-~
The new chapter is awesome, Kruser seems like a really intresting person...
Please continue your good work!
8/2/2010 c4 TheYullenLover
OMG! you finally updated! This is absolutely one of my favo stories, and I am sooooo glad that you continued!
I think the new chapter is great, Kruser seems like an intresting person _
Please continue your good work^_^
OMG! you finally updated! This is absolutely one of my favo stories, and I am sooooo glad that you continued!
I think the new chapter is great, Kruser seems like an intresting person _
Please continue your good work^_^
7/30/2010 c4 5MayIFall
YES! I am so glad you updated this fic. It's a drama that I actually look forward to read. Lol. I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh, the yummy (hopefully copious amounts of) drama.
5MayIFallYES! I am so glad you updated this fic. It's a drama that I actually look forward to read. Lol. I can't wait for the next chapter. Oh, the yummy (hopefully copious amounts of) drama.
7/26/2010 c4 4SeikaDragon
OH... this story will be an unexpected turn. And this Kruser Fall had an singular/unique attraction to Allen.
I wonder if Kruser will be threat for them and don't mean danger for the moyashi's heart broken?
4SeikaDragonOH... this story will be an unexpected turn. And this Kruser Fall had an singular/unique attraction to Allen.
I wonder if Kruser will be threat for them and don't mean danger for the moyashi's heart broken?
7/26/2010 c4 Natillia
OH LORD YES! FINALLY! AN UPDATE! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR AGES!
Mr. Fall huh...
seems like a nice guy
is it me or I feel that he has something with Allen...? (it must be me)
OH LORD YES! FINALLY! AN UPDATE! I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR AGES!
Mr. Fall huh...
seems like a nice guy
is it me or I feel that he has something with Allen...? (it must be me)