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10/8/2011 c1 332NeonZangetsu
Ehh...not bad?
1/5/2009 c1 9FFFX
I agree with this idea... meaning I had this diddy once, but unlike you I never actually started writing it... that's a lie, I couldn't write it without making Ichigo either unrealisticly not hollow or an evil mofo who'd eat his little sisters if he was given the chance... so... um...

Yeah, longer chapters is probably a good idea. More detail can't hurt... hm... PM me if you ever need any help or anything. I'll be glad to help.

PS: Whole chapter author notes are technically against the rules... sans a few instances where such things would be let slide, like a story's cancelation or the addition of a sequel story.

PS2: Your profile is so long it makes my computer lag. No joke. Maybe it'd be best to take the hundred laws of anime off it...

PS3: Reviewed Fuujin first, and it turns out you do know how to use paragraphs... um... why didn't you there?
9/30/2008 c1 24Paper Bullet
Oh snaps I found you.

Nice start (:

-Ami
2/20/2008 c1 spedclass
Awesome chapter keep up the good work and update soon!
1/25/2008 c1 4amerie-san
hello there...

just passed by to read your new story...

is this one set between soul society arc?

hmm...interesting...^_^

oh and some minor errors if you dont mind, Byakuya's name that is ..

take care..

love,

amerie

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