for Gundam SEED Destiny: Invasion3/1/2008 c4 bloodyknight85
'Damn... A miscarriage... That's not good... But we see that Zack came at the right time... He is an alien after all... Zack is...'
Keep up the good work, dude... Update sooN!
'Damn... A miscarriage... That's not good... But we see that Zack came at the right time... He is an alien after all... Zack is...'
Keep up the good work, dude... Update sooN!
3/1/2008 c3 bloodyknight85
'Londo Bell... Why do i have the feeling that i hear this name before? I guess the Knight lose his life protecting Cagalli and the others... Salutes to him...'
Keep up the good work, dude... Update sooN!
'Londo Bell... Why do i have the feeling that i hear this name before? I guess the Knight lose his life protecting Cagalli and the others... Salutes to him...'
Keep up the good work, dude... Update sooN!
12/9/2007 c2 bloodyknight85
'Oh man... Is that it? He's gone... Just like that... I guess even that girl from who knows where still cannot save him... But i guess he did what he is supposed to do over there... That is to stop the attack from those aliens... at the cost of his life... Why is he only the one fighting here? Or is it that you didn't bother to write them... All in all, is this the end of this story? Let's hope this is not the case...'
Keep up the good work, dude... Update sooN!
'Oh man... Is that it? He's gone... Just like that... I guess even that girl from who knows where still cannot save him... But i guess he did what he is supposed to do over there... That is to stop the attack from those aliens... at the cost of his life... Why is he only the one fighting here? Or is it that you didn't bother to write them... All in all, is this the end of this story? Let's hope this is not the case...'
Keep up the good work, dude... Update sooN!
12/8/2007 c1 bloodyknight85
'AH! The Scrin are back again! Hey wait a minute... This is the world of Gundam SEED... Not the world of Tiberium Wars... Wait, is there aliens from that world as well? Well, if you consider Coordinators as an alien species, may be we have one... On the other hand, i guess a really alien invasion is coming... The Bitonians, huh! I guess they are out for Zack... But why? Does he have something that they want? What secrets will be revealed? It's time for the next chapter dude...'
Keep up the good work, dude... Update sooN!
'AH! The Scrin are back again! Hey wait a minute... This is the world of Gundam SEED... Not the world of Tiberium Wars... Wait, is there aliens from that world as well? Well, if you consider Coordinators as an alien species, may be we have one... On the other hand, i guess a really alien invasion is coming... The Bitonians, huh! I guess they are out for Zack... But why? Does he have something that they want? What secrets will be revealed? It's time for the next chapter dude...'
Keep up the good work, dude... Update sooN!
12/7/2007 c1 
8Milisante
It's good! And seems to be interesting.
But, I think, It's better to make it a little more lively^^
Go on :)
8MilisanteIt's good! And seems to be interesting.
But, I think, It's better to make it a little more lively^^
Go on :)
12/6/2007 c1 1The WayFarer 2000
Not bad; shows promise. Some typos here and there.
You used the word "then" too many times when describing Zack's actions in cooking.
1The WayFarer 2000Not bad; shows promise. Some typos here and there.
You used the word "then" too many times when describing Zack's actions in cooking.